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Originally posted by: jasminerose

Ok Another Amazing Poem

If season one had given an amazing writer Juliet, Season 2 has given a poet Juliet!!

If I go by this, then my heart goes out for him.

Beautifully written poem with beautifully elaborated emotions.❤️

(P.S. no idea about characters)

One question please I saw last night's episode and i.e. my first episode of the season. Who is the cute looking couple ?

Jas,

Okay.


Fragile is Aahil.


And.


This is Sanam.


No tweaking or teaking. I was just messy. And emotional.


Fragile is Aahil and this is Sanam.

:'(



He's always been hers.


Only she hasn't a clue.


Poor guy sobs.



And chokes his Love you too.



:'( :')



Sorry he disappointed you Jules!


Mauve phantom is shattered.


He's Fragile.


You got him. Just right. You don't get to see Mauve Phantom. But you got Fragile right.


So right.

:')

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Juliet!!

I'm truly very sorry!! Was it as difficult as I think it is? You put yourself through it all anyway. No wonder you're in such a state!!


You've made me an emotional mess!

Like Tamara. I too won't push anymore. No more hounding.


Phantom shall just be a memory.


For you a dark phase.




Still! You went ahead to posting it!



What do I do with myself now!




Jules. Your work is sincere and most heartfelt. I feel my fragile heart aching for the pain and that I'm guessing you're having to go through!


I take full responsibility. This time. It's really me. You can send me those hate mails!


But never. Never ever ever. Think that phantom is more important. He's not. You are.


And thank you. For the poem. And his heart...coz that's what Sanam is now.



You're very talented Juliet. If only you know just how much. If only.

NO No ! Don't be!

Originally posted by: Tamara27

I just got goosebumps...

I am so glad you wrote this before you watched the episode. Otherwise, we'd probably never have got this beautiful piece.

Juliet, I can't say enough how talented you are. Blessed with a rare gift, my friend.

If you can write like this for someone "you're just giving a chance to" then I want poetry on your love, Asad NOW.

Beautiful, amazing... EVERYTHING!!!

That's what this poem is ❤️

You aren't the only one disappointed in Phantom :(

I am trying to look at the positives here though - you know that's my thing!

Your heart is for love... not hate. AND... I don't want you hating Aahil 😭

But... I shall hound you no longer.

I love you too much to put you through something you find unbearable.

You amaze me. This was sooo beautiful.

Tamara!

And yes.



Unforgivable.



Phantom did do something unforgivable. He can cry a very lonesome tear. Or a flowing river. Still doesn't change the fact that he did something unforgivable.


And truly. Only a miracle can save him. A miracle. Nothing less than a miracle.


I hope we are lucky enough for such a miracle. Then maybe. Just maybe. This heaviness in my heart. The animosity of guilt on my shoulder that's slouching me. Maybe then I'd find it within me to stand up tall and say look Jules. Look. Phantom is here. All mauve. No. Not mauve. A hue of pink.


Yes.


Maybe.

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

!!!!!!

"I love you! I voice between wet hiccupped daze"

:'(((

That is Sanam my friend...Non blonde finally says something. And realizes He was hers.

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

And yes.



Unforgivable.



Phantom did do something unforgivable. He can cry a very lonesome tear. Or a flowing river. Still doesn't change the fact that he did something unforgivable.


And truly. Only a miracle can save him. A miracle. Nothing less than a miracle.


I hope we are lucky enough for such a miracle. Then maybe. Just maybe. This heaviness in my heart. The animosity of guilt on my shoulder that's slouching me. Maybe then I'd find it within me to stand up tall and say look Jules. Look. Phantom is here. All mauve. No. Not mauve. A hue of pink.


Yes.


Maybe.

Please say Purple!...NOT PINK!😲

Originally posted by: cale

nice poem😊

Thank you honestly!

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Juliet!!


Sorry! :'(



Phantom is going through some phantom phase.


And thank you.


Pained unshed tears, Ached defeated laugh




You did it still. You understood him. And you did it still. :')
It was difficult. But you did it still.


Dark canvas his sanctuary.
Dark canvas.


Unbroken but shattered, beautifully fragile.


That's the worst right. Unbroken, but shattered. Heartbreakingly fragile. Still, you did it. Beautifully fragile.


Caressing his shadows, shielding his heart




Fragile...is his heart. Unbroken. But shattered. And very much his. Shielding his heart. Shielding his unbroken, shattered heart.



Love you too! He chokes and a sob escapes.


Who's really Fragile?

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

THIS. You WROTE..THIS. "Your chance on Aahil". !!!!???!!

WHAT EVEN, !!!

Juliet!! I can't even begin to explain, what THIS just did to me!

Pained unshed tears, Ached defeated laugh

One dusting sand dunes, other sighing aftermath.

Oh this is beyond any appreciation. Beyond any words. This is just..PURE LOVE! <3

I am not able to bring myself to what to say about this?! I am like stumped. Spellbound. Astounded. Speechless. LITERALLY.

It was like the words have left as I read this, and only feelings were left in me.. :'( :')

This is just BEAUTIFULLY DIVINE. Oh I can't just go past beyond saying that.

I think I just fell in love with Aahil here, again! Maybe, more deeply this time!

!!!!!!

Oh God woman! You made me all emotional with this comment... but Farzu knows, I have a reputation to make people laugh and cry...