SaHil FF: A Tangled Love- pt11 pg 39 (*new)

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#241

finally!u updt...awsm updt..sahil's pain is written beautifully...

bt who is ths 'fairuz'...dnt tell me he is another man in her life??how cn sanam easily agreed...

let c how stry turns out...cntinue soon..

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mahwash

@Mahu34

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#242

Sage! You've made me speechless with your awesome work! You've got such a gift to include suspence and intensity in your work. ❤️

I loved how Aahil was craving for his Sanam. But at the end note, made me well up. She still wants the divorce..

Continue soon! ❤️ I loved the it and I cannot wait to see their big confrontation..

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fanraya

@fanraya

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#243

Beautiful, looking forward to the next one...

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minnie2308

@minnie2308

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#244

very very beautifully written Ani.

Certainly worth the wait. the whole world ceases to exist while I am reading your update.

your narrative style of expressing situations, characters, feelings, intrigue in so few words is amazing.

In a few dialogs, Aahil and his equation with his sisters, Aahil and his equation with his Ammi...everything is explained.

their love and passion in those few words uttered only by Aahil in the phonecall😳..awesome...

Aahil- I had expected him to be calculative.

And he started well.. Don't we all melt faster after our fights with our spouse when he starts to make-up with the time-tested dialog -" you look great"😳😆😉

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sahil333

@sahil333

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#245

An update full of anxiety, I loved it. I feel for Sanam man. It won't be easy for her to keep him away from her. He seems so confident or rather say arrogant to think that Sanam would forgive him that easily. I hope she doesn't, I know I haven't forgiven him yet. I didn't like that he was being so touchy in a speedy mode. He didn't even consider her feelings at all at that moment. She was nervous like hell I would think so. And that's why I like the end "I still want the divorce Aahil. Nothing has changed."

Why do I feel that Fairuz is an adopted kid?

I'm so excited for the next update. How will these two come together?

UPDATE ASAP please!!!!

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heena

@heena24

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#246

It's a beautiful story

Pls update soon

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For me to know and you to guess :)

@-Awaari-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#247

I Really want you to continue this

#KeepSaHilAlive ❤️

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tazzz

@tazzz

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#248

omg the drama is rising!!! "will Aahil agree to the divorce? or will he keep fighting for his love?!" *dramatic music* please update soon! now that the directors have killed Aahil 😭 these fan fictions are our only source of sahil! 😉 im eagerly waiting for the next part!!!! honestly, it was so good! (confession: I started reading it only today! 😳 found it this morning and it was so creative that I couldn't stop reading it!) please continue this for many more chapters! love the gifs throughout the story btw. I know I sound so obnoxious right now but I'm so serious. this was amazing!
will be waiting for the next chapter!!!! 😆

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starlightango

@starlightango

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#249

this is a fabulous version! love it! hope you continue with it. very excited to see the twists and turns you come up with. love how it really concentrates on sahil's relationship and each of them individually too.

loads of talent!😃

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#250

Amazing update. Don't know how I missed it. Hope you do write the next chapter soon. I know even I have been very bad with my update. But will somehow do it! Can't wait for you to write the next part. I guess here Sanam has a child? :) If only the show makers could have done something innovative like that, and made Sanam leave and then a baby and a story about how they become a family again? If only. That picture you use as your banner is just beautiful and one of the best SAHIL angsty and Junooni moments! Loved them! No wonder we were so hooked on them. They had something special. Too bad the makers didn't see enough of what we saw, or they approached it in a much more business like way than we did! Oh well...what can one do? At least in our own imaginations we can give them another outcome! The one they deserved.