Falling for Jallad Jin SaHil OS Contd. Pg. 14

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It has been a week since the wretched Lawyer made a home visit. Aahil was still confused as who could have informed that bloody Lawyer that Aahil and Sanam's marriage is a farce and is just for the sake of attaining Late. Nawab's will. Everyone were shocked to see Lawyer making home visit and asking everyone that Is Aahil's marriage to Sanam a big set up?? If it is then in that case the whole property mentioned in the Will, would be transferred to the Trust. Tanveer got tensed listening to this and started convincing Lawyer otherwise. She quickly went to Aahil's room and requested him to play along. As usual Aahil gave in to his Ammi's wish and came up with such a show that everyone including Lawyer was convinced that Aahil got married to Sanam b'cos of love and it was not a sham. Of course half of the thing was the truth. Atleast from Aahil's side. To the bemusement of Rehaan in the background Aahil spoke oh-so-charmingly to Sanam in front of the Lawyer and all the family members that even Sanam was astounded and for a moment she was convinced that each and every word coming out of Aahil's mouth was truth, nothing, but the whole truth. Such was the magic in Aahil's eyes and his conviction that Sanam was lost for a moment. But as soon as she entered Aahil's room along with him and the automated door closed behind them, Aahil threw her on the harsh ground of reality, which made Sanam bang her head on the wall for being so stupid and getting swayed by the make-belief words of Aahil and considering it to be true for a moment. This behavior of Aahil was expected from him. But Sanam was surprised at her own thinking. She was still confused that why did she expected Aahil to be nice to her?? Just b'cos he spoke sweetly and so charmingly to her momentarily that too as a pretense for convincing the Lawyer.

Aahil told Sanam that she would be staying in his room until the paper work related to the property are finished in order to avoid unnecessary suspicion on them. Sanam was not comfortable with this arrangement. Just as she was about to leave the room, Aahil blocked her and reprimanded her for being stupid and not understanding the gravity of the situation. Aahil very firmly told Sanam that she would not be going anywhere and she has to sleep in this very room on the same bed as Aahil. Sanam gave it back to Aahil saying that she would rather sleep on the bed of burning coals than sharing the bed with Aahil. But the thing which Aahil did next shocked Sanam. Aahil lifted Sanam in his arms and placed her on the bed and said "See was that too difficult for you.?? Now I want you to sleep right here. If I see you going out of this room or sleeping somewhere else I will pick you up in my arms and will bring you back in this bed. Trust me I can do this all night long" Sanam though irritated, still a shade of crimson made an appearance on her cheeks.

As the bed was little hard just like Jallad Jin's heart, Sanam was uncomfortable adjusting to it and as a result she kept tossing and turning. If that was not enough, Jalad Jin had hogged the whole coverlet, leaving Sanam to shiver in the minimum temp. of AC. Just as Sanam tried to pull the quilt to herself. He turned around pinning Sanam to the bed, ending on top of her and asked her in menacing way "Why are you dancing on the bed?? Can't you sleep properly?? Now stop tossing and turning. Understood!!"

"But I need the quilt too" Sanam said meekly for the very first time, as she was shook up by the closer proximity of Aahil. He could see Sanam shivering b'cos of strong temp. of AC so he felt a little guilty and spared her some quilt to cover herself. After this whole drama both were too tired to argue, so they both fell asleep without much further ado. Sanam slept very peacefully, she was enjoying the new comfy pillow and she tried snuggling more to it. The pillow had a mild Mint fragrance which was invigorating Sanam's senses. Though Sanam wanted to sleep like this the whole day, but sudden jerk, some kind of motion made her get up reluctantly. As she opened her eyes Sanam was jolted to the core. All this while Sanam mistook Aahil's arms to be the comfy pillow and whole night she slept in his arms, sharing the same coverlet. As if this was less disturbing, she found Aahil spooned to her back and his hand on her waist with their hands entwined. Sanam certainly does not wanted Aahil to be aware of this situation, as she knew this would only flare up Aahil's temper. So she very slowly pulled out her hand from Aahil's and got up very slowly so as not to disturb his stupor.

Sanam heaved a sigh of relief, as she was now on her feet and at a safe distance from the bed and as well as Aahil. As she was about to step out of the room, she remembered the most essential thing. The automated door which opened only with the remote. So Sanam started searching for the remote. She very reluctantly went near Aahil to search for the little weasel. As she was continuing her search she couldn't help notice that how cute Aahil looked while sleeping. He was the epitome of handsomeness, with freakishly long lashes and the soft tendrils of raven black hair falling on his forehead. His hair shining in the morning sunlight. Sanam was getting mesmerised by seeing Aahil in this state. "Allah Miya who could have thought that this Jallad Jin could look so innocent while asleep" As though on cue Aahil opened his eyes and gave a sheepish smile to Sanam in his half-awaken state. But just as he realised that Sanam is actually standing there he got up with a jolt. Both Sanam and Aahil were startled with this small encounter and they were trying to steal glances from each other. Aahil broke the uncomfortable silence by speaking first. "Where you looking for something?" "Yes I wanted the remote so I can get out of this room. I was searching for the same, but was unable to find it."

