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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: sanah12

Can't find any right words to describe how beautifully u have started off with this story..
The concept is soo beautiful holding hundreds of deep meanings and feelings...
Loved the whole chapter starting from the name which so beautiful as well the banner is really awesome!
Asad's character is very strong and powerful and really good as well! He has everything but there's no love there and our dearest zoya will bring that in his life.. He was already so enchanted by her melodious voice..
I felt sorry 4 dilshaad hope she returns back soon and I really wish to see dil + zoe's bonding..
Pooor zoya my heart broke for her, she is orphan and blind but I know soon asad will feel her life with colors like she will with happiness and love..
Do continue asap
thanks 4 the pm..


Thank you so much Sanah, I really appreciate your feedback

Lots of love 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

Sis, I am speechless. I am overwhelmed with what you have done. I mean I have had dedications earlier which I felt honored about, but a full SS... That is a first and I know only you could do something like this. A simple Thank you definitely doesn't do justice to what you have done for me, but thats all that i can say right now

And i want to add

I am so happy that we have connected over this Forum and can't thank you enough to have taken that first step which has helped us build this beautiful bond we now share. I Love You so so much.

And it is only because of you I have found three more sisters who are just as beautiful people as you are. Divya, Rarepearl and Vini, I love you guys too, bahut saara.

Divya thankyou for the beautiful banner. Its perfect and I love it

Vini, thanks for helping in the concept. I really want to read this one.

And Rarepearl I love you too cause you love KSG and are as crazy about him as I am 😉 😆 Kidding, I love you cause the little that I know you, you come across as a warm and beautiful human. I want to know you more.

I love you all. Mwah.

Now the update, Sis I am so intrigued by this concept.

She is a blind teacher at the school his mum had made in his fathers name. He visits it just once a year. How these two meet again and how they get together is definitely going to be a rollercoaster ride for the two of them and I am so ready to take it with them.

The way he stops just listening to her voice and the song as if telling him to let go and live life... WOW.

The shock he gets that she IS blind was another treat to read. I could almost imagine what his expressions would be like.

Loved it Sis. Thank you for this beautiful gift. I love you so much. And this one is for Team Angel



ChocoBerry, what do I say to that...not sure 😳

Thank you so so much.

Am so glad you liked the first chapter. And concept.


Love you dearly


Mwah 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

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Wow!! Sami di.. Concept is beautiful..

Loved how Dilshad built a school in loving memory of her husband ❤️
Uff someone explain to Asad that work is not everything in life..
Poor Dilshad always waited for son but couldn't take it anymore..
He still didn't change when she left to Paris.. 😡
Loved Zoya's entry.. 😳
Hahaha... I love Mrs. Braganza 😆
Asad you don't shout at everyone especially without knowing about them.. 😡.. Poor Zoya..
Zoya's bond with kids was cute... 😳
Thankfully Asad came to know the truth about her through Mrs. Braganza.. 😃
Feel guilty Asad.. You deserve it.. 😒

p.s.Thank you for the dedication... 😳🤗

Update soon di.. 🤗


Hey Picasso

Thank You so much sweetheart for linking the concept, first chapter but most importantly the beautiful banner

