New Asya FF: the runaway bride * update chap26 page 129, 2/1/15*

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 11 years ago

#641

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome update
Finally they confessed. U wrote the confession part beautifully. Zoya punishment was really hard for asad.
Plz continue soon. Thanks for pm

yes , the punishment was a bit hard for my Asad, teasing his OCD, poor guy 😆

thank you dear and I will start soon 😃

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 11 years ago

#642

Originally posted by: ak020203
Beautiful update. .
Finally they said love you to each other. .

Thanks for updating

20 chapter later, yes they said it to us or between them 😆

thanks dear for your comment

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 11 years ago

#643

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-
fantastic work!!!
so much anguish...so much pain but yet there's lots n lots of love...amazing!!! i guess that's our asya...

beautifully written...hats off!!

thoroughly enjoyed...

the kisses!!!! oh god!!!! tell-tale of their cravings...

i want that mature part...pm me too

continue soon

thank you so much,

I wanted their confession to be only the words of love and I'm happy that you feel it like this,

it was only and only love between Asya

thank you for your sweet words, I'm so 😳

I can't put confession without a intense kiss, it would be fair for my readers, I've write a mature part, but it may sound too much, that why I didn't post it in this update, just for those who ask.

thank you dear 😃

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 11 years ago

#644

Originally posted by: annanyaksgian
omg i m so so happy after reading this
after last update i thought again mis understandings
i m soo surprised ..they r together
i m soo happy
there is a mature version😳
ok mature ,unmature i want to read
plz pm me

Yeah, I putted some confusion in purpose before this chapter, I wanted to be a surprise for all of you

and I'm happy that you like my surprise 😃

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 11 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: jas91

Koi ni i got d PM now😆

True 20 chapters man but we can't have kisses in d start aise hi thoda koi kiss kar deta hai jaise ki Nisha kehti😆 hai feeling bhi toh honi chahiye. Aur ab toh dono can't stop kissing each other i lost d count.😆

I didn' count myself 😆, thier monologue was long in the begining of the chapter, they prefered at the end more action 🤣

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#646

Originally posted by: jas91

Seed dating was fab but woh bas starter tha main-course toh Runaway hai

Hello Jas...well yes you know sincerely that when you read SPEED DATING and then THE RUNAWAY BRIDE ...you see a very huge difference...in the writing style , way of presenting...etc...so yeah a big 5 STAR Main course...but when and how we will get our DESSERT...that is upto see...from her side...

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rajsmi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#647

Ah...finally, the runaway bride is held down :-) Thought Asad would be running away but NO!! They confessed!!

Good to see them together after their inner turmoil...Hard times are behind them now!

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#648

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

Speed dating was my first and it didn't ask for me to go futher in their feelings or turnoil, the runaway is more deep and the charactere are more complex@Jas91 thanks sweetheart, I'm currently , writting 2 other story on Asya, I don't know, it will be the dessert after the runaway bride

Heyy...just saw this comment.., so we will be presented with DESSERTS...so two new stories...great...but yes SPEED DATING...was just a 3 shot and this is a full fledged story...so there will be difference...but you are planing to end THE RUNAWAY BRIDE ...hmm...how many chapts are left...if you don't mind you can reveal that..

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 11 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hello Jas...well yes you know sincerely that when you read SPEED DATING and then THE RUNAWAY BRIDE ...you see a very huge difference...in the writing style , way of presenting...etc...so yeah a big 5 STAR Main course...but when and how we will get our DESSERT...that is upto see...from her side...

i agree with you, Speed dating was my first publication and it was not as the runaway bride, this story give the opportunity to improve my writting and my english. But, i think i will try to write it again the speed dating (when I will have time 😆)

For the 2 other story, I want to write a lot before put them on IF, one story is a new concept and a bit weird (like me) and the second is a drama. But as soon, as i finish the runaway , I update the other stories.

i can't put all of them now, because I'm bit slow to update 1 story, can you imagine when I will have to update 2 more 😕😆

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radadolcevida

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Posted: 11 years ago

#650

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Heyy...just saw this comment.., so we will be presented with DESSERTS...so two new stories...great...but yes SPEED DATING...was just a 3 shot and this is a full fledged story...so there will be difference...but you are planing to end THE RUNAWAY BRIDE ...hmm...how many chapts are left...if you don't mind you can reveal that..

For the runaway, I can finish it now, but I plan to add some twist before ending it, maybe 3 or 4 chapter mores, i don't know yet, it won't be long, i guess.

for the dessert, as soon, as TRB reached the end 😃