Aahil got angry and go up from the bed and held Sanam's arm with sudden jerk "Didn't I tell you to stay in this room until the property matter gets settled. How Many times do I need to repeat myself??" "But I need to go to my room to change." "No Need for that. I will tell Lateef to bring all your clothes and other things to my room. So that you could shift permanently to my room.You are my wife and I will not let you go..." Aahil stopped midway when he saw Sanam's eyes widen with surprise after listening to his words. Aahil then continued "Yeah you will be staying here for the time being, so do the necessary things required to show people that we are living like real husband and wife in this room." Saying this Aahil fished the remote from his pocket and opened the door. But before he could get out of the room, Sanam shouted out at his back "I need one of those wretched remote thingie, if I am to stay in this room as I would have to make two three trips from my previous room to here while bringing my things and if the door closes accidentally, I can't come all the way to your office to ask for that thing." "Fine you keep this, It's Yours. I will get another one for myself" Saying this Aahil threw the remote towards Sanam which she caught with great agility.

Back to the present Sanam has been waiting for about an hour for Jalaad Jin to return from Office, so that she could serve him the dinner as he already told Begum Sahiba i.e., his Ammi that he would be coming home late because of some important meeting with foreign clients. So in order to dispel the doubts and to maintain the facade Begum Sahiba had told Sanam to wait up for Aahil and to serve him dinner. Rest of the family members have had their dinner long before and retired to their respective room. Even Lateef retired to his quarters making an alibi of back ache. So Sanam was all alone in the gigantic living room waiting for the Laad Saab to return home.

Sanam didn't realize when she was engulfed by sleep, and started having the same dream which she has been having for past one week. She saw a Man, shirtless possessing great abs advancing towards her. Sanam seem to be mesmerised by this strange person. His chest is so smooth that Sanam is almost tempted to touch it, run her hands up and down on his abs. It was shining b'cos of some water droplets spread across that sexy Torso. Sanam tiptoes trying to reach his lips, but instead ends up giving a passionate kiss on his Adam's Apple. Disappointed by her efforts, she again tried reaching for his Full Lips, but again she failed as someone was shaking her by the shoulder vigorously. Her reverie got broken and she awoke with a start and saw Aahil standing next to her. "Wake up sleeping beauty, and stop day dreaming." "When real life turns into a never ending nightmare a person tends to find escapade in their dreams." Sanam retorted. Aahil raised his eyebrows and said "Not bad, you are sharpening up with your come backs. Sanam rolled her eyes at this, which Aahil neglected and continued "... Don't tell me, you were up the whole time to dazzle me with your snarky remarks?!!"

"No Begum Sahiba told me to wait up for you, so that I can serve you dinner when you return back home." "Did you have your dinner??" Aahil asked with concern in his eyes. "No, not yet" Sanam replied slightly flabbergasted by Aahil's sudden concern. "Why?? Where you waiting up for me?? Trying to get into the character of Loving Wife who waits up for her darling husband?" Aahil asked with a mischievous glint in his eyes. "OMG, don't try to flatter yourself. It's just that I had some heavy snacks at Iftari, so wasn't feeling hungry."

"Aahil closed the distance between them and came really close to Sanam and whispered in her ears "Are you feeling it now??" "Whaaa...aat" Sanam stuttered with her heart thumping right behind her ears and her cheeks turning bright crimson "Hunger" Aahil whispered again. "I mean are you hungry now?? If yes then come lets eat together, it's very boring to eat all alone." Sanam calmed her nerves after listening to this and nodded in assertive. She could smell Bourbon from Aahil's breath. She knew that the reason behind Aahil being less mean than usual is because he is all sloshed up. She held Aahil who was stumbling and made him sit in the chair and served him. She waited for him to start eating, but he kept staring at food. Sanam was getting slightly irked by his behavior, finally she spoke up "What happened Laad Saab, are you waiting for someone to feed you??" "Yes"Aahil nodded at the same time. "Forget it!! Why can't you eat yourself??" "Because I left my hand in my office cabin." Aahil made a cute face while saying this. "What??!! " Sanam said in a half-amused and half-irked tone. Aahil then pointed towards his mouth and signaled Sanam to feed him. Sanam knew that it was the effect of Bourbon taking over Aahil's senses, pertaining to which he was acting in such a way. But Sanam can't help but admire that how cute Aahil looked while doing this. It was such a rare sight for her. Sanam gave a sigh and started feeding him. After having two spoons of rice, Aahil held Sanam's hand and said "You too eat, Since you haveboth your hands intact with you. You eat one spoon, then feed me one spoon." Sanam couldn't help but smile at his cuteness. "As you say Laad Saab." and for the first time in the whole week SaHil had their dinner together in peace.


