Originally posted by: MrMrsAsyaKhan
Omg this was so so cute! Chocoberry right? This was so beautifully written it sent me into Asya land. I've never laughed, cried and blushed so much with one OS. Aww bless Asad, he wants to help her like all husbands. That is so so sweet of him and you portrayed his emotions so so well.
Even I was shocked with the three Khan's at her state, but then couldn't help but laugh when the lizard moved and she grabbed onto him. I was laughing along with everyone. Sighs. I fan-girled all over this OS. I miss Asya so much more after reading this.
Thank you for writing this. Absolutely loved it! I think I've read it three times now, I've just not had the time to leave a comment. Sorry!
Do write more lovely! This OS is too cute for words.
And the last line *blushes*
I'll be waiting to read about his fix of *cough cough*
Too cute <3
Yes thats ChocoBerry 😛. Thank you so much dear. Getting all this appreciation from you means so much to me. When i joined the forum you used to write Ek Nikaah Aisa Bhi and i was so in love with that story (still Am). so all this appreciation is even more special.
Thank you once again for your encouraging words 😊
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