Asya (KaBhi) OS: You Were Always My Priority

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Aishu

@Ish_Speaks

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

I loved it a lot...

It was Awesome,

Amazing ,

Wonderful,

Beautiful...

Cute,

Sweet...

Asya are adorable...

Flawless Work,

Beautifully Written ,

Keep writing on Asya

Thanks for PM...

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Hey Dear,

Seriously this was what you were doing at morning? I think you should make that your official time for writing because everything you do at this time is AWESOME.

I LOVED this one too. It wasn't cute at the start but it did get at the end. You made my heart go crazy with this one. I could so visualize KaBhi as AsYa doing all those things.

The way Asad rushed towards the hospital & kept chanting she would be alright made me want to give him a hug but after a slap on his head that takes forever to agree with his poor heart. Asad's words to her when she regained consciousness took my heart away. The guy really is dumb in the matters of expressing feelings but he has a hidden naughty streak.

You know I sighed when Asad screamed at Tannu. How I wish he would always do this instead for falling for her traps. Life would become so peaceful & lovely. Thanks you did this part.

Looking forward to read more from you.

Love..

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

wonderfull n fabulous...

amazing...

the way hw asad felt reminded me of mangalpuri asad...

zoya is fine...

beautifully written...

thx fr the pm...

Edited by jazsidhu - 11 years ago

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

That was awesome..

Asad's concern for Zoya was overwhelming..

Beautiful OS..

Do write more..

Edited by pinks2911 - 11 years ago

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

OMG

Totally loved it

Every single line it was amazing

After reading the title I knew m so gonna love it

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treasure11

@treasure11

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Hey this was soo beautifully written 👏

Loved it !!❤️

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Hey ...

This was really nice !! :)

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Superb! An emotional update!! Aww dream come true! Tanveer being slapped by Asad ...

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keyahira

@keyahira

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

OMG I LOVED THE OS
Stupid Zee, why couldnt they hire you to write their storyline for them when KaBhi was here
ugh
Anyways AWESOMENESS RIGHT THERE
I Just LOVE the way you write
I was like OMG, when Asad(KSG) said "And everything else that happens after marriage."
BLUSHIES 😳