New Asya FF: the runaway bride * update chap26 page 129, 2/1/15*

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KeyaHira2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#931

I LOVED IT
Finally together at last
Asad Ahmed Khan and his Runaway Bride
Pm me for the other part, and all ur stories

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@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#932

Its an amazing update...

Can't believe it was the last chapter already...

It was a brilliant asya story...the one I'll remember always..

Loved their sr scene...zoya's nervousness was so real..

Their hospital scenes were so cute...and scene outside the hospital...asad was so adorable in that scene..

Totally loved it...

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Asif

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Posted: 11 years ago

#933

Lovely update
Zoya threaten nisha in hospital when she regain concious ness. Both held each other to assure them that they are together. Asad asking abt wedding date scene was embarrassing for both, it was a nice scene. Finally they married & became one in all senses. It was a perfect ending. Will we get an epilogue as well.
Thanks for pm

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Mvinfff

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Posted: 11 years ago

#934

Please can you add me to your PM List. Thanks

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#935

superb rada !!! it's not what i expected...some heavy duty emotional update...but u made it a whole lot enjoyable!!!
thanks for this wonderful journey
waiting for ur new story ...

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#936

beautiful, awesome and pefect end⭐️

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@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#937

Wow..

Perfect ending...

Completely love the update...

Their love wins...

Their hospital romance was so cute..

And in the scene outside hospital, asad was so adorable...

Zoya's nervousness was so real...and then asad's sense of humour...

You are an amazing writer and this is one asya story I'll remember always...

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anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#938

Unres

😭😭😭Because it has come to an end

But boy what a journey I have bookmarked to read again in future

I absolutely adore this story I give u a standing ovation

Thanks for pm me the adult bits

Loved loved the update

After the last one u had me stressed but then I was like no maybe the police shot him first

Loved loved th hospital scenes bravo

I could have seen zoya drama played out in front of my eyes

I will turn this hospital upside down until I find him so they had to take her

Him just relaxing back to peaceful sleep after seeing her

Him being their when she wakes ups after 2 dys and then after then spending each nite together always in each other arms

So no one was shot but we're serverly hurt Asad more than zoya

It was cute when leaving the hospital when Asad just blurted abt marriage

Tht showed his desperation but she made him promise he had to keep it

But they still had to wait 2 wks and what torture it was I guess😆

Oh her fighting fo her phone him sneezing a letter but not succeeding

The couldn't last 2 dys without talking

Love the wedding especially the SR it was a date he wanted to make it memorable

And boy was it

Her being extremely shy him going under the veil then the dinner the walk the dance

Her journey down memory lane where it all started

And then her asking to make her his in all ways

And boy did he difinitely did a memorable nite a nite to never forget to learn it all abt each other

Then to wKe up with ur beautiful wife teasing u and thn him repaying his debts

The tango together a beautiful dance especially in bed

And the no cold shower for me we shall share

Forever with his runaway bride

Love it to bits hope u gives us more asya story

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annanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#939

woow finally they r married

thanks for giving happy update on new year

really loved it

zoyas thinking with the song soo beautiful

lovely

HAPPY NEW YEAR

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#940

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

Thank you Jas dear

I agree with you for Zoya should have been discharge earlier but I didn't write it, but sometimes, you keep someone to follow any mental trauma of kidnapping to prevent from suicide. The truth is that she was suppose to be out before him, but I would not be able to write the scene with the ring and in front of the hospital (or may be yes 😆).

Anyway, thank you Jas for your beautiful and long comments, you can't imagine how I love them and always wait for them 😃

The scene under the veil , I love it I was laughing while writing it 😆, Asad a sweetheart 😳

Thank you so much Jas, you were the first and on of the most loyal reader of this story and I'm really happy to have dear 🤗

Don't thank me Rada u deserved all d appreciation & love that u got 4 this story👏⭐️👏 & all we frnds ban each other from saying thankus & sorrys & i asked u also but u don't listen u thanked me 3 times above😲 i think i have 2 b strict so here's d warning if u thank me again i will get angry😡😆

OK so i take that ki u took creactive liberty here 2 make them discharge 2gather😆

Just like u i always wait 4 ur replys cuz u enlighten me about certain situations briefly which i don't get & its cuz of that that we got 2 know each other well & become close frnds.😃

Veil wala scene was my fvrt i don't remeber i read it ever b4 anywere so its unique & totally MA😉

More than u i m honoured 2 have erned u as a frnd😃. Bear huggies 2 u🤗. Love u muwaah❤️