Th#5 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 14 to 17

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#841

wow... loved the skpe chat...

asad eyes...!!!!!!!!!!!

ireally wish nisha gave them some privacy...

i guess atlast the flash back is coming toend...

finish it one full update dear...

it is like happy with the present... but ending with bitterness..

so end it fully.. and give the present henceforth...

awesome update as usual...

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#842

amazing update as usual ...
update soon
thnx for pm

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Heena

@aarzoo50

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Posted: 11 years ago

#843

umm i forgot to ask... Nisha dint come in frame while zoya was talking to asad.. he dint see her... koi raaz hai kya???

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#844

flashback is too painful! I feel somekinda pain..while reading it...poor zoe! Glad that its ending soon!
Present is going on too well...asad-zoya i'm loving them!
Wonder what might happen when zoya discusses her past wid Asad! She's nt virgin..was forced to spend nights wid numerous man! The reason she's in that height of success...hope Asad understands her!
Update sooonnn!

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Divi.C

@Divi.C

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Posted: 11 years ago

#845

get well soon...

i just wanted to tell that i m more interested inzoya's past...because i wanted to know how she cammme out of her horrible life...n ya i like present also as she is mmoving in her life for good...

your stories are like real that i can feel some time

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#846

wow bubble yaar what to say ?!

the words cant describe it 👏

oh god yaar that scene was very very painful to read once I watched a scene like this on TV and for so long that was giving me nightmares and it was not less than that.

I really wanted to cry for those who goes though all this in their real life 😭

thanks for not going to details about it

got so worried with this time that she would bear that pain again but love the way she reject it and now what the hell this bit** is trying to do ?😡

isn't it enough for her ? 😕

just one thing does asad know about her past ?

I mean she didn't tell him about her past but he in a convo with his friend said that his family wont accept a girl like zoya easily so that means her past is kind of predictable for him ?

and he accepted it no😕

lets see what happens

waiting

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#847

D start of updt was nice

as expected Zoya got 2 knew Asad's comnt

she is happy wid d new emotions coming in her

Asad downloaded her iv & movies

FB was horrible

1 rape was not enough that she started selling herself off

Sachi i hate this Zoya now🤢

i know she was helpless 1st time & doesn't has a place 2 go

but man she didn't confronted Mrs S & later agreed wid her

& slept wid many men 4 1 whole yr

can this story get any worst

even if she raised her voice now its 2 late

she has sold not only her body but her soul & self respect 2

I don't know her mother story she left Guffi but why we don't know

but Raziya used 2 badmouth her & she hated her mom initially but than she became that herself

Zoya's aim was never 2 become actress than what was d need 2 sleep wid man 4 getting movies

Highly disappointed👎🏼 not wid u but wid Zoya 4 her wrong decisions

& she absolutely doesn't deserve Asad now 😵

cuz true he is not a virgin also but he didn't sell himself or bought girls 2 pleasure himself

Asad needs some other girl & Zoya can enjoy in Bollywood serving as a mistress 2 get films

This story will b my least liked story now😭

I thought d worst was over but no it continued 4 a yr & than Mrs S asked her son mayb 2 rap Zoya. Disgusting🤢

I know u will b sad & angry on me after reading this comnt but forgive me Bablu i couldn't take it. I was pissed wid 1st rape scene so u can imagine how disgusted i would have felt now.

& i also know u'll say its how this world is & it actually happens wid many but sorry deary Asya r way more precious 2 me i can't see them shown like this. I feel like puking.

Like u i also love Asya so u must have understood how difficult it would have been 4 me 2 say not 2 end up Asya but that's true Bablu its not Zoya was wronged or something but she literally selled herself even after she felt disgusted she continued doing it.

& yes u should end it wid nxt part i m not sure if i would read it or will b able 2 comnt

Sorry sweety its my frustration don't feel sad I m very very sorry but i didn't like this i can't help. My heart is so sour after this update💔

I love u Bablu always ❤️

just cuz i didn't like 1 story doesn't mean i don't love u😉

ur still my awesome writer🤗

Jas