Love u

🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey,

Am back again. I thought taking time off would give me the proper words to describe this part but nopes, I still am speechless about it.
Okay I'll begin with the title. Its so beautiful.. says a lot in just three words. Vini, its fantastic. The banner, which is absolutely fabulous. Divs you've done an amazing work at it. Seeing it I had an idea that it was connected with music & it is.
The first part itself has done a great job at explaining Asad's personality & the reasons to it. He most definitely is a wonderful & loving son, that is why he put all his efforts in just keeping up the name his father had built with his hard work after his demise. Asad was very young at that age but he didn't turn away from the responsibilities falling on his shoulders.
I felt sad for Dilshad, losing the love of your life isn't really a good thing. It did cause her trauma. But her thought of continuing something her husband loved is really nice. The music institution is providing not only an out for feelings through music for those who are alone or under privileged to enjoy the pleasures of it. Its giving them a chance to build a future on it too.
Well I can understand that Asad doesn't fancy music much or maybe he never allowed himself the luxury of enjoying it. But I guess the song sung by Zoe has moved him. He did feel as if the words were for him, asking him to let lose & live.
You know it didn't occur to me yesterday, but right now that I'm thinking about it, I am amazed by the choice of song too. I've not heard the song before but the lyrics were really soulful. Coming from Zoya, unbelievable. Someone who's living life without the most important sense, all alone from the very beginning, is inspiring others to forget their sadness & give a chance to life. Sis, you're too good. ⭐️. Seriously.
Okay to be honest it never crossed my mind once that Zoe couldn't see until you mentioned it. I am amazed by her spirit, energy & willingness to help others around her. An Angel.
You know my heart broke on hearing this. I could understand how it would have struck Asad too. He didn't say that on purpose, even he was fooled by her appearance.
I guess Asad's not going to forget her heavenly voice nor her innocent face, anytime soon. Please update soon.
Choco... I'm touched by your gesture. It's so very sweet of you to do it.
I've got Sis to thank for this. Sis, I honestly can't thank you enough for including me in your circle & giving me three more sisters. Its been few days only but it doesn't seem so to me. It feels we've been together for ages. Earlier I was only thankful to God for letting me have you but now I have three more reasons to thank Him. I hope you know, I love you loads. I really do!
Vini, I've known you for a while through your heart touching stories & know you're a sweetheart. I'm more than glad to know you personally too. I hope you know how much I admire you & love you.
Divs, what I've known of you was from your replies on Sis & Vini's threads but its a pleasure knowing you as a friend. I'm thankful to you for taking me in so easily. Love ya!
Choco.. I want to tell you that Vini is on our side at being a crazy KSGian. So the three of us can rock n go on a roll soon. Divs & Sis, r you willing to join us?😆 Okay this apart, I'm humbled by your gesture & looking forward to knowing more of you too. How much ever I've seen is enough to tell me you're lovely. Love you too.
Team Angel; I just hope we all stay together forever.


Hey Sis

Another comment I am unable to reply back to as I lose words to express my happiness and gratitude.

Thank u so much.

You will always be a part of my life, love u lots 🤗

You don't need to thank me Nim, am glad you and ChocoBerry have joined in

And no me and Picasso will not be joining in your craziness, three crazy girls are more than enough 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Congrats for starting a new story on Asya
Chapter 1 was awesome👏
Asad had to bear the responsibility of business after his father's death and also have to take care his mother who is depressed... I guess he had a tough childhood
Loved the song selection Jee Le Zara👍🏼 One of my favorite song
Zoya is blind😲 no wonder she didn't answer back when Asad scolded her
Looking forward to read more!
Continue soon!
Thanks for the pm😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
nice story
beautiful concept😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Res, OMG !! I'm so late !!
Unres !! 🤗

Aapi, do u know how much i love u ? 😳 ever since u completed Broken, i wanted another work from u and now... I just cant stand in place knowing taht u strted a new story with another mind-blowing concept and knowing that u would be updating this one regularly is the cherry on the top !!

*sigh* i'm reading this part for the umpteenth time, but i still can't get enough ! its so ... ! ❤️

Coming to the update 😳
Hmm... So seems like Asad drowned himself into his work that he completely forgot the world around him 😕 Rashid is even more successful now, ab bas bhi karo aur apni life enjoy karo ! 😳
Mrs. Braganza seems like a nice lady ! 😃
And oh !! Again !! One of my favourite song !! but seriously the song seemed to be wrote for them !! 👏 it was the perfect choice !! ❤️ because it suited both their situations ! and seriously, the 'Aa hum dono jee bhar ke ro le' almost made me tear up ! 😭 loved it ! Loved it !! Loved it !! ❤️
Ruby was funny 😆
Awww Zoya came in front of his car and he became rude
Poor Zoya, even though he hurted her uncounsciously, being insulted for what hurts u the most is not something fair 😭
At last Mrs. Braganza told him about Zoya and he rzalized what blunder he made !

*sigh* cant wait for saturday to come !! absolutely loved it Aapi !! ❤️

But not more than u, love u my darling Badi Aapi !! 🤗 mwah !! ❤️


Hey Bano


Thank you so much my sweet little Jaan

Am so glad you liked it and what better compliment than that you are read it over again.

Hope you will like the direction in which is goes

Love you more little Api
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98

Today, just let me finish getting back to everyone's comments then will update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: Alai123

Congrats for starting a new story on Asya

Chapter 1 was awesome👏
Asad had to bear the responsibility of business after his father's death and also have to take care his mother who is depressed... I guess he had a tough childhood
Loved the song selection Jee Le Zara👍🏼 One of my favorite song
Zoya is blind😲 no wonder she didn't answer back when Asad scolded her
Looking forward to read more!
Continue soon!
Thanks for the pm😉


Thank you so much 😊

Am so glad you liked it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cale

nice story
beautiful concept😊😊


Thank you 😊

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