BROKEN WINGS - AsYa SS, chapter 7 updated,PG 85 (17/8) - Page 105

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Posted: 11 years ago

Yeh kiya ho raha hai yahan pe.😆... i guess i have to make a new thread for next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

ress

unres

Brilliant chapeter Kitu👏
Finally Asya met🥳
very very emotional part😭

thanks Jas... and sorry for late reply this time.. have been very busy last 2 - 3 days.
Stress effected Dillu & she had 2 take break

Correct me if i m wrong but i feel Radil also might have started taking Asad as a burden i m not saying totally cuz ofcourse they r his parents & they love him dearly but i have seen many times that when such cases happens when d person becomes totally dependent on u & can't do anything on there own ppl start getting tired of it & start thinking of them as a burden. I m not saying completely but i feel Radil also a tiny winy bit think of Asad as a burden😕
I know what you mean and it does happen in reality... but here no Radil never felt that he is a burden... and actually Dilshad was refusing to leave Asad and go even when she herself knew that she was not well and needed to rest.. And actually Jas here it is the opposite.. Dilshad loved and cared for Asad too much and was with him all the time and in the process she had not even allowed him to be independent and do things on his own as much as possible so that he would learn to be independent... i haven't highlighted that part clearly yet but that is whats happening her and Zoya will do the opposite so that he learns to be independent once again.

Asad heard them talk & decides 2 put them at ease & lied & told them 2 go😭
He was feeling helpless but doesn't wanna b burden on them
Yea he felt that he was a burden to them but even he actually knew that his parents never felt that way.

He didn't have d strength 2 decide what 2 do wid d apartment he has so many dreams about🥺
Yea..
Zoya finally told d truth 2 Ayaan & he was hurt😳
Asad was suffocating in d apartment cuz he was remembering Zoya😭
D fb was very nice they were so happy then
Yea they had started a perfect life and then everything shattered.

Zoya finally came face 2 face wid Asad & was shattered 2 see his state💔
As expected he tried 2 remain cold wid Zoya yea.
she told her side of d story & Asad melted cuz he can't see his Zoya cry😃
& asked him that they'll remain 2gather now🤗 cuz he did his part by protecting her now its her turn😃.. yea their love is mutual and both will always take care of each other but Asad being the gentleman feels its his duty to take care of her and not vise vasa.
Zoya knew about his blindness also😲.. yea. it was written in the newspaper regarding all his injuries..

she didn't told Ayaan part , what will b Asad's reaction i know he wont doubt Zoya but i think he will think that as he's handicap now so Ayaan will b better 4 Zoya & will ask Zoya 2 move on wid Ayaan or b extra cold 2wards her 2 make her hate him😭💔.. no don't worry that won't happen.. actually i don't want to prolong this story too much.. if i wanted that, then could have taken that route.. but this won't have MUs like that between AsYa.
Zoya- Guffi confrontation is aso remaining😉
Brilliant job👏
I want Asya bass😆

Thanx 4 dedicating this chapter 2 spamming partners🤗 you are welcome.😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinks2911

Brilliant one Kaussar.


Finally they meet..

Poor Asad feels he does not deserve her..

Love how Zoya convinced him..

These two are just perfect for each other..

Continue soon and thanks for the pm

thank you Dear.. glad you loved the chapter... yea they are definitely made for each other..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cale

brilliant update
i felt so bad for the two souls...asad and zoya
how much they suffered because of destiny
i felt bad for asad when he lied to his parents
"So what Asad... what if you are no longer in a position to take care of me and protect me? You have done that earlier and it's now my turn to care for you... isn't that what marriage and love and companionship means?...
i just loved this line as u beautifully described the meaning of love and marriage
update soon

thanks Dear.😃.. yea they have suffered so much... but the good thing is they are once again with each other..
Thanks.. happy to know that you loved that line.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

wonderfull n fabulous...

amazing..
luv it...
zoya n asad meet each other...
n spoke about their feelings...
ayaan also know the truth nw...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...


Thank you Jaz.. glad you loved the update..😃.. yea Ayaan also knows the truth.. lets see what he does now.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kaussar


Yeh kiya ho raha hai yahan pe.😆... i guess i have to make a new thread for next update.


no guesses kaussar... nxt thread to banta hai boss...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sasir

aww

awesome
heart-touching
my heart went for asya
n I feel a lil bad for ayan too
plz update soon

Thanks Dear... glad you loved the update.. will try to update in 2 days time.. very busy these days.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
pm ka kya hua... hum to wait krte reh gaye!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50


no guesses kaussar... nxt thread to banta hai boss...

LOL... Heenu you partners really have the energy for this.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

pm ka kya hua... hum to wait krte reh gaye!!!

Acha... have been too busy... will PM.. But Jas is not telling hers na... so even i won't..😆... joking... if you really want to know i will tell you.😊

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