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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Raingoddess
Wow!!! Exactly how I imagined the scene when I gave u the idea! Thank u so much for taking my suggestion! Loved it n cant wait for the next part! The Raizada meet the Ibrahim! The two couples sound super cute! Update asap :)

Glad you liked it 😊. It was difficult to write.

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Heartbeats..

@Heartbeats..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

hey..

Love the whole idea...!!

Love the way he opened up ...

Arshi were too cute 😆

Would be glad if you would continue it! 😳

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awesome buddy! That was super cool! Its always fun to have a crossover of two gorgeous couples :)

This was super cute! Loved how Aahil tried to tell Sanam what he has been through. it was so heart wrenching to even read all of that by him :( Poor baby :'(

And how Sanam tried to make it up with Vanilla cake! Yumm 😆 And the part, where you linked the cake with Sanam ;) 😆 She hugged him! Aww!!

And there's ArShi then. Ah. Good old days. Loved them so much. Can't wait how their "get together" would turn out :D

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vandana73

@vandana73

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

beautiful combination of these two couples but please could we have more of it, I mean independent OS

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udenigamage

@udenigamage

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Very interesting. Having my once best couple with Sahil is marvelous. Please write more. It's going to be good one.👍🏼

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Zaina

@CrazyForAshish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Very nice OS... do continue it..

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lastdesire

@lastdesire

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Rubbing my eyes vigorously. ...arshi and swhil both in one story...is it 4 real or am I dreaming...my fav couples...love dem adore dem

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923171

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

I was your silent reader for a very long time. I am big fan of your work. You should definitely continue this. 😆

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Ayesha

@Aye12345

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

This is really good :)) Why did you stop?? :)) You should continue... pleeease?? :))) xoxoxo

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

The response rate on this OS is so low that I don't feel like following up with this story. People hardly bother to write anything. If they read they think writers should consider it a priviledge that they have silent readers.

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