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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

Reserved!



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Unreserved!


Everything between AsYa has finally settled into perfect place for two major events to take place:

1. Their wedding and;

2. The Dad revelation.

That is after Zoya concludes AAK is indeed the best "boyfriend".

YES the major two parts of the story pending, but not before AsYa have had their share of dating 😆

A tranquil chapter, after the initial intensity.


"As the hurt and anger took over he looked down at her," Stop crying!" he said in a menacingly low tone. She looked up, staring back angrily, "Stop bossing around Asad. You've got this on yourself. I am hurt and I will .."

"Enough!" he yelled, making her flinch in fear. Clutching her shoulders he held her firmly against himself," Listen to me now!" "Let go off me Asad," Zoya struggled to move out of his hold, pushing him away, hitting on his shoulders.

But she was no match to Asad's physical strength and he had her pinned down on the bed with his enormous self, towering down on her. He watched her angrily even as she purposely looked the other way and continued to cry.

"Will you just stop crying?" He barked."



"Cupping her face on one side he made her look at him forcefully. Holding her firmly he neared her lips," I have ways to make you shut up."

Her eyes darted to him in alarm and she thrust her arms to shove him away," That's all you can do right? Use your power to get your way?" And she turned away again, scrunching her eyes shut."


Okay, only AAK can make dominating appealing to a feminist. I dazed out there for a moment. ☺️ I'm weird I know, but I really adored the concept you had going there in relation to how he dealt with Zoya's reaction to those documents. Her mom is now a profound part of their lives - overwhelming gesture.


Asad's anger and outburst always kind of entrances us haina? 😆 It was with good intention and to get some sense into his furious wife to be's head 😆

Glad you found the intent nice enough 😊

""But all of this, so easily? I don't want anything spoon fed, or ready to eat on the plate Asad. I want to feel like I earned it," Zoya explained, hoping not to hurt him. She was touched, and that was an understatement. But the journey from Farooqui to Mrs Khan was itself so naturally unnerving, suddenly being the head of his business and having so much claim made her feel weighed down.

"You can do what you like Zoya. If you don't want to work at Dilshad constructions yet. Don't. Go have a taste of whatever you want. Internship, job, whatever experience you want. When you think you've done enough, and you want to join us, you can," Asad stated, playing gently with her hair that lay on her shoulders."



""So don't be. We're in this together, just remember that. You said you are with me in everything I do. In all the highs and lows, sharing my life in every way right?" Zoya nodded," Then you share everything, my home, my name, my stress, my happiness, and now my work too, and with that comes authority," he says, his mouth close to her ears.

"And responsibility," Zoya added.

Asad nodded," Yes. But when you're ready for it. For now, have fun trying your bridal wear. Spending some money, putting on some weight to show off the marital bliss and enjoy motherhood," he rambled happily, kissing her earlobe and rocking her in his arms."



The entire appeasing scene was really very wonderful. Loved the conversation about Zoe's options now that she is a shareholder, when these two communicate, it's always a charming read, the wit, sarcasm and intimacy just intensify the delight of it all.

AH I am glad you like that. I love when they talk. I love to write realistic conversations and moments as much as the more dramatic and sensitive ones. I wish AsYa got those in the show too.


Not sure if I'm reading too much into this, it could just perhaps hold no significance but I think justification of why a man who loves control doesn't own it may follow.


It may 😆


When Aahana cried and they did go to her immediately I was just as agitated as her. 😡 🤣 Playing hide and seek with her was lovely, Asad's reaction to her antics were so true to his character and imaginable, wish we were afforded that on the show.

I wish we got that in the show. I really do. But sadly neither do our creatives want to try something different nor do the viewers who get trp's


The oiling hair scene was overwhelmingly beautiful, the contentedness, tranquility and emotions they both experienced were endearing.


Look forward to the courting adventure and Asad's creativity, I adore "brazen" Asad, his just captivating. The intimacy and declarations throughout the chapter were enthralling.


I hope you enjoy the completely naughty and gradually transforming Asad over the next few updates, before the bump in the road.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tashie

Hope things have gotten better in your personal life.

