Mini SS - Broken: Part 5 (Completed) Page 61 - Page 48

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Aaah

My little Jaani ghooming and phirring around the world lol

In Sha Allah

When u get home mujhe message kar dena

Love u lots little Api

Mwah🤗

haha...lol we just stayed inside airport

will let u knw

love u too badi api
🤗

awsm update.
Superb part.
Luvd it.
Cont asap.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c..

I read tis ss in one go..m its beautiful

Awesome updates
Started from confrontation to acceptance, then trip to goa, finished the case & finally confession
All the emotions written beautifully
Words are lesser to praise your writing skills sister.
It was a wonderful story.
I requested you to write a epilogue of this story
Zoya discharged & coming to her home as a bride.
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

finally manage to read the last 2 parts together...

I love the updates

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

awesome one..
drooling shooling k baad indirect questioning by zoya...
jb baat bani nahi to point blank range pe she asked asad to say yes or no...
thankyou for making it a yes 😊
Maya is such a cutie pie... khade khade trip to Goa plan krdi 😳
zoya still gets horrified on the things which remind her of the horrific incident... glad that asad is always by her side...
case has been shut vd deserved punishments to the culprits...
and the ending was lovely...
ilu ilu wali...
vl miss it...
keep writing 😊

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Sis,

I am speechless after this. You know I keep away from news at all times because the negatives of the society that are shown there, I cant seem to handle it too well. But you made me ponder over a few things, very important I must add.

Reading about an innocent girl who suffered so much brutality at the hands of other human beings that her state of mind, confidence & will of living is gone, made me weep. It made me realize that despite all the problems we face & crib about, we are definitely better than many others.

This whole ordeal that Zoe had to go through was definitely heart breaking. I couldn't help but cry for her. But surely Allah helps His creations in ways no one can think of. Making Asad & Zoe meet this way. Filling the gaps & adding color to their once black & white life. They surely had to go through pain but in the end they emerged victorious due to their faith & hope in Allah & their support & love for each other.

I pray to Allah to erase all the pains from each of our lives & fill them with peace & love.

As for you my Sis, I pray that The Al-Mighty blesses you with His chosen rewards in addition to everything that you ask of. Ameen.

I loved this one a lot, n I know my words aren't capable of describing how much but still I hope you know that I Loved it!!

Love lots..

PS. At one point I was ready to go after Asad with a stick to bring him back to his senses. But thankfully he understood it & made up for it.

Originally posted by: gowtu

Nd I love u saima 🤗 ❤️
Sch a beautiful end that was...
Awesome updt.. Nd amzng story...
I loved it totally