#3 - AsYa/KaBhi FF : My Mental Love ! PART 10- 15 ! Link new thread ! - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
😊your story is awesome. i always look forward to its updates. update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Loved it so much this is only getting better and better
thanx for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
The sharing the ice-creame was cute and Asad not telling it.
Loved it when Zoya said she is going to have a baby. 😛
What happened afterwards was terrifying.
Poor Zoya... Can't really blame Najma though she was irresponsible but she is immature.
Great that Asad came by the right time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
this was a brilliant update!!!

Loved Zoya and Najma's bonding...

But hoping that najma isn't scolded too badly...

she did wrong but i still don't like to see her getting scoldings...!

Hopefully she'll understand Zoya's fears and not repeat the mistake...!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Superb update
zoya and najma cute scene
thank god zoya is fine
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
hay, Choti amazing update
loved it

thanX for PM
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Hayee!


From threatening the officer, the hug at the mall, Zoe not letting him go, the forehead kiss while tucking her into bed to asking Najma to explain, absolutely adored those scenes - you write AsYa beautifully.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Thanks alot for updating
i love today's dramatized update 😃

poor najma 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
hey i am new to this forum but i read ur story before it so good
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
I read last 4 chapters together and girl u r really fast in updating ,,
reminding me of my old days 😆
okie coming to the update !!
all four parts were amazing as usual and I am loving it soo far ❤️
soo they r married now and poor girl is having soo many problems ,,
I feel soo sad for her
but then Dr AAK is there with her which lightens my mood 😳😆
as I love drooling over him !!
last update was beautifully written !!
I just loved it !!
his all emotions and everything
Do update sooon will be waiting for ur pm !!

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