Awesome update! Loved the way they talked out their differences.


Thank you so much 😊 they have.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update Ankitha.. loved the challenge and Asad accepting it and the way they have gone to boat house.. cool thinking over there...
Apologies.. I hardly find time these days to login to IF..though late sometimes .. I definately read the updates..

Thanks for the wonderful udpate.. and plz don't mind if I have missed out commenting for earlier updates.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago




So glad you liked the update 😳 Misunderstandings are good sometimes, they only bring you closer. Thanks for always commenting 😃



I am so glad you feel that about Aahana, she seems so close to me too 😆 I am glad you enjoyed the update.



Thanks 😊 And true. You realize the value of things only when you lose them.



I am glad you liked the update. Poor AsYa no one gives them attention because of Aahana 😆



Thanks so so much glad you liked the update 😃




You'll get more than naughty and their relation will grow and grow 😊



AWW that's a perfect song for them, They barely fight 😆 And fights are good, always bring them closer. Thanks so much 😃



Thanks 😊 so glad you enjoyed.



Thanks so much 😃


You'll get more of all that in the next few updates. Hope you like it just as much.



Thanks so much dear.


So glad you found all the aspects enjoyable to read. Aahana and writing her moments are my personal favourite too 😆 I am really happy you liked all of it.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91


Finally we got an updt
Amu will b very happy as me😆
So we guessed right those were Property papers😉
Zoya Misunderstood & Asad explained her evrything😊
There scene was actually great loved it⭐️👏
Dillu Naj scene was very light 😃

Dilshad chuckled," Meri sabse samajhdaar bachi hai. Itni choti hai but she knows when to press the right buttons."

Najma scowled," Ammi that's not fair. You're always biased to Aahana. Mai bhi samajhdaar hun okay?"

" Woh toh tum ho hi beta. But you're of that age. She's just a baby- I can't believe you're jealous of a one year old Najma," Dilshad laughed, patting her head playfully.

"Too much favoritism in this house," Najma brooded and walked away.


Than came our Sunshine Anu❤️ awe d way they were playing hide & seek poor thing didn't knew how 2 play🤗 & when it was her turn she used her tears 2 make Asad come out of his hiding spot🤣

Asad and Zoya frolicked like little kids in their living room, playing with Aahana. Their little girl had to be pleased for all the while she had been left ignored. Plus it was because of her that they had reconciled somehow. The bubble bath had been fun. And now they were playing a game of hide and seek which Aahana didn't entirely understand.

When it was her turn to hide she would merely go and stand at a corner where she was visible, unable to decipher what exactly it was that she was meant to do. And when any of her parents did manage to find her, she would wail as if she had been hit. Asad and Zoya would pretend to not see her and call out to her. Then finally after she was tired hiding somewhere she'd gurgle and let herself be found.


"Mi.." Aahana spouted in her usual sweet tone. "BU," she yelled.

"Let's go and get her," Asad sympathized with his daughter.

"We're playing a damn game, let her have fun," Zoya shushed him.

"There's no one else in the room she'll start crying Zoya."

"She won't, she's not a cry baby like you," Zoya taunted, her lips raised in a smirk.

Asad cocked his eyebrow, about to respond when Aahana started to whimper and call out for them, "Dekha! You just don't listen to me. She's started to cry now," Asad pointed, half in worry and half in glory of being proven right.

He dashed out of hiding towards Aahana who stood standing at the center or the living room, staring wide eyed, as if awaiting for someone to pop out of oblivion. As soon as she saw Asad she jumped twice and began to gurgle, stopping him in his march towards her.

"You little minx!" Asad gasped realizing she had fooled them by her pretense.

"She just knows perfectly how to make you dance on her little finger. And you play right into her hands," Zoya remarked, standing with her hands on her hips.


