Falling for Jallad Jin SaHil OS Contd. Pg. 14 - Page 8

vking, nicky13, princessaaliya: Thanks for for liking my work. Hope you will keep motivating in my future attempts too.

nikki.17: Eagerly waiting for you to unreserve and give your valuable comments.

Originally posted by: Dhanesh27

Short? Who cares ! I loved this, especially the towel scene. I'm so glad you did your own take on this! It made my frikin day. My experience was no way near as hot as this. Oh how I wish he could have pulled me closer instead of standing in the and balcony and staring! 😭😆

Made my day babe with what you consider smelly trash😲😆 And Sanam finally figured out its Aahil in her dreams, go on girl, make it happen in reality! And that finger on her lips oh my god! And he pulls her close and says don't move! Shoot me but sometimes I like them dominant. I mean who doesn't like being throw onto the bed by Aahil 😆😉

Thank goodness there was no one around when I read this because the way I was blushing you'd think there was something else on my screen 🤣

Thanks for such brilliant writing!

Love you! :*

Aren't you the sweetest thing in the world??!! I So wanna hug you like right now. You appreciating my work and even blushing at my feeble attempt and praising it to sky high. I'm over whelmed with your love and affection and care. Love you sweetheart. Muahhh...

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Tia love!!!


First of all!



I know I know I'm late to the party! Very late!


And I've issued you so very much!!!!



Now what is this I've had the great privilege of reading! This is for part one and two combined!

I love love love the whole spooning business on the bed!


And she fed him! Just coz he's all cute and adorable and smiling and and and!



God!



Tell me Tia.


How sexy is he. In that wretched towel. With droplets of water rolling down that chest...*miss you suds.* and down to his torso and down to his...


Tell me.



Hot? Super hot. Unbearably sizzling? What! Tell. Me.




How cute and adorable is he in the morning! He thought he was dreaming. He's subconscious mind...awww he's beautiful giving her a sheepish smile like that!!


Yes! She's his wife. And she stays!!



She's affected just as much as we are right? Yeah? Yeah! Good! Goodness how.


How do you do it Tia. Tell me how.



I feel it. I am practically watching the scene unfold itself in front of me as I read and I need to know how do you do this...how! I need to know!


Towel. How low is it.


Tell me.


Can we see the v?


Yeah?


Yeah!


Good!


He gave her his remote. That's like a major step in the relationship right. Right!




More Tia.




I want more.


I want so much more.


Gimme more.



Please!



I.




Need.




And and and!!!

Thank you for the very thoughtful dedication my Darking sweetheart!


#TeamManiacsRocks!




Woohoo partayyy!!



You updated. Tamara updated. Juliet gave us an OS!



I love today!


So much!


Hugs!!!


You rock!!!


Mwahhh




Sexayh seven#

Farz sweetu, never apologize. Hell, I get late for many things and I never regret, becoming coming late is like arriving in style. LOL. If Prags would have been here we would have gotten double-meaning out of this line too.. Oh we are such bitches. Yes doll I know you are Nanhi Munni and you like such innocent and rosy romantic tales, nothing over played but not underplayed either. Your comments are my most valuable treasure. Love you always.

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

"...feeble attempt of Puppy Love."



I live on this Tia.



Please.



Don't stop giving me.



You gotta remember, main nanhi munni rahi hoon. Puppy love is mah jamm. My kind of fluff. Yeah?



Good!



You gotta keep it coming.



Coz. I don't lie when I say...I need *italic*!!!




I really do.


Gimme more of this!



Gimmmeee!

Sorry babes, But I can't promise anything as my right arm has hairline fracture and I'm not in my right senses now. Withering in immense pain. I hate it when I'm not able to keep my promises. So I will just deliver and not brag about it in advance. Please don't expect much from me. Please sweetu.

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

TIa, Tia, Tia.

Ok I don't know Dhanu and her experience ( And I wish I have eves dropped😃😳), but you completely floored me woman and I let out a cry, why why was it so short... I mean I am sure we both like it long isn't it. Was it not hard enough. I was bloody waiting from such a long time.

Moving on! So sexy that was, this is just the teaser right , I can't wait for the movie - the most awesome HOT movie ahead.

Ok what the ...! What was that I didn't know to laugh or to squirm.

Sanam gawked at Aahil, right out of the shower standing half-naked, with just a white towel around his waist, protecting his dignity. Water droplets spread across his chest and shining in the room light, smell of Aquafresh Pine with the Hint of Lemon welling up her senses.!!!!

Hot Ass just challenged my dignity here you know that. Damn you Tia! GAH!!!

Like Pragu writes #$%^&&&ajkdgjdiyiulksjxlk&&^%$%^&**((&*&*^# GRRR!

I LOVE LEMONS! LOVEEE! LEMONS covered with white cotton Turkish towels I love even more.🤣

What is wrong with us, Naked and White! LOL!😆

Then Ho Lord! 🤣 His towel to her Dupatta. Soul Mates at least the Duppata and Towel got some action right 🤣 LOL!

I am decent now- I was so disappointed. I never want him Decent ok ever. Sent him to a nude beach Tia. Just do it!

I hate his Domineering Ass. How he tells her it's not hot enough. 😡 I know I know you love him unconditionally but Asshole he is with his beautiful wife...

I had so much fun with your naughty update Tia. I so love that we are on the same page.😛😉

Wink Wink!😉 Just make him cover his Dinky with a piece of paper next time ok. Do it! I know you want to. LOL!😆

OK when is the next update, Can't wait. Continue soon!

Love

Juliet

Damn you Jules, Your comment is more Raunchy than my actual post. Do you really have to do this??!!! Give such an fantabulous comment on my update. Now I'm ashamed and feeling like shit. Hell my Update was not even 10% of your comment. Why oh why do you do this to me.

Hail Your Sexy Royalship. Please have pity on me. 😭

The towel part was suree embrassing for Sanam

Originally posted by: TIA.Tia

honeybees22: Thank you for your comment.

Are you going to continue this?

Let's see I can't promise anything. If I get any further ideas then I will.

Originally posted by: TIA.Tia

Let's see I can't promise anything. If I get any further ideas then I will.

Do PM me if you continue :)