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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
OMG!!!😭

Saima Di,

The song you mentioned at the beginning was beautiful.. I haven't heard it.. But the lines were very nice..😳

This was truly a tough one to read..😭

Poor Zoya! It must have been so difficult for her..😭

Thank God, they found her on time.. 😊

Loved the way Asad tried to give her moral support.. But she was far too broken to realise I guess..

Happy that she opened to someone.. She has had such a horrible past.. 😕

And being an orphan, she has no one to turn to..
'I have no one Dr Khan...I live in a girls hostel in Bhopal, I was raised an orphan...something that I never seemed to complain about'
I feel so sad for her.. 😭😭😭

This was truly beautiful.. You are the best Di!🤗

Continue soon..😊

Love you!❤️🤗
Edited by pinks2911 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed


Thank u so much Prashni

I also first heard it on QH and it touched my heart. I was watching something a few days ago and it was playing in the background...and that was it I couldn't get it out 😆

It's true no one should ever be subjected to such cruelties but the sad fact is that young women are.

As part of my work I work with young girls who were drawn in to gangs and were sexually exploited,...one of my kids is currently in hospital suffering from paranoid schizophrenia 😭



Hats off to you for been in the profession you are in. 👏 👏 👏


It started off bleak but will pick up 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: chahatmalhotra

great story continue soon
love chahatmalhotra


Thank you so much Chahat 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi

Thanks for Pm.

It was very Interesting and Different story line.
Zoya was injected drugs by some people,it was so sad for her.
Humeria was so nice that she helped her from the stock,it was so nice.
Haider was nice police that he wanted to know about Zoya's condition,it was nice.
Poor Zoya she was was very scared and she didn't have any one.
Asad(KSG) very nice that he gave moral support to Zoya.
The way Zoya explained to Asad(KSG) about the incidents was so horrible.
I can't stop crying after read that.😭
The whole part was so nicely written.😊
Please Continue soon,I am waiting here.
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(ASAD will be KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY,MISSING ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)
PRIYAKABHI.


Thank you so much Priya, am glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani

wow this is sooo beautisul written


Thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammusjyoti

loved it...
feeling sad for zoya...


Thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: laks_vish

oh poor Zoya.. She will once again stand tall and proud inspite of all the hardships..


She most certainly will

😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: roshni_A

awesome concept..beautifully written..pls updt soon...


Thank u so much Roshni

Will update by mid week 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: pinks2911

OMG!!!😭


Saima Di,

The song you mentioned at the beginning was beautiful.. I haven't heard it.. But the lines were very nice..😳

This was truly a tough one to read..😭

Poor Zoya! It must have been so difficult for her..😭

Thank God, they found her on time.. 😊

Loved the way Asad tried to give her moral support.. But she was far too broken to realise I guess..

Happy that she opened to someone.. She has had such a horrible past.. 😕

And being an orphan, she has no one to turn to..
'I have no one Dr Khan...I live in a girls hostel in Bhopal, I was raised an orphan...something that I never seemed to complain about'
I feel so sad for her.. 😭😭😭

This was truly beautiful.. You are the best Di!🤗

Continue soon..😊

Love you!❤️🤗


Hey Pinks

Hope you are well sweetheart

You have t hear it, it's a beautiful song.

Thank you so much for liking it...and you are the best Little Di

Love you too 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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