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@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awesome!!
Aww My Asad wants to help her like a normal husband!!!
Zoya being Miss Fix it All!!!
When she screamed i thought its a cockroach!!
but it turned out to be lizard!!! 🤣🤣

Edited by AsyaManeet - 11 years ago

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Chotu sa tiny miny request...😛

Please write more cute and pyaara pyaara OS😳

*Zoya's puppy face *

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

awesome Os Choco di

do write more of these

loved it

can we get just 1 more part plz

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ashlesha2

@ashlesha2

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA
Really cute and nice os...
Awesome. ..
Asad wants to help her...
Mrs khan got scared 😆 😆
Lizard .. 😆
Loved it..
Beautiful 😳 👏

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shonayaa

@shonayaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

It was very cute os
beautifully written

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: kabhi-forever
Yes this is the first os where I am going to comment 1st.

Ok now I am going to talk about your os.

Its so good.

I loved it.

You wrote it very nicely.

After a long time I read a os and its awesome.

Believe me its very nice.

Keep writing because u write very well.

Thank you. Your feedback means so much. Thanks for reading 😃

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA
Really cute and nice os...
Awesome. ..
Asad wants to help her...
Mrs khan got scared 😆 😆
Lizard .. 😆
Loved it..
Beautiful 😳 👏

Thanks Yashi I know hilarious tha and I enjoyed writing it too 😃

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
hahahhaha! Lizard 🤣

Just a thought- how about it being greater if it was a plastic one placed by Asad himself! 🤣

🤣

Okay my horns are getting highly visible now 🤣

Thanks sweets! It always feels great to read on AsYa <333

p.s. LAST LINES ☺️

Hahahaha ankie brilliant idea 🤣 Asad being extremely naughty here.

Your most welcome yaar, mein kissi aur couple pe likh hi nahi sakti yaar. Asya are in my blood now, addicted to them 😳

Yeah the last lines, romance ke bina koi abhi story complete kaise ho sakti hai 😉

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Is this the first time I'm reading you??

Wow.

I'd reckon Zoya is exactly the way you've portrayed her to be!

A warm and nice read on a Sunday evening!

Mwahhh!