SS: The Nawab of Bhopal. Part 11 preview, pg 43!!!

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Mary!! No no!! Please. You can't stop it at right there! I just logged on to see is there an update of it or not! TRUST ME. You HAVE to continue it!! I'll be giving a looong comment for that! I promise!!

PLEASE CONTINUE!!! DON'T STOP😭

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music1

@music1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

It's neither bad nor good Mary...it's just perfectly beautiful😊

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Suspended

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

OMG. This. Is. Just. Beautiful. 😳

I'm not a regular follower of FFs' OSs' and SSs' but the title of your OS caught my attention (since I happen to be a huge IPK fan and I am starting to love QH2 too). So I was compelled to read it. :) I love how you integrated ArHi into your story and the whole ArHi meet SaHil was sooo damn cute. ;) The ArHi scene was damn adorable too. Liking Sanam-Khushi dynamics a lot too. :) Please continue Mary. I beseech you. 😆

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

This OS can be read after my previous OS: A Day in the Life of Sahil.

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Mehak

@Asad4Zoya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Amazing os!! 👏👍🏼

keep writing why did u stop, i loved it and could not stop reading it till the end.

Arhi and sahil were both really cute. Arhi pom pom fight took me back to the the old days of ipkknd.😊 Sahil again are so cute.😳 loved the part where he orders the dress ( it was very beautiful) and the delivery boy messes up. hehehe poor ahil i hope this scene was shot in the serial, would have loved to see ahil shocked face.😆 Sanam repeatedly saying the lines " ye toh apne kharida hai" was so adorable. Also loved how ahil addressed as hum. it ws so cute!!!😳

keep writing and please do pm me when u write the next part. will be waiting

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Ok people, it is happening, a part two. No thanks to the silent readers, but the few very nice ones who wrote a few lines to me in the past few days...

Preview of Part 2:

Girl's Night - pajama party with Khushi, Anjali, Sanam and a surprise! They are talking about everything, especially their men :))) Sanam's true feelings!!!

Guys watching the game - Imad, Arnav and Aahil

Ahil's moment of truth

Some serious heart break!

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Ayesha

@Aye12345

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Ooh sounds FAB :)) Do update soon please, i'm really eager to read on :))) xoxoxo

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Esha

@Raingoddess

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Plz continue soon! Ur writing is so awesome n I really looks forward to reading more of ur work! This one is great! N heartbreak ouch! Whose? Aahil or Sanam? Cant wait n am really excited!

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Mehak

@Asad4Zoya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Marybarton
Ok people, it is happening, a part two. No thanks to the silent readers, but the few very nice ones who wrote a few lines to me in the past few days...

Preview of Part 2:

Girl's Night - pajama party with Khushi, Anjali, Sanam and a surprise! They are talking about everything, especially their men :))) Sanam's true feelings!!!

Guys watching the game - Imad, Arnav and Aahil

Ahil's moment of truth

Some serious heart break!

Cant wait😊