P.S. Back with another crappy OS. Will update the next part soon. The idea for next part is given by Dhannu, and its also partly lifted from Barun Sobti's Serial. So yes if someone finds familiarity in the scene and wanna bash me for stealing the ideas. I already am confessing the upcoming idea is not going to be original. I dedicate this OS to My Fatal Five Group i.e., Aliya, Tamara, Pragya, Faru and Dannu for giving me some naughty towel idea. which is coming up in the next update.

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honeybees22 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omggg this story is amazing
i'm in love with the first chapter itself
Love the title as well Falling For Jallad Jin lol suits it perfectly
Amazing story

Edited by honeybees22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so freakin cute! can't wait for the next part😊
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OMG, this is so lovely, 😳and cute, Really beautiful, wish they have these moments in the real show too..Amazing OS, please do write more.. Eagerly waiting for the next one..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woow beautiful OS
plz try to update soon
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@Mehar23, Surbhibornstar, wreeti, -Saffi-Surbhi-... Thanks for the appreciation guys. Don't worry I will update ASAP
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Originally posted by: fanraya

OMG, this is so lovely, 😳and cute, Really beautiful, wish they have these moments in the real show too..Amazing OS, please do write more.. Eagerly waiting for the next one..



Me too Yaar Me too. I so wanna see cute avatar of Aahil.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is awesome.. liked the OS... do continue it
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Res res res!!!
Unres!

Three mentions whaaatt whaaatt! Thanks for the PM darling!

Getting down to business 😆

This was 😲

SUGAR, SPICE AND ALL THINGS NICE!

Oh and I forgot to mention COMPLETELY SEXY!

Just awakened Aahil is like ******** yah fill in the blanks on that one 😆 Can he get any hotter, I'm starting to have a dreams about some character that doesn't even exist😭 And you my darling are doing nothing to stop them.

While were here can I have a drunk Aahil to go please, with an extra side of morning sexy and naughty smile, and dirty thoughts? Of it's not to much to ask! Please and thank you 😉

Tia you made my day with your so called 'trashy' story which totally is the complete opposite because you! You! Are one hell of a good writer, and I mentally kicked myself for logging on so late. This story is mind blowing in ways I cannot express and ways you cannot begin to imagine because of the way you portray their characters and as usual Aahil is sex on legs, I might just die after reading the towel scene in the next update.


I waited for this update from Sunday night and you finally brought it, like wham bam thank you ma'am.

I'm so overjoyed.

Now do me a favor and get your sexy ass here so I can give you a squeezey hug for this, and for the nxt update because of the towel, and because Sanam is not getting exposed like me 😆😆 And it's Aahil which I will NEVER EVER say no to😆😉.

Thank you thank you thank you 🤗
Edited by Dhanesh27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res!
How coem I found this so late?!! 😡

Unres! Finally read it.
Tia Tia Tia!! I love you!! <3 😆 Sorry I couldn't help getting all excited when you mentioned my name!! Aww!!! 😆

Ok now for the story! I wanna go for the highlights first:

He came closer and whispered in her ear " Are you feeling it now?" "Hunger"
$#^$#^*&^*#$$ Damn you Tia!! You just made me all...acsvdfbvdfvbdv ☺️😆

That dream of Sanam. Shirtless man approaching him with perfect abs and smooth chest like she wanna run her hands... !!!!!! She ended up kissing his Adam's Apple!! WHAT. EVEN. %$&&*%^&%
SO DAMN SEXYY!!!

And also the dinner part. He was sloshed and all high. Lol "I left my hand at my cabin" 😆😆 ROFL.
And then the spoon feeding. You eat with one spoon, and me with one. Arghh!! How cute he was!!! Damn I want to eat him up now!!
And she was actually looking at him while sleeping! Hayyyee.. <3
What naughty towel idea by the way? I can't wait for that! ;) 😆
Awesome OS Tia babe!! STOP CALLING YOUR WORKS CRAPPY!! 😡
Update soon!! Love! <3
Edited by Prags_Sociopath - 11 years ago

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