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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

SO MUCH OF FLUFF SO MUCH PF FLUFF SO MUCH

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LOVED LOVED LOVED THE UPDATE <3
Asad's gussa.. Zoya's manana.. and the food fight EVERY SINGLE THING 🤗
Thank you so much or the update

now update asap nahi toh meri wali ka update nahi milega 🤣


Hmm... Yummy !! i want to kill u right now Ankie !! 😡 during Ramzan i lost so much weight and i grew thiner day by day but now looking at all this i'm hungry !! 😭

Thank you so much yaar !! 🤗
Ab toh main update karne se rahi ! 😆 september mein mera clg shuru ho raha hai and i'm supposed to read a big fat boring novel and since i didnt do it yet i'll have to do it in these 10 day warna main toh gayi, so regular updates over and only 1-2 updates a week !
Tum toh vaise bhi update nahi karti !! 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amin21

sorry for the delay but as I told you about my problem so be patient with me 😆

ok the convo of asad with the baby was really emotional one love it so much 👏

and what to say about the cloths scene it was just out standing really loved the side of asad 😉

and zoya unintentionally behaving like a wife its trulyenjoyable to read 😛

waiting for next


Better late than never ! 🤗
Thanks Amin !! I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Hahaha yeah he was playing with her !! 😆 her behaving like a wife makes Asad smile ! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Amazing update Bano !!

soo finally angel and Asad r back
I loved the whole scene where Asad was smudging the chocolate on her face☺️
They r soo cutie pie !!
and then Dilshad's reaction was fun tooo😆
Loved it totally !!
waiting for more now😳


Thanks so much Bubble !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Yeah with a bang in the kitchen !! 🤣 i know that was lame !! 😆
Yeah he was teasing her by hugging her but then he really hugged her because he felt like ! 😳
Well Dilshad is not taken seriously ! 😆
Update will come after some long pause ! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovepkdh

How d hell cud i miss such a marvellous ff !! Its simply amazing .. I really luv ur way wid words :') ! The characters and the depth of each of them is simply blissful.. Pleasee update soon ! Ive bcom a crazy fan of yours !! :') :')


HAhahah Thank you so much !! 🤗 marvelous ? Really ? 😃 I'm glad you liked it so much !! ❤️
Really ? My toottti phooti english ? 😆 awxww thats a huge compliment !! Thank you so much dear !! 🤗 mwah !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Update will come in a day or two !! 🤗 then i'll be on break of writing 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ramlath

Awesome part bano...
Pls update soon plz...


THanks Ramlath !! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Waiting for the next chapter.Pleeease.


IT will come in a day or two !! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik


Update will come in a day or two !! 🤗 then i'll be on break of writing 😳


Kyou

And kitna lamba break
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...adin...

I m not UnresIng my previous comments (sorry ) bcz i dont know where i've ressed :/

This is my OFFICIAL😆 comment for last update
CHAPTER 17A
He is so cute when he acts stubborn😳


"Main thak gaya hoon..." That was all he said and Dilshad didn't missed the double meaning, she smiled encouragingly and kissed his forehead.😭🥺

she is still so weak😔

the way he ws conscious while applying balm , (heart touching scene)👏

When Dilshad came forward and put his eggs in his plate, he purposely kissed his mother's cheek saying, "Thank you for the clothes, Ammi...", he smiled at her.
he is so 😈poor zoi
I think Danial wil end up excepting Islam . n may be he will chage his name to Rashid n marry Dilshad ???







CHAPTER 17B
I loved new Amy of Asad😆
wanna know??
see:

"Hello ? Hello Ammi ?" Asad asked and Zoya giggled.

"Haan Beta, bolo..." Zoya tried to mimick Dilshad's voice but burst into fits of laughter when she heard herself in that tone.


"Itni jaldi apni Angel ki aawaaz bhi bhool gaye ?" Zoya half-teased and half-complained him and he rolled his eyes while pressing his temple. 🥺


"I said that it was nice..." He replied casually and this time Zoya fumed and <font color="#3300ff">grabbed his collar, pulling him closer.😳</font>
She is getting BOLD😃with time😆, i like her this side.

"Maine kab kaha tha ke mere liye cupcakes banao ?" Asad irked her further, but then said softly, "I had already forgiven you, i was only pulling your leg..."
He is UKP IDIOT na ho tau😡

"I'll give my Angel a huge hug because i'm extremely sorry to have make her cry so much and because i missed her so so so so much..." He said with a smirk and took steps towards her, who looked at him wide-eyed and took steps backwards.
^^^^^ AWWW moment😳

<font color="#0066cc">"I'm not dirty ! I am looking delicious !</font>" Asad joked, "Now my Angel, let me give you a tight hug !" He laughed when she tried to get away.

@ blue i know , just let me eat ☺️🤣

"Sorry Ammi lekin aap bohot cute lag rahi hain... Aap pe yeh strict look bilkool bhi suit nahi karta !" Zoya laughed again and this time Asad and Dilshad looked at her wide-eyed, "Aap pe muskaan hi achi lagti hai !" Zoya laughed again.😲😲😳

"Voh.. Ammi, kal Zoya ki ek balm mere saath reh gayi thi, aur voh kaafi important hai, usse sone se pehle abdomen pe apply kiya jaata hai, toh kya aap aaj se usse lagaya karengi ?" Asad asked unsure and uncomfortably.

Dilshad got a little more serious and asked, "Main laga diya karoungi lekin agar voh itni important hai toh kal raat ko kisne lagaya tha usse ?" She asked worried and got her answer when she saw his cheeks turning a light shade of red and saw him adjusting his collar, "Acha thik hai, main laga doungi, ab tum bhi jaake aaram karo..." She said trying to bite back her smile when she saw her son blushing, after all, this was a rare sight for her.☺️


n in last i hope she decides to drop the idea of keeping that baby ...

nice work

pls i'll be not commenting for short span bcz college is opening again finally n i will be busy too ..
so plz i am asking u to update n pm me regularly i'll comment when i'll be free ..



Hahaha its ok ! It happens ! for me all that matters is taht u r commenting !! 🤗

Even my heart broke when i wrote that ! 🥺

Even though he's not happy with her decision, he cares and tries hos best to relieve her from pain ! 😳

Hahaha yeah then he was being mischievous and irritating her knowingly ! 😆 baar baar Asad hi kyon mature behave kare ?

I didnt planned for Danial to enter Khan family ! 😆 and Rashid is already Dilshad's late hubby ! 😕 😆



Yeha her new Ammi is very young and beautiful ! 😆

Hahaha dont worry she'll get very bold in the coming chapters !! 😆

No he is not ! 😡 arey baar baar why Zoya always gets forgiven when she makes a mistake ? she hurted him and he hadthe right to be angry with whatever she said ! 😭

Sorry i dont share chocolaty-Asad ! ☺️ 😆

She wont drop taht idea ! 😕 she's a mother and she wont abandon her child at any cost ! 😳

Its ok ! I know that u r a regular reader and i understand completely ! Good luck ! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed



Kyou

And kitna lamba break


Because i have only 10 days left to read a big fat boring novel that is difficult for me to focus on ! 🤢

Till i finish that novel i wont be writing nor updating, only trying to focus on that and once i'll read that i'll come back and update then clg reopeneing so only 1-2 updates a week ! 😳

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