Than d family scene was also very well written👏
Zoya wants them 2 go on dates & do GF BF stuff b4 marrying
She asked him 2 kiss her infront of every1 & Asad agreed 😲
Loved d whole updt Anku😛
Thank u so much deary🤗
It was worth d wait👍🏼
Loved Anu & Asya❤️



Super glad you liked the update 😃 Hope you enjoy the recent one too.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rajsmi

Very cute update...loved their game with Ahana...half his company to her- that was sweet and mature on Asad's part since she has no one from her family! Looking forward to their dates :-) 7 days!


Thanks so much 😊

Asad is a giving man, and he would do anything to make her feel secure because she has no one to back her.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Asad made Zoya a 51% sharholder. Well Zoya misunderstood but I was sure he would have a genuine reasoning to it! 😃


I loved the way they sorted out their issues. ❤️

The family time was cute! 😳 Najma jealous of Aanu and Asad jealous of Zoya! 😆 How cute! 😆

Dating eh? 😉 This is gonna be fun! 😃

"Kiss me in front of everybody," she smirked expecting him to fall back on his words. But his quiet, intimidating expression unarms her, "Okay."

"Okay?"

Asad merely shrugged," Yeah okay. I'd love to."

"You'd love to? But I was joking," Zoya faltered, that would be embarrassing.

"I wasn't." Asad asserted, kissed her cheek


This is soo worth the wait and I really want Asad to kiss Zoya infront of the family!

Continue sooner and ILY! ❤️

- Mrina <3


Thanks so much Mrin 🤗 glad you like the update and the roothna manana 😆

Hmmm dating should be interesting, hope you enjoy 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty


HUM AAGGAAYYEEE 😎
AWH AANNUU I WILL EAT HERRR ❤️

It was sad ki Zoya mis interrupted Asad's intentions.. 😭
but I dont blame her cause WHAT HURT, AFTER ALL HURT HER.. 😊
Asad aur usske neik neik irade
And the way they cuddle and kiss as they make up
I LOVE READING THOSE PORTIONS THE MOST TOH
Hide and Seek with Me n Mrs Khan with Ahana 😳
Jellu fish Asad 😳 😆
AND THE CHALLENGE ❤️ ☺️

Awaiting for the next part ❤️ Update when you feel fine okay? 🤗


U KNOW ME




I feel like your emoticons are way better than my story also 😆 should just post those instead of the updates 😛

Thank you so so much Ankie. Glad you like all this nonsense I write readers like you are such an amazing inspiration.

Thank you 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.

omg sooo many things happened and I havent been reading :(

I have already told u how my college is keeping busy soo dont mind when I dont reply. I miss your work I miss talking to u like we use to till last month :( I need holidayss again :(

But I promise imma keep reading this even if I have lots of parts to catch up il still keep reading and will take out time when and how I can. And if not commenting here il msg u or tell u whenever we talk. I promise :*

These last two parts were sooo amazing!! I love how their relation is maturing. I love how they are soo much in love and respect each other. Respect their decisions too..

Absolutely loved everything!!! I loveee how its getting deep <3

Updateee soon now!!! :*


AWW nps Ana. I know you're busy. But do keep reading and keep giving the feedback. I always await it. Thanks so much 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tanu3579

hey... sorry fr delay this time too... was just a bit busy...

i love the causal, light conversation they hv after all the misunderstandings r sorted... him asking her nt to fire him, she mentioning abt being used to his anger nw, n tht at times he seems to need help :), the photoshop skill of zoya, n its amazing use tht asad pts out :) :)

just too gd .. especially the photoshop one 😆

asad n najma being true siblings.. :) .. both cribbing abt being ignored 😛, n yet.. both loving it equally :) :)

the hiding... was i guess.. expected 😉 ... n seriously zoya... even i didnt knw bachhce aisa karte hain 😆

n the whole dating is going to b fun to read... i m sure :) :) ...
i m wondering... wht wud zoya do... whn asad wud seriously fulfil the just-fr-fun-n-teasing challenge zoya put him up to :) :)


Thank you thank you 😳 I am glad you like the humor. Its hard for me to come up with anything instinctively so I am glad what I wrote came across as was its intention 😆

Asad WILL complete the challenge. Not just now or that soon but he will surprise her.


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