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karishma

@shanakyasharan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

missed ur updates!!!

loved it! their date their moments n ahana

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aumigi

@aumigi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Good to have you back. Glad you feeling better. Loved the carefree Asad. Cannot wait for the next date 😊

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scarletmalik

@scarletmalik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

awsome romantic update👏

loved it❤️

fell in love with this boyfriend AAK😳

loved aanu nd the cute teasing session by dilshad nd nazma😊

aww..such a romantic date

continue soon

nd thnx 4r pm

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#164

.res

unres ..

well ...update is so sweet ki ..i just can tell how much happy iam ..

b it the phone convo n their date n aanu ..everything is so perfect ..

i so loved phone convo ...they deserve all this happiness..

watching them like this ..u might b knowing how an asya fan will feel😃..

i just wanted 2 tell u that the way u describe emotions n the romance ...im a big big fan of ur writing ..

i love d way u write bass..

n i saw ur gifs in qh creations thread ..usually i dnt go to creation gallery bt ..gal ur so talented ..👏👏 the way u make edits ,gifs n write ...mashallah ...

k i vl quote my fav parts in this update ..

A - It's almost midnight and so, just 7 days to our wedding. And Day 1 of our official dating period? - Your new Boyfriend. aww this made me 😆😆😆

A - True. But still. i like this side of him ..zoe is so lucky

Zoya stirred in her sleep, feeling his lips on her skin, as if a feather had brushed over her forehead. She smiled, but didn't open her eyes, wishing to be in the blissful state for longer. She felt Asad get up from besides her and heard soft murmurs. Assuming it was the father and daughter together, she smiled her eyes still shut. Sighing deeply she turned towards the crib and opened her eyes slightly.

Asad was sitting on the floor besides the crib, holding Aahana close to his chest, his nose digging in her neck, taking in her baby scent that she knew he loved most.

the whole scene is so so so beautiful ki ...read it fr 3 times ...i dnt want 2 go 2 next

line ..bass want 2 enjoy this moment as long as i can 😳

" Wake up sweetheart. Coffee is getting cold," Asad mumbled softly.😳 im sooo jealous now ..bt i love zoee tooo

I love you for what you are, for what you're not and all that you're going to be..

Wear this for me and make it more beautiful, as beautiful as your soul is.

Asad (Fiance, Boyfriend) ....i love his notes...

aww ..can i just kiss aanu ..she clapped seeing her mom😉 ...

n he pecked her in front of his family ..omg he changed a lot ...😳

ok jeep me going ...kuch serious baat hoying .after that i loved teasing session 😳 n bloat club...ab mai kya bolu ..watching them like this ...its a wonderful feeling ..

im loving this side of AAK ..ASYA deserve this happiness..i want 2 c zoe treating him like d way he treated ..my baby deserves all love n caring from his gal ..

ok enough of my blabbering ..update soon pleeejjj Ankita

Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago

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potternerd

@potternerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

The update couldn't have been better !!!

Most amazing date ever

Simple yet amazing

I love how you write usual/normal stuff with such beauty and exuberance 👏

Loved it very much 😊⭐️

The texting at night...the breakfast in bed moment...orchids..perfect dress for perfect date...oh the jeep !!!!

Everything was marvellous 😊

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

tht was cute :) ... the carefree n up to the challenge asad... n the shocked n enjoying zoya :) :) ...

amazing to read :) :)

talking asad though is sure a shock :) ... bt its gd tht they r opening up.. spending some time together...

n again dilshaad is the best :) :) ... helping asad with dress selection... :) :)

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: mayurchan7
Hello...ankita..actually iam comenting on this story for the first time and i must tell you that this by far the most honest and beautiful take on ASAD ZOYA ..i must say that this only ff makes me all emotional with its update and i admire that though how much time you take for an update but it is everytime on the rightest note of emotion..keeping in view the original track you made a very blisfull FF that always keeps me engaging..as i said i never commented before b'coz now only iam getting familiar with its system so wanted to pour my heartfelt view on this story all.The characters in this story are very good strong headed in their own right and not to forget adorable i must say whatever it may be but i like ZOYA the most in this ff she made her place in everybody's heart with immese love . so coming back to this update this was a very engaging and awesome part because everybody were again back to normal and happy self..how zoya blasted at asad was much needed for her and how asad made all misunderstanding clear was aslo very endearing now they are going to be GF/BF for a week how adorable..continue soon...

Thank you so much for commenting. It gives me lot of pleasure to see new readers 😃

I am so glad you like the FF. Thank you so so much 🤗 It was my intention to write something heart felt, and I am glad I succeeded.

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Muskaan

@sweet4shehzadi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

Brilliant update dear
i love it so much
continue it asap
cant wait to read next update
thanks for pm dear

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: tanu3579
tht was cute :) ... the carefree n up to the challenge asad... n the shocked n enjoying zoya :) :) ...
amazing to read :) :)

talking asad though is sure a shock :) ... bt its gd tht they r opening up.. spending some time together...

n again dilshaad is the best :) :) ... helping asad with dress selection... :) :)

Hey Tanu 🤗 I've missed posting here and missed talking to you. Hope all is good on your end.

Thanks so much for liking the update. I really wanted to write a few light hearted and romantic updates, I sincerely hope everyone enjoys it. I thought the story needed them to get to know each other even better and have some fun 😃

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: Amulya9
oh my goodness...u updated ...im so happy ..i was abt 2 sleep n
really telepathy works i think if v love something so much ...
update is amazing ...
wat should i say ..i have fallen short of words to express the beauty of this update n ur writing skills...
how can u be so PERFECT everytime ..
haha gusse me they r calling each other as mis.farooqui n MR.Khan😆
the whole misunderstanding ..asad pacifying zoya session is something i cant express in words ..
he loves her a lot ...😳

Asad and Zoya sat snuggled to each other, with Zoya leaning on his chest, sitting in front of him. His arms around her from the back and his chin perched over her shoulder. They had set out to please each other, expressing their love more through touch than words. But the impending wedding halted them from going further. And they sat up, nestled cozily in each other's arms, back to talking - well bickering.❤️ aww babies 😳

the understanding between asya ..👏 this shows the writers talent 👏UR really a BRILLIANT WRITER 👏👏

omg ..my 3 cutipies r playing hide n seek 😉...i miss that game now ..aanu ne a game kab seekha 😛😆

i cant stop thinking abt aanu here ..god she loooks so cuteee ..i want 2 kisss her basss...
shes like banana in game n i loved it when she fooled asad ..asad is right ...i think she learnt all this from Zoe😳

haha asad n nazma r jealous now ..😆😆

n asad became so romantic these days ..love it ..
surely love brings a lot of change...n mera EC Asad became Expressive asad.

o m g ..just cant wait..fr the last days of their courtship as bf n gf

is he really gonna kiss her infront of everyone 😲...i cant believe this ..
continue super soon ..