#4 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 16-19 ! Link new thread !

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

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Posted: 11 years ago

#661

SO MUCH OF FLUFF SO MUCH PF FLUFF SO MUCH

LOVED LOVED LOVED THE UPDATE <3

Asad's gussa.. Zoya's manana.. and the food fight EVERY SINGLE THING 🤗

Thank you so much or the update

now update asap nahi toh meri wali ka update nahi milega 🤣

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#662

sorry for the delay but as I told you about my problem so be patient with me 😆

ok the convo of asad with the baby was really emotional one love it so much 👏

and what to say about the cloths scene it was just out standing really loved the side of asad 😉

and zoya unintentionally behaving like a wife its truly enjoyable to read 😛

waiting for next

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#663

Amazing update Bano !!

soo finally angel and Asad r back

I loved the whole scene where Asad was smudging the chocolate on her face ☺️

They r soo cutie pie !!

and then Dilshad's reaction was fun tooo 😆

Loved it totally !!

waiting for more now 😳

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lovepkdh

@lovepkdh

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#664

How d hell cud i miss such a marvellous ff !! Its simply amazing .. I really luv ur way wid words :') ! The characters and the depth of each of them is simply blissful.. Pleasee update soon ! Ive bcom a crazy fan of yours !! :') :')

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Ramlath

@Ramlath

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#665

Awesome part bano...
Pls update soon plz...

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Jayasree

@jayasree.rao

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#666

Waiting for the next chapter.Pleeease.

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...parth...

@...parth...

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#667

I m not UnresIng my previous comments (sorry ) bcz i dont know where i've ressed :/

This is my OFFICIAL😆 comment for last update

CHAPTER 17A

He is so cute when he acts stubborn 😳

"Main thak gaya hoon..." That was all he said and Dilshad didn't missed the double meaning, she smiled encouragingly and kissed his forehead.😭🥺

she is still so weak😔

the way he ws conscious while applying balm , (heart touching scene)👏

When Dilshad came forward and put his eggs in his plate, he purposely kissed his mother's cheek saying, "Thank you for the clothes, Ammi...", he smiled at her.

he is so 😈 poor zoi

I think Danial wil end up excepting Islam . n may be he will chage his name to Rashid n marry Dilshad ???

CHAPTER 17B

I loved new Amy of Asad 😆

wanna know??
see:

"Hello ? Hello Ammi ?" Asad asked and Zoya giggled.

"Haan Beta, bolo..." Zoya tried to mimick Dilshad's voice but burst into fits of laughter when she heard herself in that tone.

"Itni jaldi apni Angel ki aawaaz bhi bhool gaye ?" Zoya half-teased and half-complained him and he rolled his eyes while pressing his temple. 🥺

"I said that it was nice..." He replied casually and this time Zoya fumed and grabbed his collar, pulling him closer.😳

She is getting BOLD 😃 with time 😆, i like her this side.

"Maine kab kaha tha ke mere liye cupcakes banao ?" Asad irked her further, but then said softly, "I had already forgiven you, i was only pulling your leg..."

He is UKP IDIOT na ho tau 😡

"I'll give my Angel a huge hug because i'm extremely sorry to have make her cry so much and because i missed her so so so so much..." He said with a smirk and took steps towards her, who looked at him wide-eyed and took steps backwards.

^^^^^ AWWW moment 😳

"I'm not dirty ! I am looking delicious !" Asad joked, "Now my Angel, let me give you a tight hug !" He laughed when she tried to get away.

@ blue i know , just let me eat ☺️🤣

"Sorry Ammi lekin aap bohot cute lag rahi hain... Aap pe yeh strict look bilkool bhi suit nahi karta !" Zoya laughed again and this time Asad and Dilshad looked at her wide-eyed, "Aap pe muskaan hi achi lagti hai !" Zoya laughed again.😲😲😳

"Voh.. Ammi, kal Zoya ki ek balm mere saath reh gayi thi, aur voh kaafi important hai, usse sone se pehle abdomen pe apply kiya jaata hai, toh kya aap aaj se usse lagaya karengi ?" Asad asked unsure and uncomfortably.

Dilshad got a little more serious and asked, "Main laga diya karoungi lekin agar voh itni important hai toh kal raat ko kisne lagaya tha usse ?" She asked worried and got her answer when she saw his cheeks turning a light shade of red and saw him adjusting his collar, "Acha thik hai, main laga doungi, ab tum bhi jaake aaram karo..." She said trying to bite back her smile when she saw her son blushing, after all, this was a rare sight for her.☺️

n in last i hope she decides to drop the idea of keeping that baby ...

nice work

pls i'll be not commenting for short span bcz college is opening again finally n i will be busy too ..

so plz i am asking u to update n pm me regularly i'll comment when i'll be free ..

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#668

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Thank you so much Jas !! 🤗 I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️
Zoya wont be Zoya if she doesnt reply to tease ! 😆
Yes, as a mother, she's talking very maturely ! 😳
Well Asad respects her decision but he still let her know that he's not happy with it !
Arey Asad wasnt abgry against Zoya because of her decision, he was hurted by her words that nobody cares about her !

Dont be upset, Zoya doesnt realize yet what everything her Savior did for her, she's still naive, and she's not in love with Asad yet, she's starting to feel things just like teenagers now 😉 and for a mother, no matter what, her child holds more importance than anybody else even Asad because she dorsnt love him yet 😕 but be happy that Pat took the backseat ! 😆

Bano sorry 4 replying late

well i know Zoya is very innocent but baby ko Asad se upar rakha😲 this is so much😡

Baby mil gaya toh Asad ko side kyun kiya😭

I got 1 more reason 2 hate d baby😆(I love babies bydway😳)

Last kuch days se i was thinking ke u were writing as such ki i was feeling sorry 4 d baby but now i m again on same track i m angry at Akram's baby & Zoya 2 4 loving him more than Yummy AAK😆

Main bahot mean hon na 😳😆

but main saaf dil bhi hon jo dil main aye bol deti hon😉😎

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#669

Read part 17 A and B in a go

Super cute

Loved the cupcakes

Food fight was so cute

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#670

Originally posted by: anopama
Nice update
So they made up
He was sad he made her cry
Her trying to imitate dilshad was funny
Oh she made cupcakes for him love the apology
And then he switched it awww
Oh the food fight oh no OCD asad that is strange
Oh the kitchen he have to clean it
He asked zoya again to abort but she plainly refuse
Hoping for a miracle
He is not happy with her decision but he smiles
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