Th#5 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 14 to 17 - Page 16

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Posted: 11 years ago
muzhe update ki lat lag gaii...
its too much ti ask for an update but ye dil mange more...
will u update???
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Posted: 11 years ago
Luvd first para ...😳
Zoya with that old man..😲 nooo...please save her ..make her run away or pepper spray is there...😛 cant even imagine old man near zoe..😭

update soon...




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Posted: 11 years ago
good going..nice...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update dear...
Sad that Zoya broke Asad heart...
Awww my pooor babyyy ..
But the flashback is gonna open a lott if secrets...
Hope zoya is save...
Do continue sooonnn...
~JAZ~
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

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unres,.

lovely update bubba,..
amazingly written
the way you manage present and past together is just WOW,..

i thought whole family decieved zoe,.. buh it means that humi was never on th odd side,..
loved this zoe-humi euation,..
and th way she communicated,..

and mae sexy baldy ghaffi died???😲😭
dooon know if Nisha is really a good friend,.. but in past and present she was always #TeamZoya,.. and i love that thing

so finally Zoya is leaving fah Germany and Asad doesnt want her to,.. and cant express his feelings.. the OLD woh actually Man! 😆
the remote swap thing and then falling,.. i saw that coming,..😆

and his these magical words,.. I dont want yah to go,..



Aww thanks Maliha for such a lovely comment 🤗
I am glad that you liked it !!
yeah Humi was never rude as I showed earlier too in chapter 3 ,,
Ghaffy ?? what kinda names r u guys making up of him 😲😆
yeah she is a good friend ignoring her mother ,,
haha yeah fall scene was obvious --- they were being soo clumsy 😳😆
Aww thanks !!
means alot to me ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

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oh this Man,.. knows how to cover up th things,..🥱
suddenly flipped what he said,..
and i just wonder what do you mean by: which made her realize that she was sitting in his lap and that too in an inappropriate manner. ☺️

Peck on for-head?? 😲
The Man is really cute n quick,..😆

and Zoe is all controling,.. giving a tough time to Asad,..
both having busy schedules,..
buh zoya would pull out time,...
and finally she left that torture cell,..
loved th update,..


yeah if he is having a friend like her then he deffo needs to cover up 🥱
it obvio means what u r thinking Mals 😆
yeah AAK rocks 😎
Yup she does come in the part as u know already 😉
Thanks !!
Will get to ur next comment now !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--


Well u r never here when I update
anyways ,,
be here tomorrow I am gonna update maybe !!

Yeah but u don't tell when ur going to update 😡
Ok when ur updating next 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeah but DP looks much better here 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

finally zohurraa, left th house,..
i feel smthng fishy,.. Nisha's Mom has just something wrong,..🤔
and zoe n humi's meeting,..amazingly written,..👍🏼
so finally it backfires,.. and Razia is eating what she throw off,..
but th poor humi is suffering with her,..

and it seems Asad was more excited fah meeting zoe,,.rather than his contract,..😆
her labelling him with Jahan pnaa??? 😲

she still pulled off time,.. but with that jackass Sunil??😲😡
all excitement of Asad is gone,..
dont know if she is doing it intentionally,.. but it wasa bad move to come with him on her last meet-up with Asad,...

overall i just



yeah Nisha's mom is not a nice woman 🤔
Aww thanks !!
glad that you liked it 😳
yeah Humi is suffering for no reasons --- poor girl
she is leaving soo obvio he will be more excited to meet her --- moreover she is soo sexy too
Yup he is Jahanpanah here for sure 😉
yeah poor Asad
Aww means alot to me !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

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unres,..buh not removing that gif,..
😆

his all anguish was poured IN th hug,.. a tight hug,..
i guess ASYA's frst proper wala hug,..
i thought Sunil to be a hinderance and he acted like all catalyst,..😆

she was upto mark fah her target to NOT GIVE IN,..
buh Asad finally made a way,..☺️

now after this scene i ffel Asad would be able to easily spend 10 days,..😆
this whole update was amazingly written,,
a HOT one,.. though i want it to get hotter n hotter,..😳

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yeah don't remove that gif because I am loving it --- he looks soo hot
haha yeah that was their first hug after first fall 😆
yeah u all were bashing my poor sunil and look he kinda helped them out 🤔
Yup he did it finally ,,
haha thanks !!
I am glad that you liked it 😳
no he won't be able to live without her for ten days specially after this kiss
I hope the next update is hotter according to u 🤓

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