ASYA OS : Mr. Khan Help Me - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Awesome!!
Aww My Asad wants to help her like a normal husband!!!
Zoya being Miss Fix it All!!!
When she screamed i thought its a cockroach!!
but it turned out to be lizard!!! 🤣🤣
Edited by AsyaManeet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Chotu sa tiny miny request...😛
Please write more cute and pyaara pyaara OS😳
*Zoya's puppy face *
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
awesome Os Choco di
do write more of these
loved it
can we get just 1 more part plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Really cute and nice os...
Awesome. ..
Asad wants to help her...
Mrs khan got scared 😆 😆
Lizard .. 😆
Loved it..
Beautiful 😳 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
It was very cute os
beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: kabhi-forever

Yes this is the first os where I am going to comment 1st.

Ok now I am going to talk about your os.




Its so good.


I loved it.


You wrote it very nicely.


After a long time I read a os and its awesome.



Believe me its very nice.




Keep writing because u write very well.



Thank you. Your feedback means so much. Thanks for reading 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Really cute and nice os...
Awesome. ..
Asad wants to help her...
Mrs khan got scared 😆 😆
Lizard .. 😆
Loved it..
Beautiful 😳 👏



Thanks Yashi I know hilarious tha and I enjoyed writing it too 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

hahahhaha! Lizard 🤣


Just a thought- how about it being greater if it was a plastic one placed by Asad himself! 🤣

🤣

Okay my horns are getting highly visible now 🤣

Thanks sweets! It always feels great to read on AsYa <333

p.s. LAST LINES ☺️



Hahahaha ankie brilliant idea 🤣 Asad being extremely naughty here.


Your most welcome yaar, mein kissi aur couple pe likh hi nahi sakti yaar. Asya are in my blood now, addicted to them 😳


Yeah the last lines, romance ke bina koi abhi story complete kaise ho sakti hai 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Is this the first time I'm reading you??



Wow.


I'd reckon Zoya is exactly the way you've portrayed her to be!



A warm and nice read on a Sunday evening!



Mwahhh!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: imcooldude

unress...
funny OS, full comedy
can't stop laughing


GREAT JOB!!!



Thanks Abi, glad you liked it 😃

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