SS: The Nawab of Bhopal. Part 11 preview, pg 43!!!

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Gayu-Sahil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

hey dear you captured their characterization very well..even while expressing their fellings they are fighting..it is really intense..
p.s you are not losing readers in fact you are gaining..i hope silent members also start to reply..

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Marybarton

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Tannakstar
OMG you absolutely must continue!! This has been a brilliantly nuanced story so far, you've really captured the essence of the characters, especially the essence of the SaHil equation!
And I absolutely LOVED that Sanam beat up Anwar, that was so hilarious, I could totally picture it 😆

I'm very much intrigued by what Bari ammi said to Aahil. It can't be the truth because surely Aahil would vehemently deny his mother killing Asad and Zoya. Hmmm, this will take some thinking...

In the meantime, you get cracking on the next fantastic update you have dude! And rest assured you have not lost any readership. In fact you've gained members like me who are usually silent readers, but only comment when they see something as brilliant your SS.

He tells her what he said in the last line. She just worded it more nicely. It is a hint.😉

Thank you for writing.

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sweetheart143ja

@sweetheart143ja

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Amazing...i luved aahil in this one...update soon

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Zaina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

I liked it.. fantastic update... do continue it..

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Shivani_4u

@Shivani_4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

awesome update..my aahil❤️..Continue plz

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music1

@music1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Beautiful one Mary😊Loved the intensity...just like I loved ur masterpiece on Ashlok😊Could literally visualize the scenes happening In front of my eyes...and only an ace writer can accomplish that feet:)... Do continue

Edited by music1 - 11 years ago

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udenigamage

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Great updated.Waited so long for this. Again Ahil hurt. Every story every time leads to hurt Ahil. Poor guy. Eagerly waiting to get his happiness (his sanam's love) as soon as possible. Anyway I love how your story building up. Waiting for rest...

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ssafdar

@ssafdar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Mary don't be disheartened... I love your story and would love to see you take it to its natural conclusion.

Sanam doesn't hold back her punches in her arguments, she will hit below the belt to win the fight and always regrets later.

Your last line had me in stitches

Don't give up

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bindasss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#119

Lovely update! Really enjoyed it! Please update soon and please pm me further updates! (:

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Marybarton

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Gayu-Sahil
hey dear you captured their characterization very well..even while expressing their fellings they are fighting..it is really intense..
p.s you are not losing readers in fact you are gaining..i hope silent members also start to reply..

Thank you for always being there :)

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