Mini SS - Broken: Part 5 (Completed) Page 61

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#491

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unres

Zoya was watching Asad in gym

How does anyone feel after watching Adonis work out a sweat like that

finally Zoya boldly asked him d qstn

& he said yes

we gota a kiss

Asad told Maya...i love her

she send them Goa 2 relax

lovely part😃

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#492

part b

Zoya was scared 2 sit in plane

they both spend time wid each other 2 know better

Zoya got frightened & Asad calmed her

& d morning scene was very beautifully written👏

loved d part😃

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#493

so d culprits were punished

Zoya was relieved after d justice

she has 2 go back 2 d clinic 4 completing treatment

Asad told her he'll take her home where they'll put d past behind

finally they said ILU

awesome end

loved d story😃

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lovebluez

@lovebluez

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Posted: 11 years ago

#494

Thank You for this mini SS!! Keep writing!! Love reading your stories!!😊

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#495

amazing...

wonderfull...

luv it...

beautifully written...

will be waiting for more wonderfull stories from u...

thx fr the pm...

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krati

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Posted: 11 years ago

#496

I am glad zoya didn't have to go to testify them... Even I want to twirl with joy at that point

.. But as u am in metro can't do that but 😆 rest assured I enjoyed this update a lot... Their moments were sweet and adad declaring himself as zoya's boyfriend was best part and gave a youthful feel

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Priya_KABHI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#497

Thanks for Update.

It was so lovely and Interesting part.😊

Asad(KSG) and Zoya moments were so lovely explained,I Like it.😳

The feelings of Zoya was so nice when she saw Asad(KSG) body.

The sunset on the bench was so cute and beautiful.😳

ASYA(KABHI) spent the whole day walking together.😊

The case was over and that guys were punished,it was nice.

Fianlly,Asad(KSG) and Zoya confessed to each other,it was so lovely.😳

I didn't expect that this ss was over,But it was so Awesome SS.👏

If possible,lease write Epilogue to it,,if not it's your choice,I like this SS very much and Ending wass so lovely.😊

Please write like this Wonderful Stories.

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(ASAD will be KSG ONLY,ASYA=KABHI ONLY,MISSING ASYA(KABHI) Very Much)

PRIYAKABHI.

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#498

Lovely ending of an wonderful story!!

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Simran Bhandary

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Posted: 11 years ago

#499

My god!! that was such a beautiful update!!!
totally awesome!! must say a brilliant piece of writing!!!
it was penned so beautifully!! had a great time reading it!!
loved the entire chapter!! it was just beyond words!!
uh just nailed it!!