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Originally posted by: farz_parachute

And, truly Aliya.



What a beautiful and sad ode to a lover.



Truly.



#callingyouyourname:)

I actually had to read that again. I mean you calling me Aliya not Aaloo. 😆

Thus the # sistah.


Oh and yes yes yes!!


I was totally thinking of the right word!!!


Tamara!

Royal! Yes it is more than dignified it is grand, epic. ROYAL!



Your Highness, Lady Juliet. Begum Juliet...?


;)


And. With that.


I'm back.


Who was that crying baby. Ask her to shut the @#$% up. Why she screaming.


Heee.

Originally posted by: Tamara27

I think you're talking about Rahat and Haya.

Haya is Najma's daughter.

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy

I know Farz, she did it. AND she still did it. :)

Juliet, how could you not-connect and still connect so beautifully with him?? This poem is terrific. 👏

What a beautiful and sad ode to a lover. I mean how beautifully you conveyed the deepest feeling of a wounded heart. Like something curved by a broken heart towards his one love. The feel of longing...and how he is craving for her presence. I can't even express how brilliant you are. This would be my second time (Rehan' was the first) I am reading your work and I am simply amazed. 👏 😳

And my absolute favourite line from this poem:

'Unbroken but shattered, beautifully fragile' :)

I don't take compliments too why! I can't... I don't know how to handle and I get clumsy...

We might gonna rebrand ourselves soon Juliet.


And we only have you to thank.


Look out. I'm proposing a new brand.

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Thus the # sistah.


Oh and yes yes yes!!


I was totally thinking of the right word!!!


Tamara!

Royal! Yes it is more than dignified it is grand, epic. ROYAL!



Your Highness, Lady Juliet. Begum Juliet...?


;)


And. With that.


I'm back.


Who was that crying baby. Ask her to shut the @#$% up. Why she screaming.


Heee.

Yes just make me Tanveer alright!

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

We might gonna rebrand ourselves soon Juliet.


And we only have you to thank.


Look out. I'm proposing a new brand.

Like Performance Anxious!

It's just beautiful

No! We should be thanking you for giving us THIS. And I can't appreciate you enough for your sheer brilliance. I am simply speechless. That's how brilliant you are Juliet. And it's not just because you wrote on Aahil, it's about how talented writer/poet you are. :)