Very Short SaHil OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I'm here I'm here!!!!



I read this last night!!! And I was all stumped!!!!




I mean.

KISS!!!!


Delirious. Hair tugging. Hand on waist. Close close so veryyy close!!!



Then Opera mobile crashed! And tabs closed.


By then I was at the rant thread (Haha)



Tia 'TIA tia' Saigal.




Woohoo sistah!!



What did you just make me read. Again.


It's asdfgfssaff and then to top it off...you managed to bring the living hjllkjhyhkouh out of me and leaving me and I believe readers alike absolutely gjhytrrrddghut!!!!!!



Tia tia! Cammereyuuu *come here you*



*pulls Tia tia in a bone crushing hug*



Thank you for this!!!


The dark blotch on her palm!!!!! And thennn he says he hates her!!!!


Why baby beast WHYYY


Oh don't cryyy.




*sniff sniff*




It's really good!!!


I could totally picture them. Well. Sans kissing. Coz that probably wasn't me picturing. ;)



Ohhh!!! Low life? How could you even Aahil!!



Whyyy...don't you know seeing her sad makes youuu sad!!


Tiaaa!


Love!!!


I love reading youuu!!


Emotional Aahil at his best!!!!



Mwahhh

Give me five Sistah. You are the only one who understood the emotions of Aahil, even with my lack of ability to explain it properly. Yup you are right Aahil hurts himself more by hurting Sanam. It was not at all easy for him to say those words to Sanam. But as I said the Lover who is defeated in love, hurt, guilt-ridden and jealous with major ego hassles will try to hurt his lady love as much hurt he is. But it certainly does not mean he derives pleasure by saying those things. Of course for him its double hell. Thank you for your lovely comments and Sloppy wet kisses to you on your cheeks and forehead and a big Teddy Bear Hug to you.

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath

Tia! Wonder why you aren't at our "Adda"?? 😆

You have all the qualifications required to be a Maniac 😆

Will join asap😊

And here comes our another amazing writer with an awesome OS. Tia, I have always loved your comments and your take on the episodes. And now this OS. :)
This simply left me teary-eyed. The pain...that hurt...the angst...the pretense...Amazing girl. You ROCKED it. 👏 Something was literally churning inside my stomach while reading this. That feeling is unexplainable. I could actually visualize the scene.
Ohhh poor Aahil and Sanam. They are so torn and heartbroken. Aahil, why did you do that??? With you...and with Sanam. Why do you have to cry so much...and make her cry??? They gave in to each other...they belong with each other and yet he crushed his own dreams..his own life. Nidaaa. 😡 And now Sanam thinks Aahil did this for vengeance. Oh no!!! Avenge Aahil mode on. 😆 Tia, those last few lines were the highlights. Beautiful. Beautiful girl. You are soo talented. 😊
P.S- plzz tell me you are going to make this OS a TS or SS?? Coz I wanna see this misunderstanding clear up. Please. Pretty please. 😉 😆

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy

And here comes our another amazing writer with an awesome OS. Tia, I have always loved your comments and your take on the episodes. And now this OS. :)
This simply left me teary-eyed. The pain...that hurt...the angst...the pretense...Amazing girl. You ROCKED it. 👏 Something was literally churning inside my stomach while reading this. That feeling is unexplainable. I could actually visualize the scene.
Ohhh poor Aahil and Sanam. They are so torn and heartbroken. Aahil, why did you do that??? With you...and with Sanam. Why do you have to cry so much...and make her cry??? They gave in to each other...they belong with each other and yet he crushed his own dreams..his own life. Nidaaa. 😡 And now Sanam thinks Aahil did this for vengeance. Oh no!!! Avenge Aahil mode on. 😆 Tia, those last few lines were the highlights. Beautiful. Beautiful girl. You are soo talented. 😊
P.S- plzz tell me you are going to make this OS a TS or SS?? Coz I wanna see this misunderstanding clear up. Please. Pretty please. 😉 😆

Thank You so very much Sweet Heart. Your comments means a world to me. I'm really blessed to meet such nice people with such good heart who appreciate me for my mediocre writing and You understood even the unsaid words and the thing which I wanted to explain with this OS, which I think I failed to explain properly in my OS. You really made my day. The way you praised my OS, it made me so curious that I went and read my own OS again. Seriously you made me delirious with your praise. I can't thank you enuff for that. I wish I could fulfill your wish. But it nearly kills me to inform you that this OS ends here. But I promise that I will surely write an SS on my Darling SaHiL, once the creativity bug bites me with another vague idea, I will surely put it down in words. What to do my creativity is very limited. I'm not half as smart as the talented writers of this Forum. So I really don't know how to take this OS further. So please pardon me for disappointing you.

You are an amazing writer Tia. Don't underestimate yourself. You have this knack to attract readers with your play of words. Even your comments always are so wonderful. 👏 And don't worry. Actually I am a little greedy in this department. Some awesome story and I crave to read more. 😆 But I'll wait for your next work. And I am so grateful to meet you all wonderful writers and person on this forum. 😳

Well, it would be rude not to tell my name. Hahahaha. So. Hello Tia, I am Aliya. 😆

Hey Aliya, Nice to meet you. Finally I get to know your name and happy to know you, for you are a very sweet and wonderful person.

That was really good but I don't like the ending
I'm not ready to read/see/imagine any story where they don't end up together :(

I hope you have another part please
I loved this bold side of ahil and sanam

Fantastic OS Dear!Pls do write more on SaHil & pm Me!

Loved it n if possible do continue it too,