BROKEN WINGS - AsYa SS, chapter 7 updated,PG 85 (17/8) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
nice update but little confusing
asad story is so painful but hope he recover soon
dilshad and rashid , they are trying their best to make him happy and comfortable
but how come zoya doesn't remember the accident or asad
has she lost her memory or is it due to trauma
plz tell me
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Wht was that yaar...

Itna kvh hogayaaa

Ek hi part mein !!!!!!


How can sumone take dis !!!!!!!!




Hmphhh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Wow. Wht an updt 👏
It wwass amzng 😛 so beautifully written 😃
Nd I loved. D updt 😛


Aaaww my asad 😭 he went into coma 😭
Almost paralysis 😭
Poor dillu.. She was so heart broken.. Nd rashid tooo 😭
Its a sazaa to parents to see their children going through 😭

U wrote the prt very well 👏 I had tears in my eyes at the tym 😭



Nd zoya... Is she frgt asad r wht ??????
R thy ddnt met before ! I mean thy met in Paris only 😕
Aaahhh thy love each other r not ???? 🤢

Zoya k nikhaah nai karna tha.. Fir bhi ki.. Gaffur k wazaah se...
Who never loved her... 😡
Zeenat.. Woh kar bhi kya sakti thi

What's with shireen ??
Is she -ve..?
Y zoya feel weird around her.. When shireen treats her warmly..


Ohh my god... Nikhaah hogai 😭
Ab kya 😕 😕
Ayaan loves her.. But zoya doesn't...
Now wht ll he do with her 😕

Plz make asad fn soon 😭 dnt make suffer a lot...

Totally awesome updt..
I truly loved it 😊

Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
nice.
poor asad felt really bad for him
does zoya got amnesia.
to be frank i didnt expect u too make our nightmare(zoya -ayaan) true.
felt really bad.
wondering how asya will be together.
update soon
sorry if i hurt u.
i didnt mean it.may be it is imp for ur story.
sry again
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
unres on pg 8.
now I understood title meaning
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
very interesting..
I was hoping until the last minute that someone will come and stop the marriage.
felt bad for almost everyone in the story..
Will wait for the next one. Thanks for updating.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: kaussar

thanks Dear.. glad you liked the prologue..😃

And i see that you read chapter1 even before i could PM.. hope you liked it.😉


ur welcome
I liked it bt I'm sad
asad 😭 zoyaan 🤢
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Oh God Asad!!
Dilshad & Rashid being strong for him!!
Zoya got married to Ayaan 🤢
Asad lost his eyesight & paralyzed too!!
He can't walk!!
Good work
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
res
unres

what u did Kas dear😭
Asad ko major injuries honge i had hint of that😒
but Zoyaan ye toh imagine hi nahi kiya tha🤢
I m crying & heartbroken😭💔
& see here i m asking my frnds 2 read it
ab kya izzat rahegi meri😆
sab bolenge super sad story promote kar rahi hon😡


I loved d way u wrote Asad's side of story wid Dil Rash👏
i'll give u full marks 4 that⭐️
Doesn't Asya love each other if yes
Asad doesn't want Zoya 2 b wid him cuz he' might feel his physically unfit 4 her
& Zoya lost her memory in stress i guess after d accident😕
& Taklu took advantage of that😡
I mean Zainub was repetitively asking her but she still go ahead wid Nikhah😡why she wanted 2 please Taklu😡
When d Sr scene started i felt like shouting Don't dare touch Zoya 😡😡
Ab mujhe nahi pata main kya karon I m sad & now my frnds will kill me 4 recommending sad story😆 basically Zoyaan story which every quboolian hate d most😡
why u did it😭
agli baar se main koi story promote nahi karungi
Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
its seems intresting please continue and thanX for PM

And, this SS Broken Wings:
is it this story about "AsYa" or "zoyaan"? (can't figure-out reading first chapter)
Edited by imcooldude - 11 years ago

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