SaAhil One Shot: Jealousy

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-Candz-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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sardeeeeeep

@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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AHHH MAAH GAAWD THIS IS GAWJUS <33333

the jealousy trope is srsly one of mah faves and you played with it so perfectly here EEEPPS <333

sorry. too much squealing.

you need to write more of this.

or on SaHil. im fine with whichever 🤣

Aahil is such a grumpy turd in this 🤣

ugh. i need more.

come one. please. im begging. pls. PLEASE SISTAH.

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

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Posted: 11 years ago

heya candz . good to rd a os on saahil . quite
a gud interpretation of the epi . interesting turn

in the serial

p.s - plz update asya story too

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful one! you were able to describe aahil's emotions perfectly :)

I hate it that they will be using poor Rehaan to make Aahil jealous. He would undoubtedly fall in love with her, and when she is taken away from him, will either turn negative or be heartbroken. Poor rehaan!😔

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Azraa

@Azraa01

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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved how well you described Ahil's emotions..
Beautiful OS

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-silentbang-

@-silentbang-

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Posted: 11 years ago

nice os
beautifully written
u have described aahil's emotion for sanam so well😊😊

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice we'll written

Ahil isa so jealous

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey Candy that was so good. I loved the way you have captured the emotions Aahil is experiencing. Brilliantly done 👏

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farz_parachute

@farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

Oh wow!

You've done it again! Wowing us with your incredible words! The concept being from the show making it that more relatable. And damn you give excellent description on heavily surging whirlwind kind of emotions! And frustration! And all that jealousy!!

Apt title!

You write so very brilliantly, there's no turning back now. You gotta give us more SaHil.

I love Rehan here. Just like the show, though minimal, his presence make a hell of a difference! And excellent job with Lateef! ;)

That Aahil realises her hair that night is so awww!

Waiting for anything from you! Yes! Do update your stories, you're missed like anything!

Mwah mwah!

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Superb!!
Well written!!
Ahil's emotions perfectly penned!!
thanks 4 pm

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