SaHil FF *New* Two Strings, One Destiny-Part 17 UPDATED pg 13! - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Yay! I m first 😊
Loved it, waiting for Sanam's reaction n the morning,
Update soon.
Edited by Zoha_ali - 11 years ago
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OMG sooo sweet at least yur ff is taking us to a gentle moves of SaHil unlike the harsh moments in real serial 😳 Plz do update the next part soon and of coz make sure SaHil to fall in love sooon yaar i want romance between them ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ur story is so beautiful I just love reading it please update soon
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Chapter 15

Sanam woke up stretching her arms out. Her left arm felt so sore. It seemed like she had slept on it all night. She rubbed her eyes as sunlight hit them and frowned. She remembered drawing her curtains last night. So where was the sun coming from? As she opened her eyes she realized that she wasn't in her room! She was in...

"Ya Allah!" she gasped and jumped out of the bed.

"Main...main yahan kaise ayee?" she spoke to herself backing away from the bed.

She saw her earrings on the bedside table and looked at her reflection in the mirror.

"Aur ye earrings? Ye kub utareen maine? Mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahin araha?" she rubbed the side of her head and stepped back again, in shock, only to collide with someone.

Aahil caught her. He was already showered and dressed. His wet hair glistening, courtesy of the sunlight.

"Aahil? Main yahan kaise ayee?" she asked as he let her go.

"Main laya tha," he said quietly.

"Aap?" she exclaimed. "Aur ye earrings aap ne utareen? Apki himmat kaise hui mujhe choone ki?" she screamed.

Aahil clamped a hand over her mouth and within seconds he had her pinned against the wall.

"Chillao mat!" he hissed. "Bahar wakil sahab ayeve hain."

"Mmm," Sanam squirmed under his hold. But Aahil kept her in one place.

"Haan main laya tha yahan par. Kyun ke Ammi ne bataya ke wakil sahab chakkar lagain ge. Unhe waise bi humare nikkah pe shak hai. Rahi tumari earrings ki baat. To woh bi maine utareen kyun ke woh pillow main ulajgayeen thi. Mujhe tumme choone ka koi showk nahin hain." He let her go as she finally stopped moving.

"Ab chup chap tayyar hoke ajao. Wakil sahab humse milne aye hain. Humme ye miya biwi ka drama unke samne karna hoga. Now hurry up!" he snapped.

"Main nahin aa sakti," she whispered quietly.

"What?!" he turned around in anger ready to give her a piece of his mind.

"Woh mere kaprre abhi bi purane kamre main hain," Sanam quickly responded sensing his anger.

"Ammi ne tumhare kappre bhijvae hain," he said pointing to a shopping bag by the bed.

Apparently he had carried it into the room, but Sanam was too busy screaming to notice. As she bent down to pick up the bag, she heard him close the door behind him and she hurried over to lock it.

As Sanam moved in front of the mirror to take off her jewelry she noticed her left hand. It was all bandaged up! Sanam touched her arm remembering how her bangles had broken and how pieces of them had pierced her skin, cutting her. Sanam held her hand and stared at her reflection in the mirror. "Aahil kitne ajeeb hain. Pehle zakham dehte hain, phir marham lagate hain," she thought to herself.

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"Aahil Miya, Sanam nahin dekaiye dehraheen hain," Wakil Sahab turned towards Aahil.

"Haan abhi athee hogi... lo agayi," he said catching a glimpse of her. She was wearing a red anarkali, looking stunning with a heavy royal necklace and matching earrings. She had ditched her braid today, her hair flowing behind her. Aahil was left breathless. He was in a full-blown staring session, when she walked up to him and gave him a look that said: "stop staring."

"Kitni der lagadi Jaan?" Aahil slipped his hand in hers and gave it a tight squeeze.

Sanam's eyes almost bulged out of their sockets. What on earth had happened to him overnight? He was holding her hand?! And Jaan??????

"Ji?!" an utterly surprised Sanam answered.

Aahil glared at her then signaled towards the lawyer through his eyes. It took a few minutes for Sanam to realize what he meant but then she caught on.

He pulled the chair for her and started to pour some porridge out for her.

"Toh boliye wakil sahab aap itni subah yahan pe kaise? Please join us," Aahil indicated for wakil sahab to sit down.

"Nahin. Nahin. Shukriya. Main naashtha karke ayaa hoon. Mujhe bas Sanam ko ye kaghazaat deyne thay." He held up an envelope. Begum Sahiiba agar ijazat ho tho kya main Sanam ko ek dafa iski requirements sumjha sakta hoon?"

"Haan, bilkul. Aahil beta shuroo karo." She picked up a spoon and began eating. Everyone followed suit, but Aahil. His eyes were impatiently searching for Sanam who had disappeared into the living room lounge.

