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Posted: 11 years ago
This time i am early..at least i am commenting before you updated your next chapter🤣
but i still couldn't res a place for myself in the first two pages 😆


the Skype chat was superb!!!!!
i loved it how Asad was caught... 😳
and he saw the hickey too ☺️

but the flashback scenes really makes me so gloomy...i feel so sad for her...
but now, i am excited to read about how Zoya manages to come out of that wicked house...😛

very very intriguing...and i don't think that i need to mention that every time?? 😉😳

hope you are well now...take care jaani...😳

i miss you
love you loads 😳❤️
🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

D start of updt was nice

as expected Zoya got 2 knew Asad's comnt
she is happy wid d new emotions coming in her
Asad downloaded her iv & movies
FB was horrible
1 rape was not enough that she started selling herself off
Sachi i hate this Zoya now🤢
i know she was helpless 1st time & doesn't has a place 2 go
but man she didn't confronted Mrs S & later agreed wid her
& slept wid many men 4 1 whole yr
can this story get any worst
even if she raised her voice now its 2 late
she has sold not only her body but her soul & self respect 2
I don't know her mother story she left Guffi but why we don't know
but Raziya used 2 badmouth her & she hated her mom initially but than she became that herself
Zoya's aim was never 2 become actress than what was d need 2 sleep wid man 4 getting movies
Highly disappointed👎🏼 not wid u but wid Zoya 4 her wrong decisions
& she absolutely doesn't deserve Asad now 😵
cuz true he is not a virgin also but he didn't sell himself or bought girls 2 pleasure himself
Asad needs some other girl & Zoya can enjoy in Bollywood serving as a mistress 2 get films
This story will b my least liked story now😭
I thought d worst was over but no it continued 4 a yr & than Mrs S asked her son mayb 2 rap Zoya. Disgusting🤢

I know u will b sad & angry on me after reading this comnt but forgive me Bablu i couldn't take it. I was pissed wid 1st rape scene so u can imagine how disgusted i would have felt now.
& i also know u'll say its how this world is & it actually happens wid many but sorry deary Asya r way more precious 2 me i can't see them shown like this. I feel like puking.

Like u i also love Asya so u must have understood how difficult it would have been 4 me 2 say not 2 end up Asya but that's true Bablu its not Zoya was wronged or something but she literally selled herself even after she felt disgusted she continued doing it.

& yes u should end it wid nxt part i m not sure if i would read it or will b able 2 comnt

Sorry sweety its my frustration don't feel sad I m very very sorry but i didn't like this i can't help. My heart is so sour after this update💔


I love u Bablu always ❤️
just cuz i didn't like 1 story doesn't mean i don't love u😉
ur still my awesome writer🤗
Jas


I am sry
I agree with what has said about zoya
I am sry bubble
I will wait for ur next story

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Posted: 11 years ago
Like button not working...damn phone
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Posted: 11 years ago
pls yaar.. still more is left for her to bare..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: treasure11

REAS FOR

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shree
ankie sanu
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Reas?? 🤔🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsm update.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Cont asap.
Thanx 4 d pm..
T.c..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Bubblu mere mazak nahi udana 😡 😆
I don't know how to edit it


haha ok 🤔😆
ohh then u should ask someone else ?? 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R


ohh please tell me she would flirt with him using them... 😳
Thank god!! It's done with... 😳


haha ok I will think about this 😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hosanna..



Now I'm excited for the next chapter since you said they are going to come face to face and my name is Adela BTW :)


I will try my best to make it enough interesting ,,
ohh nice name 😳
but u know what I love Hosanna too ,,
its kinda my favorite song too 😆

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