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Amna

@...KSGmiAmor...

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Fariii

Absolutely Amazing update

i love airport scenes

Asad and Zoya are finally together forever and beyond

👏

loved it

u are amazing

🤗

please dear start a new FF

u write so wonderful

⭐️

i felt an emotional rush because of u

Full dramatic chapter

i am going to miss this story so much

cant believe its finally ended

best of luck for your future Fari 😊

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Zara dekho kaun agaya hai!

WOHHOO DID I JUST SEE MY NAME IN THE CREDITS? :O

*cries phoot phoot ke*

*khushi ke asson*

*again cries phoot phoot ke*

Fari 🤗

I'll be forever grateful to this EPIC Fiction of urs, cause it gave an opportunity to know u, which I suppose nothing else could have 😆

This fiction made our interactions happen and I feel too proud as I now can declare to the world that Fari is one of those truest friend I ever have met via I-F 🤗

This fiction, made me laugh.. made me cry and shed buckets of tears and feel so fuzzy and loved at the same moment..

I must have told u before that, not all are blessed as you are.. U have an extra-ordinary gift from Allah Tala.. that is the power of expressing the true human emotions with just mere words..

This fiction, made me a better person and I still read this fiction whenever I am bored from the first update..

This fiction is one of those fictions which celebrated the love and bond that OUR QH shared.. the characters were complete relate-able and this story has been no less than an epic milestone..

This fiction made the characters alive and no person could ever done justice to the show apart from you.. and this fiction did the same..

The fiction ended.. and left me with so many honey sweet memories and I hope that your write a book one day only for my off-springs to know what family is.. to know what human emotions are.. to know what love is..

Which unfortunately a very few do.. now..

I cant believe that the story has already come to an end.. but I strongly agree that all good things come to an end so does the best things.. only for the better and the beshtest to happen.. that means I WANT ANOTHER FICTION BILKUL AISA HI AUR WOH BHI JALDI 😡

And I am falling short of words to express my gratitude my feelings my sentiments my memories that are INTERTWINED with this fiction! 😆

So.. ILY 🤗 Afridi ki kasam

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Heartbeats..

@Heartbeats..

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Firstly am surely going to miss thiss FF...:(

Afterall it was one of my favorite works on this forum!

And coming to the last part, the ending was way too awesome...Loved it thoroughly...especially the way you blended mr.akdu to Mr.Romantic! 😳😛

I Just love that shade of Asad! <3

Nd the scenes between Zoya and and Ayaa-Dilshad...were truly emotional...

and last but not least...i feel sad for Zaroon :( 😭

hope that guy finds someone perfect for him too :D

On a whole it was a beautiful ending to a beautiful story! :)

Hope we would get to read next writing work of yours soon! :)

keep Writing!

Love ❤️

-Vaishnavi!

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904910

Suspended

Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Beautiful end to Beautiful FF...👏 WIll miss this FF alot..

Such a fabulous update .was emotional in the start and later on it was happy

Ending was awesome.Luvd Roamntic Asad.😳 Zoe Ayan and Dilshad scenes were very touchy.

Thanks for Brilliant FF .😊

Its a request please do write more on AsYa.

Please do pm me if u write more..count me inn.😊

Meera

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annanya

@annanyaksgian

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

last update..really its a long journey

i loved the ending..i m gonna miss them

i love everything about this ff but mostly asad,asad s dialogue,his teasing zoya..i m gonna miss him

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Wow destinies intertwined one of my first read she I joined forum

What a ending it was very emotional very sad very happy

In one word mind blowing

Zoya time with ayaan and dilshad brought tears to my eyes when she asked for forgiveness

Oh zaroon wanted to know what happen he was waiting for happy news

But got to love him asad told him the right thing in the end

Zaroon love was the best kind of love not what asad and zoya felt for each other

Having someone loves u and becomes selfless and sacrifice all the time for ur happiness that is the best and most deserving love ...I cried for zaroon

But my asya is happy and that is all tht matters

Asad was so broken when she left then when he read the letter wow what words

Love him asking the driver what u still doing here start the car

Can't believe her ran all the way to the airport actually all the way a block away from the airport and then took a cab and paid hundreds of dollars

Love his confession no hesitation just get it out there we have wasted enough time

He beg falling to his knees 😭👏 But she still have to go he knows tht but in a few days back to india

But asad is behind her he is going he asked prasad for things tht means he is going

