Asya (KaBhi) OS: You Were Always My Priority

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anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Wow this was beautiful

It takes almost losing ur life for u to confess asad

Oh love the slap tanveer got guess she never expected it

Guess the evidence is on the cd Najma was bringing

But then she didn't want to ruin a beautiful thing.

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

This is so so so soo amazing! ❤️

Adored this OS!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Oh, this brought back memories. *sniff* Back when we were all so hopeful about them and their "fake" engagement and all that. 😭

Anyways, that was so beautiful! And realistic, too. :) I loved Zoya's attitude. I miss her. :'( But I loved the last few sentences. 😉

I really, really, enjoyed this! Superb job. :D

-Fari.

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Asif

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Beautifully written OS
Restless asad knew something bad gonna happen
He was crazy after ayaan told him abt zoya accident
He confessed & told her that she is his priority, his life
Thanks for pm

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

"You're not my fake fiancee Zoya, you're my life..." Asad whispered, "Why will I deny my heart the right to call you my wife?"

Amazing realization!

""I am here because you're my priority" Asad confessed. "You were always my priority Zoya. But more importantly, you are my life. I'm here because I need my life back" Zoya blinked at him.Someone has done voodoo on him."

""Screw that" Asad spoke irritated. This was about his life, which was her. Definitely voodoo thought Zoya."

"I realised that I was stupid in trying to make you think that this was a fake engagement. Forget being my fake fiancee when my heart already considers you my wife."

""Mr Khan, would you please clearly tell me what is wrong with you?"

"I fell in love with you..." He got up and cupped her face, Zoya blinked at him.

"But I don't believe you" She whispered, "I just wanted you to teach me how to drive but you-" Asad grabbed her lips with his taking her into a passionate kiss; Zoya's eyes widened feeling her heart burst with all sorts of feelings. He parted from her brushing her lips with a few feathery pecks; he rested his nose with hers.

"You don't need to learn how to drive when I am here. Your safety is my priority..."

"Just my safety?" Zoya whispered.

"YOU are my priority" He kissed her again, brushing his lips with hers, feeling and experimenting the feel of her lips, her taste.

"And?"

"And marrying you."

"And?"

"And everything else that happens after marriage." He winked. Zoya blushed a deep crimson wrapping her arms around his neck and pulling her against him into a hug. Asad half lay over her body sighing in her arms on the hospital bed. That will always be his priority; keeping her close against him."

Exquisite! An absolute enthralling read.