ASYA (KaBhi) OS: 'I love the way they dance'

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Awesome!!
Loved it!!
Wish we could see KaBhi AsYa !!!...

Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you liked it!

I wish too! Our KaBhi as Asya were the bestest thing ever! <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: jazsidhu
wonderfull n fabulous...
luv it...
beautifully written...
thx fr the pm...

Thank you lovely! I'm glad you liked it <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Hey Sunshine,

You really wrote this at 5 in the morning? Wow..

Why are you calling it bad? I loved it.

Its so innocent & heart touching the way Asad admires her hair & her. I had begun to think that Asad had quit saying 'woh.. actually' & now says 'Zoya' as he kept chanting her name. But his words, that he loved how her hair danced, was sooo sweet. He really doesn't know how cute he is. Will you tell him on my behalf, that he's super cute.

I loved the eager & feisty Zoya a lot. She seemed to be so in control of her reactions but the only thing getting out of control was her desire for Asad.

AsYa were so free spirited in this, I mean there were no restrictions, misunderstandings or shyness holding them back. They were expressing themselves fully.

If this is what comes out at the end, I think you should begin writing at 5 am officially. Honestly. I loved it.

Love lots..

Hey beautiful <3

Yes I did because I'm a zombie and the most backwaas things go through my head at that time!

I am soo soo glad you liked it! Your comment means so so much di! Thank you for the kind words! Really appreciate it!

And LOOOL! I do all my writing at 5 am in the morning hence noone likes them and they're going to kill me soon for torturing them with rubbish!

AsYa were so free spirited in this, I mean there were no restrictions, misunderstandings or shyness holding them back. They were expressing themselves fully.

That's how I've always wanted to see my Asya. and I always wished that we could've seen something like this on TV.

Love you di, I'll message you my rants and update you on my mood swings <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
Awww.. That was such a beautiful OS!

Thank you beautiful! I'm glad you liked it <3 Thanks for always dropping your kind words. I do read the comments even though I never reply <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: p_s05
'You've watched my hair dance and fallen in love with me again, now, Mrs Khan wants to dance'

Beautiful!

Hello there beautiful familiar person who always leaves amazing comments behind on every piece of writing and makes me smile!

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for leaving your kind words behind <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
So very romantic!!!

Am in love!!

Dancinggg!

Hayyyeee!!

Amazing OS!! Love it!!

Mwahh

Heyy there beautiful!

Thank your for your lovely comment! I am soo glad that you liked this hopeless OS.

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
It was awesome

Thank you lovely! Glad you liked it!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: anopama
Nice one
Loved it
The amount of times he said her name😆

Miss Farooqui to Zoya, it'll take him some practicing to make sure he says it right 😉

Thank you lovely, glad you liked it <3

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-
Oh, that was beautiful. I absolutely adored it. <3

Wonderful job! :D

-Fari.

Hey Fari,

Long timeee?

I'm so glad you liked it beautiful. Thank you for your lovely comment <3

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Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Hey dear..
When r u updtng ur ff abbu.. ?
Plz do it soon..
Waiting...

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