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@ToughStuff

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Awesome update di!!
Zoya at Asad's house!!
She doesn't remember her accident or intentionally hiding it?
Haider handling the case!
And he is najma's husband!!
Asad hiding his identity!!
Waiting for more

Edited by AsyaManeet - 11 years ago

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Awesome Story...

Just caught up with it now.

Please continue soon

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Nice prologue.
Awesome update
Akram wanted to kill zoya & somebody shoot him
Mystery abt how zoya left & didn't recognise asad
I think some person of ghafoor took her from there
Zoya & asad met again in Bhopal
She didn't recognise him & asad thought to play along with her
Nice office convo, poor staff has to bear so many words from zoya
Asad brought her to his home & introduced her
Dilshad sensed something & teased him
Zoya saw everyone on breakfast table but didn't saw asad
Dilshad told her that he was out of jogging
Driver rashid & zoya scene was wonderful
So najma is haider wife & he is appointed for akram case
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm
Sorry for late comment as I was away for eid celebration with family

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Zoya doesn't remember Asad - Another mystery.

She's a firecracker and Asad's adorable.

The story is very engaging, look forward to the next chapter.

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Wow!! are Nikhat and Zoya twins??

Zoya is little dumb or did not notice that!!

She was gone to Dilshad's constructions and meet Asad Ahmed Khan!

I mean Precap is saying Asad had managed to hide his identity!!

But Zoya knows all Dilshad's and Asad's name 😆 😆

Okay it is going to be fun!!

I liked Mujeeb and Zoya confrontations!! how Zoya sulked every time when met mujib!!

do continue soon Di 😆

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Nice update

So zoya was the girl asad helped that nite and she disappear

And again he saved her from his driver

Oh he is so smitten

She showed him his card and he decides to play her seeing she said she dint remember him form lonavla

Oh wonder was it prasad asad had sweating bullet I'm his chair

Oh he is a small architect too so will he do the job

Only if she comes and stay at his house which she agree

He don't want to lose sight of her

So haider is put on the case and he is Najma husband so gaffur is ex commissioner

Love asad taking care of zoya and dilshad questioning him love happens

Oh can't wait for more asya moments

Wonder what clues haider found

Continue

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

amazing update loved it so much

thanx for the pm

update soon

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

hay yaar

welcome back 😉

as love asya and your writing skills so no need to say anything its going to rock as your other ffs and ss .

continue soon and do pm me

waiting

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

wonderful storyline...

murder mystery alon with romance!!

wow...

just read the prologue and chap 1...i liked asad in this...somewhat free!!

najma is married...that too to haider..great

let's see what the future update have in store for us...

continue soon

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

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