Omg he kissed her he actually kissed her wow that is just the teaser

Oh zaroon so selfless give up his seat for him

Zoya was ecstatic she couldn't believe her eyes

Oh he is so cute and cheeky and love his teases

So a place to start the honeymoon and more places too

He definitely love her more he is travelling without clothes ans he have enough love for both of them

Loved it totally

Best part for me in this actually so much the entire asad jealousy but when he took her shopping date

Also their fights marriage

Love it hope to see more from u soon

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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 11 years ago

#427

👏A very emotional and lovely ending

honestly i never wanted to be end, but everything has its end.

so DI is ending and I will wait for the day when i will receive a PM abt the new story of yours fari you are fab👏

Such a great ending, I loved the relationship Mona n rabert share

Dilshad and Zoya's relationship what a mother daughter duo would have relationship like this as the MIL and DIL share

Zaroon Zaroon Zaroon he is a besttesst friend. The one who loved Zoya in true senses and meaning. what is love sometime it is a sacrifice, and Zaroon was the winner of heart 👏❤️

who sacrifices his love for his love wonderful, in fact he sacrificed his seat also😆

And AsYa.

They kissed aww...Asad miyan ko jate jate romantic hona tha. wo bhi itna🤪

honeymoon n all haan

The best part of the FF was the day when Zoya left the house in anst and Asad leaves to find her and she was sitting outside a dargah

Wonderfully written Fari 👏 You have always been a true and fab writer.sometimes you made me cry and I am waiting for the day when I will get a PM for your new FF

👏

till then keep smiling

stay healty good bless

and dont stop writing

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#428

Awesome last update
Zoya reached KV. Ayaan zoya talk was nice. He saw something missing & asked her but she ignored & told him that she was tired. Ayaan told zoya that asad love her bit when he was angry, he hurt his love ones but then came back & rectify his mistake. After that zoya went to dilshad room. She asked forgiveness & dilshad told her if it's abt self respect, she will forgive her. She explained zoya abt feelings when u r in love. U have to kill ur ego if u want to love someone. Finally she left KV without telling ayaan & dilshad. Zaroon saw him & wanted to kill asad. He asked zoya but she didn't say anything & started crying. He stopped her on airport & told her that asad love her & he can say that confidently. Zoya hurt him with her words. He kept quite for a while but again back to normal as he doesn't want to see zoya in pain. Driver gave zoya letter to asad & he left for airport. He called zaroon & told him for not check in. He shouted zoya name & she heared it. She thought that asad can't be there but he called her name again & zoya turned. She saw asad standing there looking tired . He confessed his love straight away with out any issues. He told her that he love her unconditionally. Both confessed, hugged & cried together. He put her wedding ring again in her finger. Zoya as aked him what's wrong & he told her abt his headache. She gave him lecture for not caring himself. Their convo was wonderful. Everyone on airport clapped for them. Mr D.B reached there & asad asked him abt zoya visa & he said that he will try that she will get visa soon with out any problem. Finally they said good bye to each other & zoya left. Asad wanted to give zoya surprise but he didn't get seat as flight was full. Zaroon cheered zoya & told her that he recorded full confession. He excused himself .& met asad. Asad thanked him & he listened what asad wanted to do. Asad reached in plane & met zoya. She was more than happy to see asad there & he told her that's it's honeymoon for them. Asad realised that zaroon left his seat for him to be with zoya.
I started reading this story when it was on half way & like it. After that I was a regular reader of this story. It was a wonderful story. I like many scenes in this story but one of the favourite was when asad wanted to spend time alone & zoya went to his room bc he was there for everyone when they need but when he needs someone he spend alone time. Waiting for an epilogue soon.
Thanks for pm

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#429

Last update !!!
And i think i m last one to comment!!!..
.You got me emotional!!
I actually cried!!!!
Zoya, Zaroon and Asad!!!
Beautifully penned!! 👏...
Loved it!!
!Mixed emotions!!!
Zaroon is so selfless!!!
Aaj kal aisa koun karta hai!!
I too was scared wid Asad what if she left!!
!I was crying along wid Zoya feeling hw it feels love nt to be reciprocated,!!
Crying with zaroon seeing you love loving someone else!!
but happy for her to finding true love and being happy!!
I can't explain what i m feeling right nw!!
It was so awesome!!
Super!!
Beautiful!!!
Amazing!!!!
You are the best writer!!!!
... EPILOUGE Chahiye hi chahiye!!!

Edited by AsyaManeet - 11 years ago