Falling for Jallad Jin SaHil OS Contd. Pg. 14 - Page 10

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

So her dream came true..Literally!! 😆

Tiaa!!! You god awesome girl or what?! I almost forgot the story actually so I read again, just a heads up for what was going on. Feeble attempt? Huh?!

I mean you make her wear his Kurta and HE knows how to to stitch buttons 😆 Dude. I just loved how you kept intact the unique ness of this couple. No wonder I always feel Sanam is The Man here 😆

Oh the reason behind that stitching? Haha. Awesome or what?!! I can never imagine HIM saying so many things in one go though 😆

And Sanam mistakenly blurted out her feelings about his magnificent Torso and his smooth chest. That chest. Indeed.

He started stripping. ADFSFHGKHLKJLJ. Why you little..you could have made his pants stripped tooo... Damn!! ;)

And of course the confession. "Just by looking at you gives me a hard on" DAFUQ!! @#$#%^%$^&^%&*^*(&*(*&^*^%

AND THE HUG. THE KISS. ON HIS ADAM'S APPLE. Tiaa!!! How. HOW and just HOW could you make me all hot and worked up by JUST a kiss between these f**king awesome people!! Ugh.

I am so flustered right now!

Yes I'm a freaking Santa here. I like fulfilling People's Dreams. I wanted to end my OS with Sanam turning her Hot Dream into Super Hot Reality.

Yippie!!! You are the first person to notice that I had the role reversal for SaHil, that is I made Aahil stitch the button instead of Sanam doing that thing. Thank God you liked it. Yes I can be stupid sometimes.😆... Yes I too wanted to have him strip out of his jeans. But I thought that Sanam would not be able to handle the heat poor thing. Just imagine Aahil's naked Torso and his proximity made her high and confess such things, if Aahil would have stripped totally then she would have fainted on the spot. You liked the reason behind Aahil's stitching??!!! Well I wanted it to be unique and I too kinda like Sanam being the man in this relationship, and I had to come up with some reason for a Royalty like Aahil learning to stitch, b'cos he has help to do that then why did he learn to stitch so I came up with this reason. And to explain everything Aahil needs to talk. though I tried keeping it short and crisp but then I was afraid that the meaning might get lost in translation. I wanted it to be clear.

@Bold... Awww you make me blush with your words. Thank you so much for appreciation.

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

DUDE. You seriously are impossible sometimes😆

Go check another comment. FEEBLE ATTEMPT. Like really?! You still din't get the innuendo? I though you know me better...😆

You two are impossible. 🤣

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

DUDE. You seriously are impossible sometimes 😆

Go check another comment. FEEBLE ATTEMPT. Like really?! You still din't get the innuendo? I though you know me better... 😆

As I said I can be quite stupid sometimes. It's just my insecurity getting better of me. Thanks Babes. Love you so much. 🤗

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy

You two are impossible. 🤣

I know Aaliya I can be quite stupid sometimes. Blame it on my insecurity. 😆

@TasriS... Thanks😊

I just loved this. Especially the part about Aahil not wanting to get Latiff to sow the buttons on his shirt coz he is not discreet, and going on YouTube to learn how to do it! That was howlarious! The kiss was hot! :)

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

I just loved this. Especially the part about Aahil not wanting to get Latiff to sow the buttons on his shirt coz he is not discreet, and going on YouTube to learn how to do it! That was howlarious! The kiss was hot! :)

I liked how Aahil was pushed into saying he loved her. That is how I think it should happen on the show too!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good..👍🏼

She was in his kurta! His! Oh man, that's hot on a whole other level. I loved the way he asked her if she was jealous and it slipped out about his magnificent torso. That my darling is some sexy ass writing right there! Tia? Where have you been? I've missed this- and you of course. I'm so dad this story came to an ending , but what a good ending it was. That towel scene and him coming home drunk asking him to feed her and now the kurta! You're such an amazing writer. The last chapter was so beautifully written, and the realization when she finally figured it was him in her dreams. Aahil is so understanding here and the way he explains to her how much he loves her I could honestly imagine it! Wonderful amazing talented awesome!!!!!

Aaand I'm so so so sorry for the late reply.
Love you
Xx Dhanesh 🤗

Originally posted by: Dhanesh27

She was in his kurta! His! Oh man, that's hot on a whole other level. I loved the way he asked her if she was jealous and it slipped out about his magnificent torso. That my darling is some sexy ass writing right there! Tia? Where have you been? I've missed this- and you of course. I'm so dad this story came to an ending , but what a good ending it was. That towel scene and him coming home drunk asking him to feed her and now the kurta! You're such an amazing writer. The last chapter was so beautifully written, and the realization when she finally figured it was him in her dreams. Aahil is so understanding here and the way he explains to her how much he loves her I could honestly imagine it! Wonderful amazing talented awesome!!!!!

Aaand I'm so so so sorry for the late reply.
Love you
Xx Dhanesh 🤗

Come on Dhannu, you write more sexy stuff then me. Mine is juvenile when compared to yours. It's just a small effort from my side and suddenly an idea stuck me and I started typing and posted it, just like that. I thought I should do some justice to this OS as the second part was too small and I felt I did not provide apt ending to it. Though not perfect, but it's the best I can come up with for this OS and finish it on a note where they do realize their feelings and end up confessing instead of keeping their feelings bottled up and just venting out their anger and frustration. To be honest if I would have been Sanam, I would have ended up blurting the same sentence seeing such a hot guy half naked in such closer proximity holding on to my dress and his hot breath falling on me. The OS is mostly my desires coming out in the form of creativity. So happy that you appreciated to such a level

No sweat about being late. Hell I'm late all the time.