SaHil FF: A Tangled Love- pt11 pg 39 (*new) - Page 23

my god !!!...its amazing!!!
i felt lyk my heart skipped a beat wen i read last 15-20 lines

i read all d parts in one go n its superb!!
plz update d nxt part soon..very soon.
i wanna knw dat wat will happen nxt.
plz send PM :)

my god !!!...its amazing!!!
i felt lyk my heart skipped a beat wen i read last 15-20 lines

i read all d parts in one go n its superb!!
plz update d nxt part soon..very soon.
i wanna knw dat wat will happen nxt.
plz send PM 🤗

Oh my God.. what a turn in the story...thankful to you that you closed up the tanveer part in small way...and it feels good that she got back gir her deeds but like habits don't change...being the snake she is...she very cleverly played her last card..poisoned aahils mind ..moreover all that investments of love she put forward into aaahil came to destroy sahils lives for aahil did bad...for whatever reasons what he said was actually very hurtful...no one could bear that...its good that sanam has left bcz now he will a lot of time to think whose love he wants...and she gave those shares... such a big hearted person she is...update very soon...will be waiting... it us getting more interested now ...with all anger,junoon,separation, and of course love b/w them...update so very sooonish...

Wow Ani, very beautiful chapter.Quite an intense read. It was always a given that the truth of Tanveer would come between them. Especially because Tanveer would make Aahil feel that he "chose" Sanam above her. Make him feel guilty for loving and being happy with the women who's family landed her in jail. (For HER crimes mind you). But these things are rarely that straight forward and the bond of a Mother and child? Not easily broken. Even in the show, we saw that both Rehan and Aahil were steadfast in their love for that undeserving women till the very end.

Awesome update
Tanu got her punishment but ahil can not see the truth
Sanam ahil fight over that sanam left the home
Continue soon

That was very well written. .!
The play of emotions was so well described..!
Loved the update. .:)
I feel so bad for sanam..!
Hope aahil gets some sense soon..!
Update soonish.. cant wait to read what happens next. .! ;)

this is awesome Sage. ⭐️
And now can you blame me for nagging you about this. It is totally worth my time to read and re-read and respond to you on this.

Tanveer's downfall here is a lot more dramatic than the one shown in serial.
I do identify with the Aahil;s reaction as written here with the one shown in serial,

Now, if only the serial can show the leads getting together and separated again by the storm and again getting together..
I fail to understand how Gul does not realize the vast ocean of ideas that stem out of married lead staying together. As married woman, I can claim to be knowledgeable about the all the tribulations in marriage ..definitely not for the faint hearted 😎
there is a wealth of possibility there. "stop cribbing about serial on Sagey's story thread- reprimands self"

the situation is so real... Perhaps Ahil needs more tests. His love was strong enough to claim love against Ammi's wishes, but not strong enough to withstand Ammi's onslaught.

Its intriguing how you weave such complex story with ease and keep us so engaged.

Alright now- when is the next part coming 😃

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

Wow Ani, very beautiful chapter.Quite an intense read. It was always a given that the truth of Tanveer would come between them. Especially because Tanveer would make Aahil feel that he "chose" Sanam above her. Make him feel guilty for loving and being happy with the women who's family landed her in jail. (For HER crimes mind you). But these things are rarely that straight forward and the bond of a Mother and child? Not easily broken. Even in the show, we saw that both Rehan and Aahil were steadfast in their love for that undeserving women till the very end.

Thanks for the PM and the beautiful chapter.

Mandy- It's complex and that's an understatement. the bond of mother-son or for that matter mother-daughter is -can I safely say- unbreakable?

I was happy with the way it was shown. However, I expected a lot of nuanced emotions (in the serial), conflicting and disturbing being shown from Aahil. A son grieving his mom is always a TRP gatherer. Besides these emotional scenes get a life of their own on KV's face.
He delivers them really well... A lot of good opportunities were lost.

Aahil visiting his Ammi even though he knows she is a murderer- contrary to what they themselves feel, Men are a tad more emotionally dependent and certainly vulnerable- specially the ones who are capable of passionate love...
So we can't choose the passionate love coz its good for us and leave out the vulnerability- its a pacage deal.

Waiting for the next part Sage. Hope its on its way. 👏
Just realized that I have already commented twice...

time to nag Mandy now 😆 for the next update

Eh Man... I don't like this...

What an intense yet heartbreaking update...