Very Short SaHil OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Tia!! Crappy?!! LOL. To hell with that! It was anything but crappy! It was gorgeous stuff man! Simply awesome! :D

Damn that your PC hanged thrice! It really sucks man! This was just amazing! "Tugging his hair was a very Sanam thing to do" Grr!! 😆 His silky raven hair! Indeed. axssfvscjnsb

It left me with every kind of feelings. The hatred, the jealousy, the love, the hurt, the angst, the confusion. Wow! So well described. Just by looking at her hand. And the colour that only darkens like his love <333

The tears when they declared that they hate each other. Sigh! So heart wrenching. These both will be the death of each other <3

Super OS man! Don't call it crappy dude. Its just ahmayyyzing. Like Farz says 😆

Do write more! :)

Dear Pragu, You Farz and Suds are the only people who appreciate everything I write. I'm so touched to have met such nice people on this forum who appreciate even my comments and are so lavish with praise on every thing I write. It really melts my heart. Love You. Muah Muah Wet Kisses to you and a Tight wala Hug.

Originally posted by: TIA.Tia

Divided the OS in paragraphs for your convenience.

Thank u so much.. 😳

Originally posted by: TIA.Tia

Dear Pragu, You Farz and Suds are the only people who appreciate everything I write. I'm so touched to have met such nice people on this forum who appreciate even my comments and are so lavish with praise on every thing I write. It really melts my heart. Love You. Muah Muah Wet Kisses to you and a Tight wala Hug.

Liked the story but the dialogues used by aahil in the end is very bad as it may make sanam feel low to herself .. after these words she may not able to face herself ..

Thank you.
👏

I'm here I'm here!!!!



I read this last night!!! And I was all stumped!!!!




I mean.

KISS!!!!


Delirious. Hair tugging. Hand on waist. Close close so veryyy close!!!



Then Opera mobile crashed! And tabs closed.


By then I was at the rant thread (Haha)



Tia 'TIA tia' Saigal.




Woohoo sistah!!



What did you just make me read. Again.


It's asdfgfssaff and then to top it off...you managed to bring the living hjllkjhyhkouh out of me and leaving me and I believe readers alike absolutely gjhytrrrddghut!!!!!!



Tia tia! Cammereyuuu *come here you*



*pulls Tia tia in a bone crushing hug*



Thank you for this!!!


The dark blotch on her palm!!!!! And thennn he says he hates her!!!!


Why baby beast WHYYY


Oh don't cryyy.




*sniff sniff*




It's really good!!!


I could totally picture them. Well. Sans kissing. Coz that probably wasn't me picturing. ;)



Ohhh!!! Low life? How could you even Aahil!!



Whyyy...don't you know seeing her sad makes youuu sad!!


Tiaaa!


Love!!!


I love reading youuu!!


Emotional Aahil at his best!!!!



Mwahhh

Originally posted by: Gayu-Sahil

hey it really beautiful os...i loved it when they told they hate each other...you captured their character really correct..passion,jealousy,hurt described really well..write more...

Happy that you were able to feel the emotions of the character which I wanted to depict thru this OS. Thanks for your appreciation.

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Kisses back Tia!! :*

Where's Farru by the way? She HAVE to read this! I am gonna tell her and do some promoting too! ;) 😆 Need Aaloo err i mean Aliya to check this piece! She's too sweet trust me!

This piece is seriously awesome. So you gotta appreciate the awesomeness no? Right.

And I really feel bad if I don't give a proper comment for such awesome work, so! Plus its not just awesome work, its SaHil!! <3 Anything about them and I can't resist myself 😆

So, yeah. And YOU are awesome! Glad that I found such people here! <3

Aww... Come here you.. *Pulls Prags in bone breaking hug*

Promotion for my OS.??!! Well then I appoint you my official PR. 😆.. Muah Muah..

Tia! Wonder why you aren't at our "Adda"?? 😆

Originally posted by: shilpaiyer

Liked the story but the dialogues used by aahil in the end is very bad as it may make sanam feel low to herself .. after these words she may not able to face herself ..

Thank you.
👏

I know the dialogues of Aahil was rude. Aahil knows that he is going to get married to Nida, yet he takes a chance and confesses his love for Sanam via a sweet, simple and a passionate Kiss. He wanted to give his heart a last chance, so that he won't regret it for the lifetime. Sanam was stunned but gave in halfway during the kiss, but then Sanam's realization of Aahil getting married in next 24hours and before that he kissing her was the moment of awakening for her and here Aahil felt the hesitation in Sanam and his mind automatically diverts to the thoughts that maybe Sanam is in love with Rehaan and not him, this thought hurt him the most, and he wanted to hurt Sanam as much as he was hurt himself plus he also felt guilty for betraying his friend who is also his brother. You know Men and their big egos, Aahil needed a closure for this relationship and he wanted Sanam to hate him and wanted her to think that this Kiss meant nothing to him and it was just a mistake. I know I have been rude with Aahil's dialogues, But this is how a heart-broken lover who feels angry, jealous and guilty would want his closure to be. Hence such rude dialogues. Sorry for I was not able to send this message across via by OS. As I said there are many loop-holes in my OS as I was tired of typing it for the umpteenth time and some where half the way the essence of the story went haywire. Blame it on my hanged PC. 😆