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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: daisydee425
Wonderful

Thank u so much 😊

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

hi badi api
mai aj ghar jaeng..
abhi Bahrain mai hn..mmorning mai Pakistan phchnge

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: rajsmi
Great story Saima...happy wala ending :-)
Thank you for all the pms and for responding patiently to every comment!

You write beautifully!! All your stories have that special personal touch to it!! Looking forward to more and really nice knowing you :-)

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Thank u so so much

Have appreciated your support, and have enjoyed interacting with you

Lots of love

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
hi badi api
mai aj ghar jaeng..
abhi Bahrain mai hn..mmorning mai Pakistan phchnge

Aaah

My little Jaani ghooming and phirring around the world lol

In Sha Allah

When u get home mujhe message kar dena

Love u lots little Api

Mwah 🤗

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anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Totally love the final chapter

So zoya put it on the table simple yes or no

Asad couldn't have her walk away

His ammi persuade him to sy yes

Saying yes made it all better they both r over the moon

So maya persuade them to go away it was needed they need got to know each other

So the court and she is not needed yay they r found guilty and 25 yrs sentence

So she went back to treatment 2 wks more then h takes her home our home zoya

I will never let u go after I got u

Love confession

Love it

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Saima Syed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: anopama
Totally love the final chapter
So zoya put it on the table simple yes or no
Asad couldn't have her walk away
His ammi persuade him to sy yes
Saying yes made it all better they both r over the moon
So maya persuade them to go away it was needed they need got to know each other
So the court and she is not needed yay they r found guilty and 25 yrs sentence
So she went back to treatment 2 wks more then h takes her home our home zoya
I will never let u go after I got u
Love confession
Love it

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Thank u so much

Am glad u liked the last chapter 😊

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Sanjhari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#467

finally manage to read the last 2 parts together...

I love the updates

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Heena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#468

awesome one..
drooling shooling k baad indirect questioning by zoya...
jb baat bani nahi to point blank range pe she asked asad to say yes or no...
thankyou for making it a yes 😊
Maya is such a cutie pie... khade khade trip to Goa plan krdi 😳
zoya still gets horrified on the things which remind her of the horrific incident... glad that asad is always by her side...
case has been shut vd deserved punishments to the culprits...
and the ending was lovely...
ilu ilu wali...
vl miss it...
keep writing 😊

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#469

Hey Sis,

I am speechless after this. You know I keep away from news at all times because the negatives of the society that are shown there, I cant seem to handle it too well. But you made me ponder over a few things, very important I must add.

Reading about an innocent girl who suffered so much brutality at the hands of other human beings that her state of mind, confidence & will of living is gone, made me weep. It made me realize that despite all the problems we face & crib about, we are definitely better than many others.

This whole ordeal that Zoe had to go through was definitely heart breaking. I couldn't help but cry for her. But surely Allah helps His creations in ways no one can think of. Making Asad & Zoe meet this way. Filling the gaps & adding color to their once black & white life. They surely had to go through pain but in the end they emerged victorious due to their faith & hope in Allah & their support & love for each other.

I pray to Allah to erase all the pains from each of our lives & fill them with peace & love.

As for you my Sis, I pray that The Al-Mighty blesses you with His chosen rewards in addition to everything that you ask of. Ameen.

I loved this one a lot, n I know my words aren't capable of describing how much but still I hope you know that I Loved it!!

Love lots..

PS. At one point I was ready to go after Asad with a stick to bring him back to his senses. But thankfully he understood it & made up for it.