#4 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 16-19 ! Link new thread ! - Page 10

Bano

Emotional but lovely update!!!

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Nice update. But its vry painful to c my babies in pain.Both r hurt. Full emotional part.Zoya dont want to lose the baby and asad dont want to lose her.Zoya now realized that she has someone whom she can called her own.Hope everything get fine soon. Dont want to c my babies in more pain.Thanx for pm and congrats for new thread.Update soon.❤️ RAJ

Thanks bro ! 😳
I know ! But let me tell u that it was much more worst for me, i cried buckets while writing ! 😭 😆 😭
Yes, finally she found a kin ! 😳
Well its a happy story but shadowed by pain, so u'll see sad moment as much as happy and light-hearted ones 😃
Thank you so much !! ❤️

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

congo for the new thread...
ziddi ladki...
oh asad is hurt...
zoya surely decided that she wont abort the baby but since u hv already said that she vl hv to lose the baby... i guess it wud b a natural one... may b... that way zoya wont feel guilty of consenting to kill their baby...
continue soon

Thanks Aapi ! ❤️
Yes thats my solution because i myself despise abortion a lot but since i had planned for Zoya to lose the baby, i have no other options 😕

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Bano it was beautiful and yes very much emotional

how can she says nobody cares😡

He loves her soo muchh and is crazy about her and still😒

Again I loved Sana-Asad's scene at the end😆

and the morning after tooo😳

Update soon again will be waiting🤗

Thank you so much Bubble !! 🤗
I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Thats what she thinks, she has been alone for 17 years so now also she considers herself to be alone !
Thats the point, he lives her and she's oblivious to ut ! 😕
Both friends r fun loving ! 😳
Will try to update soon ! 🤗

Originally posted by: Paru_

Read all parts..nice update
thank u for keeping asad zoya alive :')

Haha thanks to u for reading ! ❤️

Originally posted by: risingsea101

Congrats for the new thread🥳

Awesome update

Please continue soon and thank you for the PM :))

THanks to u buddy !! ❤️

Originally posted by: captjs

Awww... Emotional... Love is on the air... M so excited :)

Originally posted by: anjali9996

nice 1
loved it yaar

Originally posted by: padda3princess

Lovely update

Originally posted by: nilusoni

congratulations for new thread

awesome part little emotional but wow

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next part

continue soon

Originally posted by: AMMY12

awsm update.
Superb part.
Luvd it.
Cont asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

Originally posted by: KReyAS

awsom updt

Originally posted by: Shubh007

congratulation for new thread...👏

update is amazing...👍🏼

just love it...😊

update next part soon...😃

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

congrats for the new thread..well written update..👍🏼

Originally posted by: scarletmalik

congratulations on new thread...🥳

awsome update👏

it was so emotional😭

loved it❤️

continue soon

nd thnx 4r pm

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

oh..asad is going to avoid her now

Thank you so much guys !! I'm glad that u all enjoyed it !! ❤️

Originally posted by: Amulya9

ruladiya bano 😭
I expected this reaction from Zoya...poor gal

Oh really ?! There is nobody to cry over your death ?! Who am i ?! Who the hell am i to you ?! Am i nobody to you ?! You think that you are nothing to me ?! Don't you consider me at least as your friend ?! You think that i don't care about you ?! You think that Ammi, Najma and Danial Sir don't care about you ?! You think that you mean nothing to me ?! You think that i'll be happy seeing you in pain ?! You think that i'll be happy seeing your tears ?! You think that i won't be bothered seeing your life in danger ?! Do you really think that i don't care about you ?! Look at me Zoya, do you really think that i'm happy by telling you to lose the baby ?! Do you really think that i don't care about you or the baby ?! If i wouldn't care about you, i would never ask you to lose it !! Dammit !! And you dared to say that i don't care about you ?! You think that i.." Asad kept shaking her closer with each question, he was deeply hurt for what she said, 🥺 my heart cried out fr him... 😭 😭 thisz brilliant

the pain of ASYA, n their love is beautifully penned 👏
Zoya dnt want 2 loose their baby.. 😛 ..oye pagli dnt worry u vl soon have dimpled kid... bt this baby vl put ur life in danger..

aww he's carrying her in his arms ❤️ ...juts can't wait fr Zoe manoing asad chapter
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I got 2 know instead of aborting u planned miscarriage... nice idea..I liked it...

I had told u na ! I was crying buckets while writing ! 😭

Yeah that part was heart wrenching ! 🥺 i felt like hugging him then and there ! 🤗 😭

Thank you so much Amu !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Soon dimpled baby ? 😲 voh kaise ? 😆
Haan carrying her after being scolded like a kid doing a mischief ! 😆
Yeah tahts what the next chapter is about ! 😃 Zoya needs to realize that he wont come to her now, she'll have to come to him and apologize then eventually he would forgivz her after enjoying the pampering ! 😉 😳 😆

Yeah i prefered miscarriage rather than abortion since i find to be cruel and disgusting ! 🤢 😭

Originally posted by: gowtu

Congo for new thread 🥳
Its truly an emotional updt 😭
Nd I loved it

Beautifully penned it down wht thy felt at that tym
Thy both r right at their places 😭
But still... I dnt knw wht u r thinking wht to do with the baby
Mujhe zoya nd baby sf chahiye
I m in love with dis asad more nd more with each updt 😳
Sana... She is Nc...

Continue soon

Thank you so much Gowtu !! 🤗
I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️

Thats te problem that both r right, so its hard to side anybody ! 😕
Baby wont survive, i know its sad but i had planned that since the beginning and when that will happen the story will take a big turn ! 😛

Haan Asad is so perfect here ! ❤️