Th#7 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 21 to 24 - Page 34

Originally posted by: florine_20

Hey bubble I have been reading all your updates of this ff till date. Couldnt comment on each of it though. All were just fabulous. Loved them all.

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

LoL its ok forget the last one 😆

I don't know I thought it would look odd of her to shout as she is in a field where she gets to see so many 6 packs all around 😕😆

Aww yeah she is a cutie pie ,,

ohh a few others didn't get it too ,,

u see its like somethings r prohibited or banned in countries like drugs or anything which effects human beings !!

soo she meant to say that 'u shud be banned here in 10 states atleast' means he is soo sexy that it shud be illegal for girls to look at him !!

I guess I shud clear it in my next A/N 😆

Aww thanks 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

yeah he won't misunderstand her !!

yeah or maybe 'meine pee nhi hai han meinu pila di gyi hai' 🤣

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

haha I am gonna update in an hour ,,

well this one is not such dukhi as in this one he will get to know everything about Zoya !!

next two r dukhi maybe !!

Originally posted by: treasure11

okay thn I wont unres it 🤣

haannn 😲

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Thanks😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

yeah he is gonna stand by her side but its like he believes that he knows everything already ,,

Yup thats the issue !!

haha yeah revelations coming in next one😉

yeah some readers told me that I don't show enough romance in the story soo I just had to show a few scenes but now it ends !!

Ayaan told him that he will try and he will come but it won't be related to AsYa !! I need him for some other thing ,,

haha I am gonna try updating it sooon😊

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

I knew it 🤓😆

I guess this song is on my mind since morning 😳😆

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

I knew it 🤓😆

I guess this song is on my mind since morning 😳😆

Originally posted by: khadupam

Ohh ohkay
But yaa asads past n asad ki family kaa story is also left naaa
Let's see
I think u r updating tomorrow only I guess
Am I right ??

Originally posted by: maha2012

"haan jee meinu pila dii gayi eh"😳

Originally posted by: treasure11

Fine I will unres

I dont want ur first page to look khalii

whyy 😲