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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

"I was never over, even when I said so..." :')

That made me all sucky too...
I kind of had that lump when I wrote those lines...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Do you know.


Pink and purple has the same hue.


I think they do.


I say pink. Coz he gets to be in love! And be loved! And dark phase over.


And dayum.




Did I not say it enough.




This is very very dignified Juliet. Such grace, such serenity. Most sincere.


He's fragile. He is Fragile.


This piece.



So profound. Its message.



What have you done. To me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Babe 😲 You are reading!
And not asking me an update 😆 for "WallBanger!"
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Do you know.


Pink and purple has the same hue.


I think they do.


I say pink. Coz he gets to be in love! And be loved! And dark phase over.


And dayum.




Did I not say it enough.




This is very very dignified Juliet. Such grace, such serenity. Most sincere.


He's fragile. He is Fragile.


This piece.



So profound. Its message.



What have you done. To me.

OH! I didn't think pink like that!
Yes yes yes! YES! PINK!
I get it...
And you said so much I was just being greedy and spoilt...
Thanks. I meant that Rehan was more soft, this is more bold. Sharp.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I know Farz, she did it. AND she still did it. :)

Juliet, how could you not-connect and still connect so beautifully with him?? This poem is terrific. 👏

What a beautiful and sad ode to a lover. I mean how beautifully you conveyed the deepest feeling of a wounded heart. Like something curved by a broken heart towards his one love. The feel of longing...and how he is craving for her presence. I can't even express how brilliant you are. This would be my second time (Rehan' was the first) I am reading your work and I am simply amazed. 👏 😳

And my absolute favourite line from this poem:

'Unbroken but shattered, beautifully fragile' :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
No no no!!


I'm glad you did!!


Rehan is sunshine. Aahil the ray. You see the difference.


I remember saying the Rehan's piece has an aritocrastic, noble feel to it.


This one?


This one is more humble and ardent and warm and...well fragile.


Which is ironic if you think about it.


And yes.


Farzu knows. Juliet's way with words.



Intentionally beautiful unintentionally discerning.



Yes. Piercingly beautiful.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerose

Ok Another Amazing Poem

If season one had given an amazing writer Juliet, Season 2 has given a poet Juliet!!

If I go by this, then my heart goes out for him.

Beautifully written poem with beautifully elaborated emotions.❤️

(P.S. no idea about characters)

One question please I saw last night's episode and i.e. my first episode of the season. Who is the cute looking couple ?


I think you're talking about Rahat and Haya.
Haya is Najma's daughter.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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And, truly Aliya.



What a beautiful and sad ode to a lover.



Truly.



#callingyouyourname:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Tamara!

That was again for you and Farz you know that right!
Love! Love! Love!
Muaawwwhh!


Of course I know! And I LOVE you for it!

Hugs and kisses and love, always
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Please say Purple!...NOT PINK!😲

PiNK! Macho Man does a Pinky!
But you didn't tell me if it was dignified.😛
I gave you that dignified...


More than dignified. It was ROYAL.

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