He hastily finished his breakfast and without asking to be excused, left the table. He spotted Sanam and Wakil Sahab; they were still discussing the papers.


"Arre Jaan,tumhara kaam hee nahin hua! Mujhe mera wallet nahin mil raha! Zara doond do please?" he faked a smile.

"Aahil Miya bus do theen safay aur bakhi hain.."

"Main samjha doonga," he took the papers from the lawyer's hand.

"Jaisa aap theek samjhein," Wakil sahab made to leave while Aahil steered Sanam towards their room. But noticing them heading to their room, he stopped to observe them. Aahil turned back slightly and saw this.

He caught Sanam's hand and pulled her towards him.

"Aahil kya kar rahe hain aap?!" squealed Sanam.

"Wallet to ek bahana tha Jaan, mujhe to kuch aur hee chaiyye tha," Aahil smirked and picked her up in his arms.

"Kya kar rahe hain? Choriye mujhe!" Sanam wailed. But Aahil carried her the rest of the distance to their room and locked the door behind them with his remote.
Wakil sahab, having witnessed this little romantic session, smiled and left the house.

"Ugh!" Sanam winced as Aahil flung her on the bed.

"Ek minute ke liye bi nahin soch na ke mujhe tumse kuch chaiyye hoga. Woh to wakil sahab karre thay to isliye mujhe ye karna parda. Toh humare baare main koi kwaab dekna shuroo mat karna," and with that he picked up his coat and left the room.

A startled Sanam sat there with a fresh batch of tears ready to pour. ..

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The rest of the day was a bore for Sanam as Begum Sahiba didn't allow her to do any work. But she did have her meet a million women. All of them cooing and aahing on seeing her and giving her blessings. The job of a Choti Begum was much less interesting than her daily routines. Before, she was atleast spending her time doing useful things like cooking and cleaning. Now, she felt like she had too much free time.

The day passed by and soon it was time for dinner. Sanam was anticipating Aahil arrival but he didn't show up. Neither did the lawyer. Sanam tried Aahil's phone many times on Begum Sahiba's insistence but Aahil didn't pick up.

Everyone had their dinner and retired to their rooms. Sanam waited for Aahil but he still wasn't home. She saw Lateef walking past the dining area, so she quickly ran over to Aahil's room. She knew that Lateef was keen on keeping Begum Sahiba updated on Sanam's sleeping schedule and location and she didn't want him...her...er...to inform her that she was still loitering.

She turned around to close the door when she bumped into Aahil and stumbled backwards, losing her balance.

"Samhalkar nahin chal sakteen?" Aahil snarled.

"Maaf kariye ga," Sanam starightened herself.

"Aapko itni der lagayi aane main? Kya kaam bohut tha aaj? Main khaana laoon?" she asked tentatively, trying to make small talk.

"Toh ab tum mujse poocho gi ke der khahan lagi? Kyun lagi? Meri biwi bane ki zyada koshish mat karo," he snapped.

The fact was that he'd had a tiff with Rehan and the subject was Sanam + Nikkah. After that, Aahil didn't feel like coming home. The realization of Sanam and Rehan's love blinded him again and he was enraged with Sanam. How dare she agree to this nikkah to play with his emotions? After all what was this game she was setting up? One on hand there were these feelings and on the other there were feelings for Sanam. The love for Sanam. That love that swelled his heart and got him all hot and bothered. With this mixed cauldron of feelings, Aahil had decided to stay back in his office, to gather his thoughts and stay away from the woman who had him confused in knots. But alas here she was again.

"Biwi to hoon main aapki. Aap maane ya na maane," retorted Sanam. "Toh khaana laoon?" she repeated the question.

"Nahin, main khaahke aaya hoon!" he slammed the door to the bathroom and turned on the shower.

Sanam jumped at the noise and then fixed the bed and took out his night clothes. As she placed them on the bed, she saw the empty water jug and decided to fill it. By the time she came back, Aahil was already dressed for bed, typing away on his computer.

Sanam hurriedly put the jug on his nightstand and turned to leave the room with a quiet, "Goodnight."

"Tum kahan jaa rahi ho?" Aahil asked.

"Sone jaa rahi hoon apne kamre main."

"Tum wahan nahin so gi, yaheen so gi. Maine subah tumme kaha tha na ke humme miya biwi ka drama karna pardega?"

Sanam walked on and suddenly with a soft thud the door closed. Aahil had locked the door and walked up behind Sanam. As she turned to protest, she almost bumped into him. Their noses were almost touching, that's how close he stood to her. He put his hands on the wall on either side of her, trapping her. Sanam took in a sharp intake of breath as she realized his proximity.

