Th#5 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 14 to 17

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#831

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

u can edit it if u want 😆

Bubblu mere mazak nahi udana 😡 😆

I don't know how to edit it

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Divya.S.R

@Divya.S.R

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#832

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

haha yeah for some future scenes she needs to know a few words 😆
Yup its done even I am gonna end FB in next one 😳

ohh please tell me she would flirt with him using them... 😳

Thank god!! It's done with... 😳

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#833

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hosanna..

@hosanna..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#834

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Thanks Hosanna 😳
I am glad that you liked it !!
yeah poor Asad 😆
she has gone thru the worst past ever ,,
yup she is gonna speak up now !!
they r gonna come face to face in next one 😉

Now I'm excited for the next chapter since you said they are going to come face to face and my name is Adela BTW :)

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#835

Wonderful update Loved it Thanks for the pm

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vinita459

@vinita459

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#836

Hey Bubble,

Sorry for commenting so late ... Read last three chapters together. Feeling really sad for Zoya 😭

Her past has been quite painful :(

This story brought back the memory of your first FF which for me still is one of your best work. I remember, I kept questioning you if zoya will misunderstand Asad. Will she help him to come out of the trauma.

Again I have the same question 😊

I am really looking forward to read Asad's reaction when he gets to know the truth. I hope he understand and accepts her. I know you've already mentioned a happy ending so not that worried :)

Looking forward to read more.

Vinita

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#837

Mujhe present track Aur padna tha :-( :-(

Mrs.saxena... Disgusting me...

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Heena

@aarzoo50

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Posted: 11 years ago

#838

lovely update...
first part was cute...
bechara asad abhi to ek hi sentence ka meaning pata chala zoya ko...
aagay to picture abhi baaki hai mere dost 😆
oops room to gaya... aadat daalni padegi iski abto...
the flashback always makes me dukhi...
it was sad that zoya had to continue living under that filthy woman even after that... n do wteva she orders her 😔
is she gonna ask zoya to marry his son as she wants to keep her under her control foreva n bounded to the house...
Does Nisha kno about the doings of her great mom???
continue soon...

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Miss-Appy

@Miss-Appy

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#839

My most awaited part ! 🥳
Awww just loved it Bubble !! ❤️
Zoya's tone in the beginning followed by his embarassment was too good ! 😆
Bechari kisi ko compliment kiya lekin lafzon ka kuch aur hi matlab nikla ! 😆
OMG !! Asad's teasing ! ☺️ 😆
Zoya and Nisha r really cute !! ❤️
Asad's OCD kikcking in ! 😆
OMG !! As if Shah wasnt enough, there was another bas***d ! 🤬
Mrs. Saxena is really too much ! 🤢
Loved the update !! Waiting and hoping for tomorrow 😉 😳