#4 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 16-19 ! Link new thread !

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Amulya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Amulya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

n now ye wala scene chahiye mujhe

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sj_qh_kabhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Congracs for d new thread. :)
I simply lovd d update..!! :*
Soo emotnl.. soo intense..!!! 👏
awsum... :) lovd asad's outburst..!!!
Thank for d pm..:)

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-silentbang-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

congrats for new thread
nice update
so finally zoya understood asad's dilemma
sana is a such a sweetheart
update soon

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sabrinsz91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Fabulous update
It's very emotional and touching
Hope they leave their anger and come together

Amazing update
Loved it sooo much

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ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Niya_789
Chocoberry whn u writing new story ??😃

NIYAAA!!! Am so happy to see your name, how are you keeping now?

Have started writing a new story but don't know if it will be a TS/ss/ff. Will start updating as soon as I have at least 2-3 chapters ready. You see am a slow writer naa phir baad mein updates mein der hone lagti hai. 😳

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Niyati Tiwari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

NIYAAA!!! Am so happy to see your name, how are you keeping now?

Have started writing a new story but don't know if it will be a TS/ss/ff. Will start updating as soon as I have at least 2-3 chapters ready. You see am a slow writer naa phir baad mein updates mein der hone lagti hai. 😳

I am good now😃

Kuch bhi chalega .. Just write something I am missing your work

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

congrats on the new thread...

very heart touching n emotional update...

felt bad for both of them...

asad cares for zoya n is deeply in love with her n is right in his place...

zoya wants to keep the baby n is also right in her place...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

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shonayaa

@shonayaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

It was soo emotional

you are fab at writing emotional updates yar 👏

loved asya attachment with the baby

asad outburst was very well written

poor zoya feeling guilty for yelling at him

zoya staring at asad and he ignoring her stares

hope asya sort out everything and zoya deliver a healthy baby

conti soon