AsYa SS: Pirates In Love *completed* - Page 26

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

Loved Loved Loved the update.. 😃

None of them want Zoya in their cabin? !! 😆🤣

She is forced to deck with Asad.. 😆

she has to annoy him by her non-stop jibber jabber.. 🤣

Asad "I'll throw you into the sea if you keep talking."🤣

Hahahaa... Loved the way she was checking him out and Asad kept say stop staring...

Loved when Arjun apologized for his rudeness.. 😳

He seems to have a tradition going on of father's teaching their son's the sword fights.. 😃

Zoya fell of the bed and didn't even realize?? 😆 she's one heavy sleeper..

She seemed so lost when he was teaching her to steer.. 🤣

She grew up in an orphanage and works to be a support to the orphanage!! 🤗

She's a gem of a person.. 😃👏

Oh god!! Asad why do you need to get angry for that.. 😡

You want to share about yourself.. Share.. If not.. then ignore... Why do you need blow your head over it..??😕

Now what's up Jack Sparrow?? 😕

Originally posted by: imcooldude

Res
unres ..,
sorry for being late&thanX for PM
I enjoied reading it.


fab. parts:
no one ready to share room with Zoya.

Zoya annoying Asad by her non-stop jibber
jabber..
Asad "I'll throw you into the sea if you
keep talking." 🤣🤣🤣
Loved the way she was checking
him out and Asad kept say stop staring...

Awsome start
CONTINUE SOON

Originally posted by: fairyshah

aww pirates. ..
what a start
fresh n different idea
titally amazing
aww arjun bhi. is it our arjun
thnks for pm

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

This is my New Favourite! ❤️

Originally posted by: kreya204

Fab!!!
Asad allowed her to stay!!
Nw he has to share his cabin with her!
All the moments was grt!!!
Arjun n zoya patch up!!
N haider is sweet!
N jack sparrow!!! Gosh! Can i love this guy more than i do!!
His dialogue of his rum being his first love was soo goood!!
N zoya is an orphan! 😭 bt as gratitude she works n helps the orphanage!
She is a strong person!
She also has some deep thots!
N jack sparrow enters with the dramatic effects!
I guess he saw the place after long so this weird reaction!
Continue soon!
I'll b waiting!!

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Very nice story. With an interesting concept.
Its more interesting for me cause my favourite asya and cpt jack sparrow r here.
Love the update.
Waiting for next parts to c how asya relation progress.
Thanks for pm.
Sorry for late.
❤️ Raj

Originally posted by: CrazyKSGlover

Amazing update
And it was really funny...😆
Plz update sooonish

Originally posted by: Surish

Those pirates are very hilarious indeed! Excellent job I must say! My eyes are welled up due to excess laughter. Such moments of vivacity, hilarity and alacrity will keep me in shape!

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

beautiful wala update ...
loved it...
i feel sab bipolar hai 😆
bechari zoya...
one sec they r good n other sec they r scolding n glaring at her ...
continue soon ..

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Asad supported her & caption announced that she will stay with asad
She cleaned boat & asad praised her
She shared her life with asad & wanted to know abt him
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm