BROKEN WINGS - AsYa SS, chapter 7 updated,PG 85 (17/8)

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#201

wowww...wat a lovely update kaussar ...

thanq so much fr d long update ...

flashback is awesome...

i liked their checking out part 😉

omg ..they r childhood buddies ...😛lovely ...

aww zoe is always fascinated by him ...😳

u showed us so many places buddy ...👏

n the KISS was so romantic ,...😳...i love d way he always tagged wth her 😳

i just loved his last dialogue ..zoe dnt go ..stay wth me ...❤️

princess n Mr.Movie ki love story mujhe qubool hai..

really cant wait fr the next chapter ... update soon ❤️

would love 2 see how ASYA vl overcome their problems...in d present

Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Amazing update kausar. It was so romantic so full of their love and oh so hot 😳

So she stays back with him. Dying to read what happens next

Please update soon.

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: potternerd
Nice story

Gaffur is such a pain 😡

And omg ayaan and zoya get married 😲

She's lost her memory 😲

And gaffur took advantage of it !!!

Hope asad recovers soon

And yay some asya action in next update 😳

Thanks... glad you liked the story so far.. yea ghaffur is such a wicked man... lets see how things go.😊

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

hay, thanX for PM&full chapter of "AsYa"
I loved it.

Hope u'll unite AsYa at the end.

And, Kausar also update "SantaClaus &Tooth Fairy"

Edited by imcooldude - 11 years ago

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars
RES RES RES
UNRESSS!!

I am so damn lucky! I was gonna sleep after dropping a complaint here...but you updated!!!!! A BIGGG thanks Kaussar!🤗

The whole update was superbly awesome, cute hot and sexy at the same time!!!!!👏👏👏

They were childhood friends...now how cute is that!

And the next time they see each other it's all sparks flying!!

The kiss and the tight embrace were OH-SO-ROMANTIC!!!! ☺️

Update soon!🤣

You are awesomeee!!!❤️

Okay I will go sleep now. Good night!😳

Oh you were going to complain..😆... glad i was able to update before you did...😆... thanks Dear... really happy you liked the update and found it romantic and much more.😆

Yea they were childhood buddies and now its all sparks..😊
So did you like the Movie star cum Pianist Asad khan more after this update?
sleep tight.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet
Amazing part!
AsYa staring!
They recognized each other!!
Awesome part
...
They love each other!!

thanks Maneet.😃.. glad you loved the part.. yea they fell in love.. and their love will overcome everything.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: life4me
awesome update. Can't wait for next update.
Continue soon.

thanks.. glad you liked it... next update might take a while but will try to update ASAP.😃

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taznim

@kaussar

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Amazing update kausar. It was so romantic so full of their love and oh so hot 😳
So she stays back with him. Dying to read what happens next

Please update soon.

thanks Dear..😃.. really glad you loved it and found it romantic and hot... tried to make it a special update in every way... after all it was how AsYa met and fell in love.

yea she stayed back.. how can she leave him and go away to roam around europe after what happened and after he asked her that way?.😉

will try to update soon but may take few days.😃

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#209

res

unres

Kausaar buddy it was outstanding updt👏

so it was no one's flashback

u r evil in this Zoya ka fb bana deti na😭😡

Asya were d same hotel 😊

both saw eachother at d pool & were secretly checking out each other 😆

Zoya recognized Asad but he couln't😲

Zoya was 1st disappointed 2 know that but than told him😉

Asya were childhood frnds 😃

Asad called her princess & Zoya feels he's her prince😛

Asad starts spending time wid her & took her 4 her trips😊

D whole ambiance was so romantic

Finally on d last day they Kissed ☺️

& Asad asked her 2 stay ❤️

it was wonderfully written😃

U have brilliant Talent Kaussar 👏

I m happy that i know u & have d privilege 2 read ur stories😃

Love u lots 4 writing such beautiful stories🤗

Now i can feel proud 2 promote ur stories😎

Its worth all d promotion & appreciation👏

PS- Plz updt atleast a chotu part of SC&TF😃

PSS- & tell me ur real name if u don't mind cuz it feels awkward 2 call u Kaussar😳

Edited by jas91 - 11 years ago

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Preeti

@FaultInMyStars

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: kaussar
Oh you were going to complain..😆... glad i was able to update before you did...😆... thanks Dear... really happy you liked the update and found it romantic and much more.😆

Yea they were childhood buddies and now its all sparks..😊
So did you like the Movie star cum Pianist Asad khan more after this update?
sleep tight.😃

Yes of course he is hawwwt, handsome, talented, not a prude and he is damn attracted to my Zoya,he made her time so special, took good care of her and even kissed her in a starry night! What more can I ask of him?🤣

He is a STARRR!!!⭐️