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Posted: 11 years ago

#871

Originally posted by: kals82
wow... loved the skpe chat...
asad eyes...!!!!!!!!!!!

ireally wish nisha gave them some privacy...

i guess atlast the flash back is coming toend...

finish it one full update dear...
it is like happy with the present... but ending with bitterness..
so end it fully.. and give the present henceforth...

awesome update as usual...

Thanks Kalyani 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

yeah he is having a good eye sight 😆

Yup its gonna end in first half of next update !!

Yup I am gonna concentrate on present only 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#872

Originally posted by: sona_naksh
amazing update as usual ...
update soon
thnx for pm

Thanks Sona 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#873

Originally posted by: aarzoo50
umm i forgot to ask... Nisha dint come in frame while zoya was talking to asad.. he dint see her... koi raaz hai kya???

ohh I forgot to mention it openly but he did notice her in his room ,,

when he was trying to ignore the torture they were fighting in his room ,,

soo u can say he must have noticed her (:

haha and no raaz in here LoL !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#874

Originally posted by: -Xpress-
Loved the update ..superb

Thanks 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#875

Originally posted by: treasure11

Whatever Ms. 🥱

are you like satakli again??🤔

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Posted: 11 years ago

#876

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27
flashback is too painful! I feel somekinda pain..while reading it...poor zoe! Glad that its ending soon!
Present is going on too well...asad-zoya i'm loving them!
Wonder what might happen when zoya discusses her past wid Asad! She's nt virgin..was forced to spend nights wid numerous man! The reason she's in that height of success...hope Asad understands her!
Update sooonnn!

yeah its painful but reality of life ,,

Yup its gonna end now !!

Thanks 😳

I am glad that you liked it !!

well I can't reveal his reaction but lets just hope for the best 😉

Will try updating sooon !!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#877

Originally posted by: BeYourself

are you like satakli again??🤔

Yeah 🤓

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Posted: 11 years ago

#878

Originally posted by: Divi.C
get well soon...
i just wanted to tell that i m more interested inzoya's past...because i wanted to know how she cammme out of her horrible life...n ya i like present also as she is mmoving in her life for good...
your stories are like real that i can feel some time

..

I am feeling quite better now 😳

Aww thank u soo much for saying that ,,

seriously it means alot to me 😊

I agree with u thats what I was trying to convey thru this story ,,

Thanks !

I am glad that u r loving it 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#879

Originally posted by: treasure11

Yeah 🤓

may i know the reason?? 🤔

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Posted: 11 years ago

#880

Originally posted by: Amin21
wow bubble yaar what to say ?!
the words cant describe it 👏

oh god yaar that scene was very very painful to read once I watched a scene like this on TV and for so long that was giving me nightmares and it was not less than that.

I really wanted to cry for those who goes though all this in their real life 😭

thanks for not going to details about it

got so worried with this time that she would bear that pain again but love the way she reject it and now what the hell this bit** is trying to do ?😡

isn't it enough for her ? 😕

just one thing does asad know about her past ?

I mean she didn't tell him about her past but he in a convo with his friend said that his family wont accept a girl like zoya easily so that means her past is kind of predictable for him ?

and he accepted it no😕

lets see what happens

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