BROKEN WINGS - AsYa SS, chapter 7 updated,PG 85 (17/8) - Page 22

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Alone111 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awesomely awesome upDT
Superbly written..
Lvrd it a lot...

Thy r childhood friends !!!
I ddnt expected is...

Nd zoya has a crush on him !!! Awww
But he ddnt recognized her...

Nd the kiss was beautiful...

Lvly prt

Continue soon
Edited by gowtu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
so asya are childhood firend
and they met once again on trip, asad is such a sweetheart
and asya😳
hope zoya remember all this soon
continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
a beautiful n a long wala update...
love u for this...
🤗
so this is how they met...
zoya going for the trip around Europe n asad happens to b present at the same place in search of peace of mind...
both felt connected to each other at first glance only...
n true to their guess ... they knew each other from a long time before...
they were friends since childhood n neighbours vd zoya being asads princess...
where asad had made it big in his life, zoya had neva forgotten him...
and asads being a famous personality nva let his image get blurred from her mind...
n now wn they met... they spend quality time together...
with asad tagging along wherever zoya wanted to go...
n then zoyas supposed last day there made the situation intense n they kissed...
asad asked zoya not to leave n she obliged...
so excited to kno wt happened next...
continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice
I want them together soon
plz update soon
kaussar thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Amulya9

wowww...wat a lovely update kaussar ...

thanq so much fr d long update ...
flashback is awesome...
i liked their checking out part 😉
omg ..they r childhood buddies ...😛lovely ...
aww zoe is always fascinated by him ...😳
u showed us so many places buddy ...👏
n the KISS was so romantic ,...😳...i love d way he always tagged wth her 😳
i just loved his last dialogue ..zoe dnt go ..stay wth me ...❤️
princess n Mr.Movie ki love story mujhe qubool hai..
really cant wait fr the next chapter ... update soon ❤️
would love 2 see how ASYA vl overcome their problems...in d present

Thanks Amu.😃.. and you are welcome.
glad you liked the checking out part..😆... but on a serious note that was to show that they were attracted to each other and drawn to each other even on first sight.. and they felt something on a deeper level because of their childhood bond.
Loved writing about the places because France is a country i love and perhaps best setting for a romance.. so chose it.

Don't go... stay with me is a heart felt cry from him.. that moment he couldn't bear the thought of her going away.

Lets see what they face now and how they overcome it.. i think you will like it.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: imcooldude

hay, thanX for PM&full chapter of "AsYa"
I loved it.

Hope u'll unite AsYa at the end.

And, Kausar also update "SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy"

you are welcome.😃 .. story will have a happy ending... don't worry.

Will try to give an update of SCATF also.. i am actually trying to finish this story first as this is an SS and will be short.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice ss
read al in one go
hope everything go well soon and asya meet
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

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unres

Kausaar buddy it was outstanding updt👏

Thanks Jas.
so it was no one's flashback
u r evil in this Zoya ka fb bana deti na😭😡

haha.. yea i'm evil.. you know that already..😆. ..but i am good too because next part of their past will come as a flashback... so your wish will be fulfilled.

Asya were d same hotel 😊
both saw eachother at d pool & were secretly checking out each other 😆
Zoya recognized Asad but he couln't😲
Zoya was 1st disappointed 2 know that but than told him😉

yea but then it was understandable as he has never seen her since they were kids.. their family are now not on talking terms and they did not have any contact.
Asya were childhood frnds 😃
Asad called her princess & Zoya feels he's her prince😛

yea Prince and princess ki kahani was like a fairy tale till they met with the accident.
Asad starts spending time wid her & took her 4 her trips😊
D whole ambiance was so romantic

glad you loved it.😊
Finally on d last day they Kissed ☺️
& Asad asked her 2 stay ❤️
it was wonderfully written😃

thanks.😃

U have brilliant Talent Kaussar 👏
I m happy that i know u & have d privilege 2 read ur stories😃

Aww... i am flattered.😃

Love u lots 4 writing such beautiful stories🤗
Now i can feel proud 2 promote ur stories😎
Its worth all d promotion & appreciation👏

hehe.😆... but on a serious note, i am really happy you appreciate my work and have even promoted it.. you are a lovely girl.

PS- Plz updt atleast a chotu part of SC&TF😃
Will try to update a part of it soon... its just that i need to switch the mentality and mood of writing from one to other story as both stories are very different in every way.. they way the characters think and do things are very different in both story.. so its difficult to write two together by changing my own thinking... but will try.😃
PSS- & tell me ur real name if u don't mind cuz it feels awkward 2 call u Kaussar😳
will PM you... but why do you feel awkward to call Kaussar?.. then call Kausar.. Kausar is a real name and in a way a part of my name.. thats why i use it here.😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaussar

thanks Dear..😃.. really glad you loved it and found it romantic and hot... tried to make it a special update in every way... after all it was how AsYa met and fell in love.

yea she stayed back.. how can she leave him and go away to roam around europe after what happened and after he asked her that way?.😉

will try to update soon but may take few days.😃



No worries. I understand writing takes time 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow waht an awesome chapter
u wrote so well
and the last kiss 😳
so they are going to be together for some more time
cant wait for the next chapter

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