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Posted: 11 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: asyafreva

this was a brilliant update!!!

Loved Zoya and Najma's bonding...

But hoping that najma isn't scolded too badly...

she did wrong but i still don't like to see her getting scoldings...!

Hopefully she'll understand Zoya's fears and not repeat the mistake...!



Thanks Aashka ! 🤗 ❤️
I think i wont make Asad too harsh ! 😉
Oh yes ! That mistake she wont repeat ! 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: imcooldude

hay, Choti amazing update
loved it

thanX for PM
CONTINUE SOON


Thanks bhai ! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: p_s05

Hayee!


From threatening the officer, the hug at the mall, Zoe not letting him go, the forehead kiss while tucking her into bed to asking Najma to explain, absolutely adored those scenes - you write AsYa beautifully.


Awww thats so sweet !! 🤗 Thank you so much Prashni !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: nikhathfatima

hey i am new to this forum but i read ur story before it so good


Thanks dear ! I'm glad that my hardwork is being appreciated !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

I read last 4 chapters together and girl u r really fast in updating ,,

reminding me of my old days😆
okie coming to the update !!
all four parts were amazing as usual and I am loving it soo far❤️
soo they r married now and poor girl is having soo many problems ,,
I feel soo sad for her
but then Dr AAK is there with her which lightens my mood😳😆
as I love drooling over him !!
last update was beautifully written !!
I just loved it !!
his all emotions and everything
Do update sooon will be waiting for ur pm !!


Haha i'm on holidays thats why ! 😉 😆
Yeah her innocence breaks hearts because it relminds us of her past !
Dr. AAK sabka mood thik kar deta hai ! 😉 😆 haha me too ! All crazy droolers ! 😆
Thank you so much Aapi !! I'm glad you liked it !! 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: pragyakumar.15

<font size="4">Loved it totally...</font>

<font size="4">And the last line...</font>
<font size="4" color="#0000ff">"Ms. Najma Ahmed Khan, you have serious explanation to give !"</font>
<font size="4">Hahaha mast tha...</font>
<font size="4">Najma my dear, this time bhaijaan will not leave u ...</font>
<font size="4">God bless najma ahmed khan...</font>
<font size="4">Finally u updated haan...</font>
<font size="4">I thought u not gonna update till next thread...</font>
<font size="4">Btw did i tell u, that I'm totally in love with ur amazing stories and this one is my favourite...</font>
<font size="4">Dear continue soon...</font>
<font size="4">A real soon please...</font>
<font size="4">Good bless u...</font>


Haha thanks Anwesha !! 😆 ❤️
Lets see what is next for her ! 😉
Kar hi fiya update ! 😳 😆
Awww thats so sweet !! Thank you so much dear !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Bano, Excellent update sweets. Loved it. Poor najma in danger now.

The bonding Najma and Zoya shared wa so cute and Zoya's idea of the ice cream tubs was just too cute.

Asad's search was so well described. Loved every part of it.


Thank you so much Badi Bajijaan !! 🤗 ❤️ dekhte hain ke Asad kya keht hai ? 😉

Haha Zoya's idea was mine of my childhood for not getting scolded by mom ! 😆

I'm glad you liked it !! ❤️

Love u !! 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Amazing update...it gave me goosebumps😳...loved it to bits😳...update soon😃


Haha so sweet !! Thanks !! ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
amazing so goood continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it .. Like always
You are the BEST ... Please update soon 👏

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