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oh my...
i m dead reading this update...
a powerpacked one...
total bang on update...
it was the unpredictable one ... well yours hv always been that ...
i thought it would b sort of " let bygones be bygones" vd asad blaming zoya that it was all her fault..
but it came out so different n beautiful...
zoya confronted him...
initially tried to put some sense into him politely...
he dint listen...
the fight over the alcohol scared nt only zoya bt me too...
i underestimated zoya i thought it vl move to suicide attempt... for asads harsh not caring abt her being alive or dead comment...
but she came out stronger...
she has faith in the planning she is putting into action so do i...
asad got a nice scary punishment for his words...
n we got the mangalpuri asad...
the whole drama u created abt accident n zoyas death was fantastic...
i luv this zoya more... keep it up zoya bache... give this peahead a hard tym...
me already waiting for next part...
p.s. after ua super cute n long updates i forget hw to b angry on u for nt updating on tym...

The update was worth waiting...and in the first part i felt like hating Asad...in d second half i was literally crying with him...u writes very well...i just loved d whole thing...and d new determined Zoya with her plan...awesomee.

Am speechless!! The hurt and the pain...i donno whom to cry for more??

OMG this one is absolutely awesome

omg subhi it was awesome
i literary cried buckets
the pain of asad was felt by me as if i was him
how do u manage to write so well yar
n i live this zoya
go baby give him a tough time
until he goes down on his knees and pleads for ur love
worth waiting
bt pls udate next chapter fast


now ine personal question
have u given entrance for BHU?

loved the two parts ,, lot of things happening

full on drama packed updated. loved it <3

Res