"Maine kahan na ke tum yaheen so gi? What don't you understand?" he hissed.

"Woh main...main apna ...blan..ket.. blanket lene jaarahi thee," she whispered breathlessly.

Aahil blinked. "What?!"

"Main apna blanket lene jaarahi thee, phir yaheen arahi thee."

Aahil let her go and swirled around, releasing her and putting his back to her.

"Toh jaldi karo," he ordered.

"Darwazah to kolein."

"Yeah," he pressed the button on his remote and she hurried off.

He had felt such a strong sensation in the pit of his stomach when he was standing close to Sanam. Her breathlessness and flustered appearance was attracting him to her. And he was losing his senses as he stared into her eyes. Those eyes, which weren't just eyes but orbs of magic, magic that was enchanting him and awakening his once deep love for her...



Comment soon loves!!!!!!





Edited by arshi_luver - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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very beautiful and much awaited part. Kahi to saahil romance h at least
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sooo cut update hai 😳 I love this love hate parts of them but plz plz take off their misunderstandings soon and make they fall in love 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update.Waiting for the rest
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Wow lots of acting infront of the lawyer I love it

Can't wait to see when ahil finally bursts and screams he lives her

Sanam sanam common girl wake up this guy is crazy about ya

Great update, thanks!
Excited for upcoming parts...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 16


"Ya Allah! Ye mujhe ho kya raha hai?" Sanam wondered aloud as she stood in front of her mirror in her old bedroom. One hand was clutching her comforter while the other was on her heaving chest. She was breathless, as if she had just run a marathon. And she knew that this was all because of Aahil's proximity. But his closeness had never affected her before. Or had it? She tried to remember the last time she had felt this way around him, but couldn't remember. The fact was that she had always been affected by him, but had never truly realized it. She had now! And this was partially because all of a sudden he had become her husband and now it mattered how close he was to her.

Sanam looked around her room. She figured that now that she was already in the room, she might as well spend the night here so that she wouldn't have to face him again tonight. However, as she inched towards her bed, she remembered that he had carried her into his bedroom last night. She did not want a repeat of that. So she waited until her breathing and heartbeat had gone back to normal, and then started towards his room.

Aahil was already in bed, his back facing her. She relaxed a bit, at finding him asleep, but then looked around confused. Was she expected to sleep on the bed? She desperately looked around his room. There didn't seem to be an alternative. She wished she had talked this out with him before. But it was too late now.

"Ab layto gi bi ya waheen kardi raho gi?" Aahil's voice made her jump. She had thought he was asleep! How did he even know that she was in the room? She had crept in silently and his back was facing her?

'Main songi kahan?" she asked quietly, dreading the obvious answer.

"Bed pe of course," came a curt reply.

Sanam stood there a moment longer, contemplating whether it was plausible to make a run for it. But realistically thinking, she knew that she really didn't have a choice. A second later, she quietly walked over to the empty side of the bed and got in.

She turned on her side, her back now facing his, and closed her eyes. She tried to sleep, but to no avail. She kept tossing and turning. Even with her comforter, it was too damn cold in this room!

On the other side of the bed, Aahil was equally restless. He had shifted his pillow three times and then turned it over once, but he just couldn't sleep. He turned on his other side, just as Sanam did, and they both came face to face, staring into each other's gaze.

Sanam held her breath, not wanting to breathe in his face, nor wanting to breathe in his breath.

Aahil was lost in her chocolaty brown orbs, sucked into a dimension where there were no barriers between him and her.

They stayed like this for approximately three minutes before Sanam broke the stare and turned away, leaving a disappointed Aahil.

Sanam knew that sharing this bed with him would do things to her. But she had never expected it to be this bad. Her tummy was literally doing somersaults and her heart was in her throat. She could feel an empty clawing there. She suddenly felt thirsty.

Aahil was disappointed that Sanam had turned away from him. But in a way that was good for him. Because Sanam loved Rehan. He knew that she could never completely be his. And he had to accept that. However, although his mind knew this truth, his heart was not so eager to accept it. He stared at her back, hoping to get a glimpse of her one last time before he slept. Lying in that position he didn't know when sleep took over him and he dozed off.

Sanam couldn't take it anymore. She really needed to relieve her dry throat. She quietly hopped out of bed and noticed that Aahil was asleep. She poured herself some water and smiled at his sleeping form. "He looks so adorable when he's asleep," she thought as she gulped down the water. She too fell asleep soon after that.
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Sanam woke up with a jolt to someone talking. As her surroundings came into view she realized with a shock that it was Aahil. He was tossing and turning as if in pain.

"Please mujhe mat maaro...please..nahin," he was talking in his sleep.

