SaAhil One Shot: Jealousy

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Beautiful...

Jealousy has never looked so sweet...😆

Looks like that precap moved a lot of us...😳

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Nice one! Aahil is burning in jealousy. He is confused and sulking. He is a treat! :)

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Mehreeeen

@SurbhikiPankhi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Now I don't normally read SaHil fanfictions but damn this was so good! 😳 You described his emotions so perfectly. -sigh-

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wonderfull n amazing...

luv it...

thx fr the pm...

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

God. its raining OSs here. I'm loving it. 😆

Jealousy. Such an interesting feeling, only to watch though, not to feel! 😆

Such a nice OS there, Candz. Is this what your name? 😳

So beautifully written and well portrayed. Aahil's turmoil and the conflicts were so well described, that one can't help but feel for this guy. He is in such a mess, that he would just pull out his hair, one day. Though I don't want coz his hairdo is SO DARN AWESOME😆

This unnamed feeling he is going through, seeing Rehaan getting close to HER, is driving him crazy, and this guy doesn't have a proper deal to deal with it. Talking about the shrewd businessman, are we? 😆

This is so good yo! Why this is an OS? Although its kinda completes here, still.

He is in love, baby!! SO MUCH IN LOVE! ❤️

Sigh!

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shilpaiyer

@shilpaiyer

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

it was awesome ... imagined as if real...loved it

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-Candz-

@-Candz-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: suds.
RESSS
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AHHH MAAH GAAWD THIS IS GAWJUS <33333

the jealousy trope is srsly one of mah faves and you played with it so perfectly here EEEPPS <333

sorry. too much squealing.

you need to write more of this.

or on SaHil. im fine with whichever 🤣

Aahil is such a grumpy turd in this 🤣

ugh. i need more.

come one. please. im begging. pls. PLEASE SISTAH.

Awww yay you liked it! Wasn't sure I would get the characterization down right because Rehan hasn't been flashed out enough in the show but I'm glad you liked it.

Not sure if I'll write another...the precap gave me inspiration. Desperately waiting for the episode.

OH I think Aahil will continue to be grumpy and in turmoil till he admits his feelings 😆

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-Candz-

@-Candz-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Oh wow!

You've done it again! Wowing us with your incredible words! The concept being from the show making it that more relatable. And damn you give excellent description on heavily surging whirlwind kind of emotions! And frustration! And all that jealousy!!

Apt title!

You write so very brilliantly, there's no turning back now. You gotta give us more SaHil.

I love Rehan here. Just like the show, though minimal, his presence make a hell of a difference! And excellent job with Lateef! ;)

That Aahil realises her hair that night is so awww!

Waiting for anything from you! Yes! Do update your stories, you're missed like anything!

Mwah mwah!

Awww thank you! My ego has gotten bigger with your wowing words 😆 (just kidding).I'm loving QH 2 more and more these days! I'll update my AsYa stories soon!

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-Candz-

@-Candz-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath
God. its raining OSs here. I'm loving it. 😆
Jealousy. Such an interesting feeling, only to watch though, not to feel! 😆
Such a nice OS there, Candz. Is this what your name? 😳

So beautifully written and well portrayed. Aahil's turmoil and the conflicts were so well described, that one can't help but feel for this guy. He is in such a mess, that he would just pull out his hair, one day. Though I don't want coz his hairdo is SO DARN AWESOME😆
This unnamed feeling he is going through, seeing Rehaan getting close to HER, is driving him crazy, and this guy doesn't have a proper deal to deal with it. Talking about the shrewd businessman, are we? 😆

This is so good yo! Why this is an OS? Although its kinda completes here, still.
He is in love, baby!! SO MUCH IN LOVE! ❤️
Sigh!

Definitely better to watch than to feel jealousy, it's really an ugly emotion.

My name is Candice but a lovely member nicknamed me Candz so I changed my UN to that. YOu can call me Candy!

Oh yes, he's very much internal thee days, I think trying to figure out what it all means and it being one-sided is bound to be frustrating esp. for ARI 😆

His hairdo is much better than how it started off, he looks so good these days! 😉

I really wanna see how things work out in this angle in the show. Wrote as an OS since it was new for me writing on characters other than Asad and Zoya.

I'm glad you like it! Thanks! 😳

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Bubbles_buttons

@Bubbles_buttons

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Awesome update, I like how u explained everything really well. I could actually imagine it vividly in my head. Keep it up!
I hope that today's episode goes something along those lines. Lol

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