Sanam quickly moved towards him to listen to what he was saying.

"Mujhe nahin maaro...please..meri koi galti nahin hai..,"he mumbled.

Sanam moved close to him and wiped sweat from his forehead, using her dupatta.

" Aahil aap theek tho hain?Yahan koi nahin hai," she whispered in his ear.

"Mujhe mat maaro...nahin maaro," he repeated.

"Koi nahin hai Aahil. Aapko kuch nahin hua hai, Aahil. Aahil.." she shook his shoulder gently to wake him up. As if sensing her presence he hugged her tightly around the waist.

"Huuh," gasped Sanam. She was not expecting him to grab her. She lightly brushed his bangs out of his eyes. Her touch relaxed him and feeling him calm down, she tried to put him back down on his pillow but he tightened his hold on her.

"Nahin mujhe chorkar mat jao."

Sanam was confused. She thought she misheard him so she leaned down close to him to hear him say it again.

"Please mujhe chorkar mat jao. Please..," he pleaded with her; and her heart lurched as she realized that he found comfort in her arms. She could feel his vulnerability as he shook slightly before relaxing again, when she started to soothingly pat his back. She felt it was her responsibility to provide him with the comfort he required. After all she was his wife. And he too had taken care of her when she had been vulnerable. And it hadn't been once, it had been countless times. She owed him that much.

She kept patting his back and fell asleep in a sitting position, with his head in her lap and her arms protectively placed around his broad shoulders.
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Aahil stirred in his sleep. Sanam felt a sudden tug on her hair and woke up to see that her hair was curtaining Aahil's face. Her arms were sore and still placed around him, so she couldn't move it away. Aahil suddenly woke up simultaneously and saw that his face was covered in long silky tresses that smelled like...Sanam! He gently pushed them back and faced her wide-eyed stare.

Aahil disentangled himself from her and moved back slightly, his eyes never leaving hers.

Sanam sat up staright and tried to pull her dupatta up but noticed that it had parted with her during the night. Her hand unconsciously brushed her chest, searching for it, and touched skin where there should've been a button. Sanam quickly looked down to see that the top three buttons of her kurta were undone, revealing the tops of her breasts. She looked towards Aahil to see if he saw this, and when she saw that he had, she turned away from him and hurriedly buttoned up her shirt.

She felt something light land on her lap. It was her dupatta. Aahil had found it wrapped around his waist, apparently he had used it like a blanket last night, and had passed it to her. He sat up, now looking away from her.

Sanam draped her dupatta and jumped off the bed, her face flushed.

"Aap theek tho hain?" she asked in a small voice, trying desperately to switch the focus from her to him but also genuinely concerned for him.

"Of course! Mujhe kya hua hai?" he answered, running a hand through his bed hair.

"Nahin woh...kal raat aap sohte main bol rahe thay. Shayad aap koi bura kwaab dekhe rahe thay. Aur aise lag raha tha jaise koi aapko maar raha tha.."

"Shut up! Kya bakwas kar rahi ho tum?" he yelled at her.

"Ye bakwas nahin hai..aisa waakai main hua tha kal raat.."

"Agar hua bi tha tho tumme parva karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai! Tumhe koi haqq nahin hai mere mamlon main parne ka!" he finished. And he jumped out of bed, walking towards the bathroom. But something stopped him.

Sanam had caught his arm. "Mujhe haqq hai. Apki biwi hone ke naathe mujhe poora haqq hai apki takleef main aapka saath dena ka."

She walked in front of him, now releasing his arm. "Aahil aap pareshan honge isiliye aapko aisa kwaab ayaa hai. Aap mujhe batake apna dil halka kar saktein hain," she offered.

Aahil looked into her eyes and gave her a venomous stare. "You know what Sanam? Main tumme apne pareshani share karne ka haqq nahin dehta hoon. Aur jo takleef tumne mujhe dee hain uske ghaao tum zindagi bhur nahin bhar paoogi!" With that he stalked off into the bathroom as Sanam sat down on the bed, trying to figure out where she had gone wrong...



The part where Aahil wakes up with his face curtained by Sanam's hair...that part was inspired by a fellow Quboolian who had shared that very sentence on IF...I'm sorry I can't remember your name or the name of the post..it was long ago...you will know who you are if you read this FF...i guess i'm really not giving them proper credit for it...i just want to say that that part was not my own original idea..i liked it so i incorporated it into my story

hope you guys like this update...would like to match the pace of the actual story before school starts! comment please!

Edited by arshi_luver - 11 years ago
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omg...loved it ..read both parts 15 & 16 and can't wait for the next update
Beautifully written :-) & as far as giving credit to the right person,
you totally won my respect.You really are an honest & rare individual. 😊

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